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ArhiHBO SS#2: Secret Passion *New Thd Link pg 146* (Page 112)

ayshaomar IF-Rockerz

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shehreen97 Goldie

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
wow...awesmmme updt...cnt soon...btw when r u gonna updt mind games???i'm reallly eager to read...plzz updt soon..
Anamika100 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
OMG girls...what are you doing to me?  Love, love, love this story!!!!!!  The story moves between intense passion to hate to laughter.  What a an enthralling combination.  The mind games between his Shatir dimag and her spirited defense are also absolutely riveting.

The TV watching scene was hilarious.

In this update they both moved for passion to tenderness and something else that neither will put a name to but for him it is an acknowledgement that he is very possesive of her he finds peace with her and for her, caring about him more than her pride and hurt.

When he tells her about his past and tortured  life, somehow the relationship became emotional in addition to physical.  

What will she do now?

Edited by Anamika100 - 22 April 2013 at 11:41pm
PixieFlame Goldie

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Sorry for reading this so late, was busy with exams! 
Just read the last 3 chapters together, love how the story is going forward! An amazing collab! :) 

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ranjanatripathi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
So Khushi has begun to feel something for her monster boss inspite of everything...

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mannat27 Goldie

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
It was a WOW update!!!!

Loved every single thing about it!

But just as Arnav and Khushi came a little closer, fate decided to put them through another test. (Or should I say the author!)

Waiting for the next update!

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AmidstTheWords IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
another mindblowing update

you too make a great pair as writing partners

arnav and khushi are truly confused souls and equally stubborn

and thats why they are made for each other

and the best part of the update was

ASR sharing his demons and pain with khushi

the mask which he led slipped off only in front of her

and khushi cant bear for the life of hwe to be away from him

they crossed a boundary and i loved it
waiting to ASR in full mode when he will claim what is his and that is KHUSHI

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incarnadine IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 2:11pm | IP Logged

Great update!

Arnav as usual blackmailing her to enter the car..which she obediently did Big smile
"The more he had her, the more he needed her" that explains's definitely time for Arnav to realize that he just doesn't want her for fulfilling his needs..there's more than meets the eye..

And Khushi, thrilled by the fact that he was coming to her apartment, on a weeknight shows that she's definitely has feelings for him..

Loved the way Arnav straight went to the kitchen for something to eat..It gave me a feel of domesticity..and it was surprising too. I thought he'd lead her to the room and finish off what he wanted and then leave..

Arnav's comments on the TV programmes were hilarious!!! He had something to comment on every programme LOL 
He hates everything..except the lingerie he got for Khushi Blushing
And Khushi dancing, much to the delight of the deliveryman..but much to the annoyance of Arnav..

"Because you're mine damn it!" Possessive Arnav. Did he understand what this meant. Khushi didn't either Tongue

The rest of the update was steamy..
Loved their kissing dare game..I was sure that Arnav would win..and I was already pitying Khushi as to what she'll be ordered to do..

Khushi is still so innocent. She really thought Arnav was asking a simple request of a massage..but alas, that is not to be..
He had other plans Wink

And then Arnav's sad past comes out Disapprove
Poor soul Ouch atleast now Khushi knows about it..and she has accepted it that she doesn't want him away from her..accepting it that she wanted him too..

And they shared uninhibited passion that night Blushing
The morning had a feel of domesticity too. Arnav waking up, waking her up..morning kiss Embarrassed

And oh no! A proposal for Khushi! Dead
Can't wait to read the next chapter..Unleashed! ASR the beast will be brought out again..he'll do the grabbing and pinning and the "Faraq padta hai" dialogues LOL

I wonder how they'll handle this obstacle..

Loved the update Tina and Satina! Every bit of it! 

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