Posted: 20 April 2013 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nehasupnfan
HOLY SH#T!!! Words cannot explain how impressed and unbelievably happy I am with the way things are shaping up in this fic!! Its brilliant and its all I have ever imagines a smutty, HBO version of ArHi to be!
Let me tell you that this fic is in no way vulgar! When I read it, I don't feel disgusted. Infact, you have weaved in their love, or what I am assuming to be some sort of affection, into their passion so well that I can't help but want more!! This is definitely you're best chapter till date! When I had first started reading this fic, I WANTED something exactly like this! But this a story written by you guys and I would in no way want to change your vision of it! But I'm incredibly happy that it has turned out this way.
This chapter had all the right amount of passion, love(I'd like to think there was love)..but most of all intensity. I was reeling by the time I finished reading. The domesticity between ArHi was so normal. Them fighting, she ignoring him by watching tv, challenging each other...And I thought that the icing on the cake would be Arnav setting the delivery man straight about ogling Khushi. I thought THAT would show the readers what Arnav actually feels or thinks...but boy was I wrong and I'm so glad I was!!! Arnav was vulnerable and for the first time Khushi (and the readers) got to see just how much vulnerable and broken Arnav is. He DEFINITELY needs Khushi more than she does. At least that is how I see it. When he implores Khushi to vocalize her need for him, I think my heart was fighting to beat itself out of my rib cage. He wanted Khushi to admit that SHE needed HIM, just like HE NEEDS HER. He doesn't have a family that loves him. And subconsciously he's looking for that love in Khushi. He doesn't know this fact yet..but he is. What I really liked was the fact that Arnav admitted that his way of getting Khushi was a tad bit much...and also the fact that they met in less than ideal situation. He admitted it and I was proud of him at that moment. When he tells Khushi that he feels more like himself when he's with her...I think mera dil garden garden ho gaya!! And when he tells her that he's done with her my heart broke! I held my breath then! But when Khushi stops him and shows him just exactly how much she needs him I melted into a puddle of happiness then. And its not about the physical intimacy for Arnav or Khushi. The morning after routine was so normal that it left a smile on my face. They were teasing each other. He woke her up with a kiss. If he didn't care about her at least a little he wouldn't take the most gentle way of waking up a person he supposedly can't stand! And even when he gave her the morning off, I went Awww...And he continues to touch her through out, like he wants to be connected to her all the time. And when Khushi pushes his hair back and agrees to come in by lunch...yeah that made me happy. :P :P
AND OH GOD CLIFFHANGER!! NAHII!!! Your precap has made me nervous!!! :O :O Keep 'em coming!! PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON! I'm dying to read what happens next!!!
wow--amazing amazing analysis! u said it so well and I'm glad ur liking where we're going with this. ASR is powerful but he is also scarred. it is up to khushi if she can tackle his complexity.
haha cliffhanger for sure hun, but we had to make it HBO like