I honestly don't know what to write, or how to put the words together. This is by far your best piece I have ever read. And I am still in awe with this piece.
The transition of newly wed couple, and their attraction towards each other is pinned so wonderfully. I loved how Arnav is slowly realizing the difference between Lavanya's carefree nature and Khushi quiet behavior. Khushi might be quiet and shy, but she loved him with what he is. She wasn't expecting any changes in Arnav, whereas Lavanya came with a list of changes to be made.
Had Arnav acted upon Khushi's feelings, his life would have been much easier and he would be content with his married life or with the future they held together. But, the past is gone, and hopefully he realizes that Khushi is a gem, and she deserves all the love and affection he can ever give.
Khushi took the chance and plunged in getting tied down with Arnav, and although I don't believe she will regret this decision, I hope she never gets a reason to either. Not all opposites attract, some leave with devastating experiences, but with couples who are strikingly similar, they'll always be a reason to fall back together when they try to go separate ways.
Bubbly Lavanya was like a cascading river, who broke the barriers of his heart and made her way inside it and later outside of it at HER own will. Whereas reserved Khushi was like a quite lake which invited him, encouraged him to come to itself and let his heart out to her on HIS own.
This line is so powerful, I can't see anyone giving a better comparison that how you described the two women.
I am bummed that it is only a three-shot story. :(
Edited by aycma98 - 11 years ago
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