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ArhiHBO SS#2: Secret Passion *New Thd Link pg 146* (Page 114)

cpervaiz Goldie

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
oooh, Arnav is going to be so furious when he finds out about the proposal, khushi should go and at least meet the, that would be enough to push him 
just loved how they're moving ahead in their weird relationship
can't wait to read more 
thank you soo much for the PM:)

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Anya.khan99 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
superb update Tina i loved it!!! can't wait for the next chapter!

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shona136 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Tina and Satina, first of all pardon my audacity , to have taken so long to comment on this update...!!!! sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry...Unhappy

and should i say, i had read this update three more times and then am now commenting...!!!

how sizzling can an update get...????? i guess we are yet to see the extreme point of passion and love in SP...Wink

though this story is completely an HBO version, I somehow found the essence of sweet, magical romance, emotion and feelings of the Star Plus version...even within the hot intimacy...!!! 

how sweet of them to admit it finally to themselves that they want each other more, they like each others touch, and never can enough of each other...!!!

i thought initially that he was going to be in his all time ASR mode and straight get to the point of intimacy as soon as khushi unlocked the door...i even thought why is he even waiting till she opens the door...Embarrassed...but he entered the apartment and straight went to the kitchen to look for food...!!! i feel he gave khushi some time and space for herself before he eventually pounced on her...LOLLOLLOL

arnav's comment on the tv channels and programs were hilarious...LOLLOLLOL and so was his jealousy when the delivery saw khushi dancing...LOLLOL

the game was seriously superb, and arnav always knew he was going to win...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed how naughty of him, to ask her for  a full body massageWink... but the interesting thing was khushi's restless feelings at the time of the massage even though she was used to seeing and touching him like that...!!!!

arnav's revelation of his life and past was painful and very sad...i got a glimpse of a vulnerable arnav behind this angry facade...Shocked awww so cute of him to even admit that he found peace in khushi presence and touch...i truly felt for him...!!! i so admire him for being good behind that monster, when he told that he always gave khushi a chance to back out, but it was always her bringing him closer and closer to cute...!!!! he knew it was in a wrong way that he made khushi to accept his offer and come close to him, but he couldnt help it, he does what he feels like...and khushi proved him right by stopping him and apologizing to him...she truly cant be away from him, or let him go away from him, no matter how much she hates him...!!!!

thier this paticular encounter of intense passion was so different, endearing, and beautiful...i loved how they both were gentle with each other, i guess the confession of their wants helped them to get rid of the urgency and enjoy every single passionate moments...!!!!

lastly, the domesticity of the last scene in the morning was the truly calming for us...they actually without getting back to each other, spoke softly and cheekily to each other...i so long to see many of those more and more...!!WinkWinkWink

you know what the last line of this update was the best...she accepts that she is arnav's in all ways possible...and she herslef does not wish to change that... i hope this buaji doesnot create any problems now...i so detest these buaji's of your stories...everytime SHE seems to have some nephew or friend's son for khushi and create problems in our beautiful love stories...!!!! lets see what happens...all ready for the stormy arnav to unleash once he hears this... but i guess khushi is strong enough to handle this and not become weak infront of her parents and buaji's wishes and respect...!!!! i so wish khushi says to arnav clearly after he becomes mad at her hearing about this proposal that, she only wants him, more and more, and has no interest in any other man other than arnav...that will be a cherry on the cake...!!!!

awesome awesome awesome tina and satina... you girls rock...!!! bless you... waiting now for the next one...Clap this was my personal favourite till date of SP...Big smileBig smile


Edited by shona136 - 25 April 2013 at 10:37am

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-FriedriceJi- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 3:41am | IP Logged
I read it again lol. Cant help, oh my Ovaries ROFL

waiting for my Doc ji to rescue me

aa jao meri tinaaa

hugggieee Hug

fried + rice + ji

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Glimmer Goldie

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 4:37am | IP Logged
This was I think my favourite chapter of secret passion !!!!!
It was hot and passionate and at the same time a form of understanding about the other person and feelings for each other formed !!!!!!
Ohhh wonder what she's going to do and say to Arnav !!!!

It was brilliantly written !!! And i can't wait to read the next chapter !! Thnxx for the pm !!! Sorry for the short comment !!

Edited by LoveBS - 25 April 2013 at 4:37am

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B.Sri108 Groupbie

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged
OMG that was an amazing upadateClap

Now I can't wait to know more what happens next

Khushi's marriage proposal
Can't wait to see  ASR's reaction 

Please try to update next chapter soonBig smile

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fffan123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Please update next part soon.

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ananya786 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 April 2013 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
that was fabulous ... Clap

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