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Arshi Three Shot: Silent Symphony ~ COMPLETE (Page 101)

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Beautiful ending. Loved his confession and how Khushi loved him despite his wealth and looks. Liked how they found peace with eachother.
Khushi's reaction after hearing his confession was lovely and natural.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged

Sweetheart you gave such a beautiful conclusion to a beautiful story. Arnav's confession of love and his explaination for it was mind blowing.

especially his honesty in saying that he confessed his love only when he actually fell in love , not before, since before, it would have been a lie.
 
Loved how u have described khushi's character. So much in love yet so dignified. And even after arnav's confession comes, she doesnt just melt away having won over her love of soo many years but thinks rationally and wants to make sure arnav has the right reasons for loving her and it is not just an attraction or a feeling thats come out of just habit and togetherness since she was his wife and they were married.
 
Beautiful update. God bless you

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
came across ur works jst recently n fell in love dem...
fate plays major role in findin ur soulmate n readin dis jst felt hw true it is...
depth of feelins whch khushi hd in store for arnav wuld nvr hv hd been unleased if lavs nvr hd left him in 1st place so i wuld thank her...she ws nvr happy wid arnav n deir lyf wuld hv been practically been destroyed...as for arnav's it ws already upside down wid lavs constant rejaction...
however glad dat arnav n khushi r 2gether...
d confession ws awesome n heartfelt...
khushi is so lucky to hv arnav all to herself*sigh* Wink
off course no doubt even arnav is lucky to hv khushi in his lyf n make his existence special n meaningful
realy loved 'silent symphony' Smile

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Edited my comments in page 109.  Had res 3 slots all done.

Liza

P.s: I can see myself occupied reading stories from your index today.

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
awesome yaar...
don't have words...
thanks a lot for the pm...
arnav confession was superb...

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:41am | IP Logged
This Three shot was utterly and completely amazing and I am but a mere admirer to the rare amount of talent which you presented here dear "anonymous!! :))"
 
I am still marvelling over this phenomenal piece of writing of yours. I loved how it revolved around Arhi and how it took on a different scenario to thier love kahani.
 
To think I would actually come across a TS where Arnav had the heart to atleast TRY and love!! I loved how ArShi were made to be brought together through destiny (in this case you Wink) and ended up loving each other.
 
Bless Khushi, who can blame her? ASR issuch that he had girls raining at his feet! All through her life Khushi was like
 
 
but ASR being ASR with high standards, it was going to take him a longer than anticipated to realise the meaning of true beauty. But hey, better late than never right!
 
It was beautifully arranged and I awed by the magic of your words. I could feel Khushi's uncertainity and her disbelief when Arnav cofessed to her. It's a wonder how deep just 3 words run into the heart.
 
I loved the extent to which Khushi loved Arnav where she actually prayed for him to be left with nothing where she will fly into his life as an angel and heal and repair him. Then again, Arnav's love is nothing less for his dear seductive "lake" that drew him towards her with her beating heart of Gold.
 
Thier confessing conversation was soo touching and beauitiful that it seemed unreal. I love how you have portrayed Arnav's character into being one of those who is ruthless, arrogant and believes in everything living up to perfection, yet is also one who respects family and honours feelings. I like how you've moulded him into a caring soul that actually belives in love and in miracles. Amazing.
 
I am sooo glad he gave their love a chance and he finally got to see what it realy felt like to be loved truly for who you are. We can all rely on Khushi for bringing out the prince in his otherwise beastly demeanour to the rest of the world.
 
 
 
And then the ending... I was like:
     
 
 
 
 
Love always prevails!!!! Beautiful ARSHIII... <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
 
Your work was truly amazing and it was it my pleasure reading it. A wonderful piece, nicely done! :-** Xx


Edited by rockprincess123 - 16 April 2013 at 5:47am

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Whoa just amazing how the storie is written Arnav is so,sweet i just fell in love with the way you wrote making love 
Im blushing while writting it ;)) 

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Posted: 16 April 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
That was Fabulous...
Loved what arnav said abt his feelings
Awesome update

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