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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
I hate sad ending. .

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madhukumari

I hate sad ending. .
me too n ab toh pakka yakin bi ho gya ye palki ki fan hai

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Originally posted by Madhukumari

I hate sad ending. .
me too n ab toh pakka yakin bi ho gya ye palki ki fan hai

i agree riya. . .
I dnt get it,sad ending dena hi hai toh,y do u write it.??
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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madhukumari

Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Originally posted by Madhukumari

I hate sad ending. .
me too n ab toh pakka yakin bi ho gya ye palki ki fan hai

i agree riya. . .
I dnt get it,sad ending dena hi hai toh,y do u write it.??
rite aage hi d3 kam hai jo yha bi yeh sab n kr os mei bi isne aise kiya..nt fair
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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Kriti 
This was a totally lovable os
the way you described sharon's emotions coz she was going to finally confess
Looking at the mirror to make everything perfect for her mr. perfect 
You portrayed friendship , love , concern,  fear all in one 
There was this feeling of solace even in tragedy
 I  must say it was very realistic especially the part were Sharon could was hurt and was almost unconscious but her heart ached for the man that layed before him not knowing that he was the one that had cast magic over her 
And the unsaid promise she made too meet him in heaven

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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Originally posted by Madhukumari

Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Originally posted by Madhukumari

I hate sad ending. .
me too n ab toh pakka yakin bi ho gya ye palki ki fan hai

i agree riya. . .
I dnt get it,sad ending dena hi hai toh,y do u write it.??
rite aage hi d3 kam hai jo yha bi yeh sab n kr os mei bi isne aise kiya..nt fair

yaa riya. . .phle hi hum kriyaansh ki sad endng ke wajah se dukhi hu,isliye hi mai if aati hu 4 a piece of mind,taki cum se cum yaha happy ending mile. .bt,no. .aise os dekh ker hi mera blood boil ho jata hai.
And yes,isne kr ke os mai bi aisa hi kiya,and ek arsha os isne phle likha tha,usme toh aur bi super -sad ending di thi. . . .damm. .uss os ko padhne ke baad i was like,maine os padhna hi band ker diya tha. .abb jab wapas shuru kiya hai toh see. .isne line se 2 os likho with sad ending. .urrggh. .
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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madhukumari

Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Originally posted by Madhukumari

Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Originally posted by Madhukumari

I hate sad ending. .
me too n ab toh pakka yakin bi ho gya ye palki ki fan hai

i agree riya. . .
I dnt get it,sad ending dena hi hai toh,y do u write it.??
rite aage hi d3 kam hai jo yha bi yeh sab n kr os mei bi isne aise kiya..nt fair

yaa riya. . .phle hi hum kriyaansh ki sad endng ke wajah se dukhi hu,isliye hi mai if aati hu 4 a piece of mind,taki cum se cum yaha happy ending mile. .bt,no. .aise os dekh ker hi mera blood boil ho jata hai.
And yes,isne kr ke os mai bi aisa hi kiya,and ek arsha os isne phle likha tha,usme toh aur bi super -sad ending di thi. . . .damm. .uss os ko padhne ke baad i was like,maine os padhna hi band ker diya tha. .abb jab wapas shuru kiya hai toh see. .isne line se 2 os likho with sad ending. .urrggh. .
ya arsha vala i too read tat n jst now she prmisd me kr vale ki hapy ending degi

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Posted: 07 April 2013 at 12:27am | IP Logged

amazingly written...Clap

love realization after 5 yrs Shocked

well  i salute to the patience of swayam... Tongue

ohh... poor guys... hope they'll b fine...Ouch

u love tragedies?? Ermm

or inspired by swaron's struggle in d3?? ... LOL 

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