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jaj os : the spirit of the miklam palace(pg27pt14) (Page 27)

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jhakaas bindaas dramebaaz update
superb update loved it
loved johnny's entry

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Part 14 : THE END

As both Johnny and Juju were shocked by knowing about the

tree ... then the old lady interrupts then


Old lady : "Do you want to know about Charles Miklam ?"

Johnny : sure aunty ji !


Old lady : "Once upon a time many centuries ago there was

a very rich man known as Charles Miklam , he was greedy

and wanted to be very rich so he began to snatched away

poor farmers land under the pretext that the they are in debt

with him . Many complaints were lodged against him to the

king and after hearing from both sides the king decided to

throw Charles Miklam in prison . Soon he was behind the

bars and on a new moon day friday the 13th he ran away from

the prison but he was found dead by the king s soldiers .

All tried to inquire how he died ? But nobody could find out

the reason of his death . And even today no body knows

about his death . And then one day he returned to the town

as a evil spirit to take revenge from all who bothered him and

he killed the king and conquered the king s palace and from

that time it is known as Miklam palace and no one dares to

venture near it as the spirit dwells in the palace ...


Then everyone becomes silent .. after some time ...


Juju : "What happened after that ?"

Old lady : " I know only this much story and i think it is the

end .

Johnny : "Nahi aunty
ji  aap bhi kamaal karti hai ".

Juju : "I understood everything !! , bye aunty and johnny

follow me ."

Johnny : lekin hum jaah kaha reh hain ?

Juju : Jeannie ke paas .


They both reached the place where everyone is asleep


Juju : Jeannie kya tum yaha hoh ?

Jeannie : haan Juju


Juju says the whole thing just happened with them and the

story .


Jeannie : KYA !!!Juju aap ne mujhe apne saath lejana zaroori

nahi samja ?


Johnny : rajjo ji aap bhi kamaal karti hai


Juju : tum dono aab baat karna chodo aur yaha se bhoot ko

bhagaane mein meri help karo ok ?


Jeannie and Johnny : OK !


then Juju goes to the graveyard and dig a hole under the

big headstone carved on the big tree


Jeannie : Juju aap yeh hole kyu khod rahe ho ?

Juju : keep quiet and dekhti jao


Then Juju goes to the big tree where the spirit is with so

many dead bodies hanging and Juju cuts the part where the

head stone picture is carved and then suddenly the spirit

began to shout and slowly it is pulled in the hole dug by Juju


Juju : Jeannie jaldi se yeh hole ko bandh kar do

Jeannie : ok


and she uses magic to close the hole and Juju places a

headstone and the spirit is trapped inside the headstone for

ever


Jeannie : Juju aap ne yeh sab kaise kiya ?


Juju smiling : i did all this because i got the clue .


Johnny : konsa clue ??


Juju : ok i will explain you ... tree means life without which we

cant leave and headstone is only in graveyards which means

death so if i cut the source from which the spirit is surviving

and place it where is the death point , then the spirit will be

trapped and be destroyed forever ...

samaj mein aaya yah samjao ??


Jeannie : Juju aap bahut intelligent ho i really love you ..


Juju is lost hearing this ...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


then Johnny interrupts


Johnny : wapas ghar bhi jana hai i am going


and he goes from there ...


Juju does not say anything but is sad as he lost many friends

because of the spirit and he is happy too because he

prevented the spirit from taking more innocent people s lives


Then the next morning they all sat in the jeep and are ready

to drove back to sweet home


Juju in his mind : i will never say anyone about the spirit s

incident as people will stop coming here thinking that still

the spirit is here ... and the remaining people lead their

lives happily ever after ...


THE END

hope you mitrams liked this story



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thank u dear n it means a lot that u r the first Heart Hug
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