jaj os : the spirit of the miklam palace(pg27pt14) - Page 11

i am updating my os v soon as one of my mitrams wants to

read it now 😆😳

part 11 : juju s doubt gets stronger

as vela who don t wanted to face priya s anger after the incident

 😆😆

vela : priya mujhe ek kaam yaad aagaya hai mein ja raha hoon

(priya i remembered a important work so i am going)

priya : kaayar vela ! (coward vela !)

but vela was gone so priya continued to walk further

then on the other side juju was worried

juju : hamaare saath sandy bhi aayi thi par kisi ko koi chinta

nahi ki woh kaha hai ?

(sandy(who was killed earlier) also came with us but no one is bothered where is she?)

then he hears some one calling him , juju turns back and see

 the same old lady with whom he was talking

old lady : beta mujhe tume ek baat bataani hai bahut dhyaan

se sunna (son i want to inform you something listen very

carefully)

juju : bataiye aunty ji

old lady : is haveli par bhoot ka saya hai (there is a spirit

present in this palace)

juju (not serious) : kiska bhoot aunty ji ? 😆 (whose

spirit aunty ?)

aunty : charles miklam aur bhi kahi (charles miklam and

many more)

then priya who is in the palace sees a door surrounded with

cobwebs and full with rust

priya : yeh darwaja ke andar kon hoga ? chalo mein khol ke

 dekhti hoon ( who must be inside the door ? ok let me try

opening it )

she tries to open but it is not opening...

precap : part 12 BACHAO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

part 12


Edited by .nightqueen - 10 years ago

i am the first to comment😊

Originally posted by: JAJfan_Inshifan

i am the first to comment😊

amazing update plzz update soon next part

but i am angry with u that why it is small😡

what a speed yaar i am lucky love ya n okee n because i thought that people like to read small

updated 😭😆 😆 that s y and u can t imagine in ur wildest imaginations what is going to happen😲

Originally posted by: .nightqueen

what a speed yaar i am lucky love ya n okee n because i thought that people like to read small

updated 😭😆 😆 that s y and u can t imagine in ur wildest imaginations what is going to happen😲

🤣

Originally posted by: .nightqueen

what happened ?? 

nothing

u ROFing that s y i asked ? 😆

Originally posted by: .nightqueen

u ROFing that s y i asked ? 😆

like that

liked it,egerly wtg for nxt part

thanks a lot 😃

my mitrams comments encourage me to write more 😳

you are a superb writer sumitra