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Soha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting n different...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awosm dear

plz join guys

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3522516

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Sunil

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Posted: 11 years ago

Definately it was diff nd nice concept os
sharon pov was superb
she went through series of event that was amazing
great job

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Riya Kapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari
I hate sad ending. .

me too n ab toh pakka yakin bi ho gya ye palki ki fan hai

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madhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s
me too n ab toh pakka yakin bi ho gya ye palki ki fan hai

i agree riya. . .
I dnt get it,sad ending dena hi hai toh,y do u write it.??

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Riya Kapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

i agree riya. . .
I dnt get it,sad ending dena hi hai toh,y do u write it.??

rite aage hi d3 kam hai jo yha bi yeh sab n kr os mei bi isne aise kiya..nt fair

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ShonaSparkzz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Kriti

This was a totally lovable os

the way you described sharon's emotions coz she was going to finally confess

Looking at the mirror to make everything perfect for her mr. perfect

You portrayed friendship , love , concern, fear all in one

There was this feeling of solace even in tragedy

I must say it was very realistic especially the part were Sharon could was hurt and was almost unconscious but her heart ached for the man that layed before him not knowing that he was the one that had cast magic over her

And the unsaid promise she made too meet him in heaven

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madhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s
rite aage hi d3 kam hai jo yha bi yeh sab n kr os mei bi isne aise kiya..nt fair

yaa riya. . .phle hi hum kriyaansh ki sad endng ke wajah se dukhi hu,isliye hi mai if aati hu 4 a piece of mind,taki cum se cum yaha happy ending mile. .bt,no. .aise os dekh ker hi mera blood boil ho jata hai.
And yes,isne kr ke os mai bi aisa hi kiya,and ek arsha os isne phle likha tha,usme toh aur bi super -sad ending di thi. . . .damm. .uss os ko padhne ke baad i was like,maine os padhna hi band ker diya tha. .abb jab wapas shuru kiya hai toh see. .isne line se 2 os likho with sad ending. .urrggh. .

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Riya Kapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

yaa riya. . .phle hi hum kriyaansh ki sad endng ke wajah se dukhi hu,isliye hi mai if aati hu 4 a piece of mind,taki cum se cum yaha happy ending mile. .bt,no. .aise os dekh ker hi mera blood boil ho jata hai.
And yes,isne kr ke os mai bi aisa hi kiya,and ek arsha os isne phle likha tha,usme toh aur bi super -sad ending di thi. . . .damm. .uss os ko padhne ke baad i was like,maine os padhna hi band ker diya tha. .abb jab wapas shuru kiya hai toh see. .isne line se 2 os likho with sad ending. .urrggh. .

ya arsha vala i too read tat n jst now she prmisd me kr vale ki hapy ending degi

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Yogini

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazingly written...👏

love realization after 5 yrs 😲

well i salute to the patience of swayam... 😛

ohh... poor guys... hope they'll b fine...

u love tragedies?? 🤔

or inspired by swaron's struggle in d3?? ... 😆

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