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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 117)

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
I REGRET being VERY LATE to read this TS. I regert it big time.
 
This was one of the best Uniquely different Concept that I have EVER read on Arnav-Khushi.
 
It was way too Beautiful for me to even write it down. I am no good with Words like You. But will try to say what I felt after reading it.
 
All you stories have Your AURA of writing. You have that special touch to describe the most complicate emotion ever so brilliantly.
 
I liked this Witty, introvert Khushi. Girls need Not be bubbly everytime. Couples need Not be opposites everytime.
 
I am sorry to include this, I didn't find Lavanya entirely wrong in this TS. She was different and her expectations for life were different. She may be wrong little but Not entirely. It was just that She & Arnav weren't the match. They hadn't had that companionship which Arnav-Khushi had.
 
Arnav needed someone to accept him like how she was & Khushi.. I don't what to say. She was wonderfully portrayed throughout. Too beautiful her persona was. I so much liked her to be like this for a change. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this Khushi of yours.
 
For me, It was Excatly like Arnav said, He & Lavanya were Not meant to be Whereas He & Khushi is meant to be Forever! They shared Symphony.
 
At the End, eyes were moist.  Arnav's such a sweet confession & Khushi's teasing. ClapI am so glad that today I took out time to read it. I am so glad to have landed up on this three-shot.Smile
 
Thanks Anony_mous for writing this BEAUTIFUL TS. Kudos to you. Loved it very much. Big smile

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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged
That was a soul-stirring SS. Loved it. This Kushi is perfect for Arnav. Your reasoning about her character and how it is in symphony with ARnav's made sense. Loved the work. Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 27 April 2013 at 5:10am | IP Logged
That was just so beautiful.

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Posted: 28 April 2013 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
ooo...i just luvvvd it...i lyk ur khushi n arnav better...most stories just picturise them as love sick puppies who cant keep their hands off each other...dis was a welcome change...awesome...:-)

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Posted: 29 April 2013 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Beautiful
Loved every bit of it <3

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Hi!! It has been a while since I have been in IF (I can't believe I was able to stay away for this longLOL)!
 
I had read one chapter of Silent Symphony before I left, and I just had to read this when I came back. This was a brilliant TS!! I really really liked it a LOT!
 
I especially liked the last paragraph on the second chapter and the title of this TS is just perfect!
 
I really like the pace of this story as well, and Arnav and Khushi were so well depicted. Both their pov's were so nice and it was a pleasure to read!!
 
Awesome job, as always (I read the last chapter twice already)!
 
I am off now to read MKM-2!!!
 
Thank you so much for the pms!
 

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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Beautiful...loved it...one of the best Arnav-Khushi stories i've read...

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Speechless!!! I don't know what to say.. Its one of the most beautifully and wonderfully written piece I have come across. I have been a silent reader on IF, stalling likes and comments for a later time, which eventually doesn't come.. But i just had to do it today immediately after reading it.

I just loved how Arnav describes and eventually compares them for himself.
"Bubbly Lavanya was like a
cascading river, who broke the
barriers of his heart and made
her way inside it and later
outside of it at HER own will.
Whereas reserved Khushi was
like a quite lake which invited
him, encouraged him to come to
itself and let his heart out to her
on HIS own."

And then the way Arnav answers Khushi why he loves her was just amazing.
"'There is no simple answer to
this Khushi and you know
my skill set with words is
practically non-existent. But
I'll try my best. I love you
because you decided to hold
me when I was literally
falling apart. Because of who
you are, and what you make
me feel when I am with you.
I feel like we have our own
inside circle where no one
else is allowed. There I am
most important to you, and
you are most precious to me,
and the rest of the world &
everyone else comes second.
I love your wit, the way you
make dadi laugh. I love when
you dance in the kitchen
thinking that no one is
watching you. I love when
you discuss your thoughts
and problems with me, even
when it is not related to me.
It makes me feel that I have
some sort of exclusive right
to protect you, counsel you.
And I have fallen in love with
the shy beautiful women
who stands by
me patiently while I discuss
business at parties, and I feel
happy when you try to take
interest in things I like and
not label them as boring. I
have started living for
this belonging you weave
into our relationship, by just
being you. By accepting me
as I am '".
I so wish I could have such a confession for myself in reality. I know I am day dreaming a tad bit too much.

Then there was Khushi's heatfelt confession.
"I realized my
true feelings for you when
one Navratri I found myself
praying in earnest to
Goddess that either your
business goes bankrupt or
your face gets ugly
somehow so that all those
girls stop running behind
you. And when no one will
want a penniless or ugly you,
I will step in your life and
save the day. That was when
I realized that your money or
your handsomeness had
stopped mattering to me.
And it kind of hinted to me
that I might have truly fallen
in love with you".
That was just so sweet.

I really really loved this TS a lot more than I can explain im words.

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