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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 109)

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Part 1: 

So there for a moment i was sure that you had a reserved arnav and a chirpy, cheerful khushi who had taken a plunge in the bonds of marriage and were unsuccessful in the 1st innings so maybe this OS was all about starting once again and giving their marriage a 2nd shot.  
I was shocked to read that all along it was actually La and not khushi.  
Well you are really good at this.  You really had some awesome twist going on there.

I like this khushi who is just another normal ordinary girl who has been carrying a torch for a man for the last 15 and is suffering from the pain of unrequited love.  I enjoyed this story where no khushi did not fall into his arms suddenly but always was a part of his life but from a distance. 
I also liked the 'dadi' you got for us here who was playing cupid for these two.  
It was also refreshing to read about a khushi who doesn't want to marry somebody even if the person is the love of her life just to give into 'dadi's emotional blackmail. 
Good to see khushi's mother supportive of khushi's decision.

In short intrigued by the story you have going here...

Liza


Edited by kondhili - 16 April 2013 at 4:45am

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Beautiful and mind blowing update, from start to finish it was written brilliantly and exceptionally well. Awww loved the teasing at the start Arnav removing the pillows and sleeping close to Khushi and he even said 'I love you', Khushi was so over whelmed that Arnav had finally confessed his love, something she had waited to hear for many years, loved both there confessions to each other, there feelings and emotions were written so beautifully. I loved the last paragraph which you had written as Arnav's thought;

"Symphony is harmony of the music of life. And a silent symphony is one when two hearts beat in tandem. When two people are aware of just each other in a room full of crowd. When two pair of eyes can hold a lengthy conversation. When disagreements are resolved before they disturb the tempo of life. When physical love is a mere extension of trust you have placed in your spouse. When making love is actually what it spells as, making love. Because you create a little more love between yourselves every time. A romantic symphony their lives would be,"

Beautiful and very meaningful words, I loved this story from start to finish, each update has been a fabulous read. Thanks for the PM xx 

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Chapter 2: 

I was intrigued when this chapter started i actually thought that you started it with the coffee at the hospital cafe and suddenly here khushi was talking about serving dinner to arnav, i clearly had a what the expression on my face and was pleasantly suprised and pleased to read that actually you had moved 3 mths from that night at the cafeteria and actually went back to read the 1st part again refreshed with this knowledge and the conversation all made sense.  

This i thought was sheer brilliance in writing. I enjoyed reading about arnav's silent journey into falling in love with khushi.  Also liked the fact that he was not in denial about how important khushi was becoming in his life.  The companionship that they find in each other was just brilliantly portrayed and written. Also at the same time enjoyed reading that this arnav is also mesmerized by khushi in a saree and her open hair.LOL
So you managed to give a different avatar to Payalji here i am so glad that you did it. 

Brilliant update once again.

Liza



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Chapter 3:  

'Khushi, I love you" very simple plain and correct.  i am so glad that you did not do a 'I love you dammit' here.  The simple declaration suits the arnav of silent symphony who fell in love with khushi in silent companionship.  

Khushi's thoughts as arnav declares his love for her was written very nicely.  I could so understand her need to have a good cry when her hero for the last 15 yrs finally admits or acknowledge her value in his life. 
Khushi's insecurity in arnav suddenly declaring his love for khushi was also portrayed brilliantly. For a person who was not good with words arnav did a damn good job of declaring his innermost feelings to khushi as pointed out rightly by her. 

Symphony is harmony of the music of life. And a silent symphony is one when two hearts beat in tandem. Beautifully written words which were aptly used in the given scenario. 

Loved the update.  Don't know if this is the last update that is going to come for this but i so want to read a part 4 or an epilogue to have a final glimpse into arnav's and khushi's happy life in the future.

Excellent story and i am so going to read all that you have written.Star

Liza




Edited by kondhili - 16 April 2013 at 5:08am
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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
wow..
it was simply superb..
i truly enjoyed reading it..
love the way you portrayed their feelings and KHUSHIs insecurities..

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Oh man he gave her a right heart attack for sure
Come on first getting so close to her physically which sure had her confused
And then wishing her for the anniversary she had forgotten
Wow didn't take him too long to realise he loves her
And this was something she had given up on
But he proved her and himself wrong
Boy am I glad that it happened
Though khushi wasn't able to believe it
It seemed she was dreaming of it
Now can you really blame her no not really
It did seem bit unrealistic
Him confessing
So much so she needed time to think what this confession meant
She sure figured out what it meant and that she could never ever stop loving him
While Arnie thought he lost his chance with her
Nothing could be further from the truth my man
How they both realised they were in love with one another was so beautiful right
Finally they got what the deserved each other
It sure was some symphony right
Cheers for pm
Shall look forward for more of these soon

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Beautiful ending. Loved his confession and how Khushi loved him despite his wealth and looks. Liked how they found peace with eachother.
Khushi's reaction after hearing his confession was lovely and natural.

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Sweetheart you gave such a beautiful conclusion to a beautiful story. Arnav's confession of love and his explaination for it was mind blowing.

especially his honesty in saying that he confessed his love only when he actually fell in love , not before, since before, it would have been a lie.
 
Loved how u have described khushi's character. So much in love yet so dignified. And even after arnav's confession comes, she doesnt just melt away having won over her love of soo many years but thinks rationally and wants to make sure arnav has the right reasons for loving her and it is not just an attraction or a feeling thats come out of just habit and togetherness since she was his wife and they were married.
 
Beautiful update. God bless you

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