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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 108)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
it was simply a superb update...Smile
their dialogues touched my heart.
thanks 4 d pm

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Omg what a lovely update :) like amazing the way they were so open about their feelings just great :) thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Just read all three parts and thought it was really amazing and very well written.

There were so many aspects about this story that stuck out. I really liked how you detailed how Arnav realized he placed limits on what he felt was beautiful...and if he ventured outside the box a little, he would have realized there was more out there. Also, what he thought would lead him to a perfect life betrayed him, and what he found with Khushi, who he didn't even give a second thought to, was much butter than his so called perfect life before his divorce. I know I'm rambling a little, but I can't form a coherent thought, hope you get what I'm trying to say though!

I just loved the way you described Khushi's confession of love for Arnav, it was just too sweet!

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:04am | IP Logged

Fabulous update & thanks for the PM Smile

 

Khushi taken back on finding her husband so close & realizing that it wasn't a dream & moreover startled on discovering that he wasn't asleep but holding her close to him as much as possible not willing to give her space to even move an inch away from him Blushing Blushing Blushingwas laid down beautifully

 

Khushi thinking that her dream of being proposed by the man she loved had actually happened in reality just a few moments back & shuffling between her mind & heart but listening to her heart as always reflected on the amount of love she had for him in her heart all these years Heart

 

Arnav broken down on hearing that she didn't need more time to think over accepting his love or not , certain that she had rejected him & deciding that he was devoid of being loved & then giving plain answers to her was well framed Clap

 

Khushi placing her plate of queries in front of him regarding his divorce & the reason as to why & when he realized his love for her & Arnav opening up to her in a genuine manner had indeed closed the distance between the two souls who wanted to be loved by the other was penned down astoundingly 

 

And when no one will want a penniless or ugly you, I will step in your life and save the day.

                       This statement of Khushi was admirable Thumbs Up

 

Arnav understanding that he had missed on the wonderful woman who was actually meant to fill his life with vibrancy but instead he had ignored her for so long was lovely

 

The symphony between two hearts was beautifully expressed through this three shot Hug Loved all the three updates.




Edited by fleurs - 16 April 2013 at 11:05am

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Seriously u are just great.wonderful. Beautiful. Fantastic.
I have each sentence 2 or more times. U are such a great
Narrator of emotions. I could feel the pain of khushi when
Arnav confessed his love for her. U r damn.. damn good.
Iam already expecting one more.. no... many more such
SFs from u. Yeah I know Iam so greedy. But I demand u
To start very soon dear.
Ur fan.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Having slight problem with my internet connection!! LOved the update!! It was great! Thanks for the PM :) 

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Loved this FF...the connection between husband and wife you portrayed was simply amazing...I love Arnav's words of the meaning of falling in love with you...so aptly put.

Hats of to you for your wonderful writings...

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Dear Anonymous,

Breathtakingly beautiful!! The words flow like a symphony and the writing style is lovelySmile
So 6 months into marriage he realises that he's in love too! But what I liked best is Khushi's declaration of love...that he should lose his beauty and his wealth for her to step in and truly love him! Now that is true love...a silent symphony indeed Smile

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