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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 128)

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Beautiful
Loved every bit of it <3

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Posted: 30 April 2013 at 3:33am | IP Logged
nice!!!

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Good one :-)

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Hi!! It has been a while since I have been in IF (I can't believe I was able to stay away for this longLOL)!
 
I had read one chapter of Silent Symphony before I left, and I just had to read this when I came back. This was a brilliant TS!! I really really liked it a LOT!
 
I especially liked the last paragraph on the second chapter and the title of this TS is just perfect!
 
I really like the pace of this story as well, and Arnav and Khushi were so well depicted. Both their pov's were so nice and it was a pleasure to read!!
 
Awesome job, as always (I read the last chapter twice already)!
 
I am off now to read MKM-2!!!
 
Thank you so much for the pms!
 

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Beautiful...loved it...one of the best Arnav-Khushi stories i've read...

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Speechless!!! I don't know what to say.. Its one of the most beautifully and wonderfully written piece I have come across. I have been a silent reader on IF, stalling likes and comments for a later time, which eventually doesn't come.. But i just had to do it today immediately after reading it.

I just loved how Arnav describes and eventually compares them for himself.
"Bubbly Lavanya was like a
cascading river, who broke the
barriers of his heart and made
her way inside it and later
outside of it at HER own will.
Whereas reserved Khushi was
like a quite lake which invited
him, encouraged him to come to
itself and let his heart out to her
on HIS own."

And then the way Arnav answers Khushi why he loves her was just amazing.
"'There is no simple answer to
this Khushi and you know
my skill set with words is
practically non-existent. But
I'll try my best. I love you
because you decided to hold
me when I was literally
falling apart. Because of who
you are, and what you make
me feel when I am with you.
I feel like we have our own
inside circle where no one
else is allowed. There I am
most important to you, and
you are most precious to me,
and the rest of the world &
everyone else comes second.
I love your wit, the way you
make dadi laugh. I love when
you dance in the kitchen
thinking that no one is
watching you. I love when
you discuss your thoughts
and problems with me, even
when it is not related to me.
It makes me feel that I have
some sort of exclusive right
to protect you, counsel you.
And I have fallen in love with
the shy beautiful women
who stands by
me patiently while I discuss
business at parties, and I feel
happy when you try to take
interest in things I like and
not label them as boring. I
have started living for
this belonging you weave
into our relationship, by just
being you. By accepting me
as I am '".
I so wish I could have such a confession for myself in reality. I know I am day dreaming a tad bit too much.

Then there was Khushi's heatfelt confession.
"I realized my
true feelings for you when
one Navratri I found myself
praying in earnest to
Goddess that either your
business goes bankrupt or
your face gets ugly
somehow so that all those
girls stop running behind
you. And when no one will
want a penniless or ugly you,
I will step in your life and
save the day. That was when
I realized that your money or
your handsomeness had
stopped mattering to me.
And it kind of hinted to me
that I might have truly fallen
in love with you".
That was just so sweet.

I really really loved this TS a lot more than I can explain im words.

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Ms.Raizada IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
A wonderful story di. . . It was simply gr8. M really sorry for coming on this late. I know must be tired of my excuses. . !! But sachi sachi had exams. . A fab story. . Gr8 thinking. . And from the start till the end. . Khushi having crush arnav getting divorced. . Khushi moving on. . Arnav khushi getting married . . The emotions they felt. . The way you described everything was just so perfect. Very true. . Its not always u need someone opposite to you all you need is a person who will be there with you all through life.. Sometimes silent communications speak volume then what words can do. M in love with this story . . Hats off to you. Too gr8. . M going to read it again. . Muuhax. . Thank for writing this. Thanks for taking time to write. . Love ya. . Waiting for more. . And do update making khushi mine soon. . Waiting. . Tc. . !!

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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Its beautiful !! Loved it

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