jaj os : the spirit of the miklam palace(pg27pt14) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago

superb update

sumi waiting for next part

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i am updating too quick na sorry for that 😆😆😆

part 10 : oh no !!!!!!!!

as juju was shocked hearing the old lady s words , before he

can ask anything else priya came there

priya : sweetie pie tum yaha is aurat ke saat kya baatein kar

rahe ho ? (sweetie pie what you are talking with this woman)

juju : mein toh bas yaha ki thodi jaan kaari le raha tha (i was

only inquiring about this place)

priya : tum itne zimmedaar ho (you are so responsible)

then she drags juju with her 😆😆😆

on the other side chatur babu and dr dr are having a walk

together suddenly jeannie appears on chatur babu s shoulder

jeannie (shouting) : BHOOT AAYA !!!! (ghost is here)

chatur babu is startled and pushes dr dr

dr dr : mr ganguly aap ne mujhe kyu dhakka diya ? (mr

ganguly why did u push me)

chatur babu : dr babu hum me kuch nahi kiya yeh zaroor uss

bhoot ledki ka kaam hoga (dr babu i dint did anything surely

it must be the ghost girl)

dr dr : yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hai ? mujhe lagta aapki

peeli goli ka dose double se triple karni padegi ( what rubbish

you are talking ? i think i will have to increase your dose of

yellow pill from double to trible )

chatur babu : are nahi dr babu !! ( no no dr babu !!)

the scene shifts to priya and vela who are in miklam palace

priya : vela tume kam se kam ek torchlight laani chahiye thi

itna andhera hai yaha (vela you shud have brought at least a

torch light how dark it is here)

vela : kyu ? tumhara sweetie pie bhi la sakta tha na ? 😆😆

(why ? even your sweetie pie could have brought it ?)

priya : tum toh kuch bolo hi mat chalo hum aage badh te hai

(you don t say anything and let us go ahead)

vela : theekhe chalo yaha masti karte hai ( ok lets have fun

here) then ...

juju : zaroor yaha par kuch gadbad hai ? (i am sure that there

is something wrong about this place)

chatur babu comes there...

chatur babu : haan bikky babu yaha bhoot ledki ka parivaar

rehta hoga (yes bikky babu maybe here the ghost girl s family

must be living here)

juju (slowly murmuring) : hai bhagwaan mujhe kaha

fasaadiya isse chatur babu ke saath acha toh mein jeannie ke

saath hi rook jaata ( oh god where i am trapped with chatur

babu it would have been better that i would have stayed with

jeannie)

then priya feels something strange about the place she is

standing , she stops ..

priya : vela mujhe yaha kuch ajeeb lag raha hai tum bhi lag

raha hai na ? (vela i am feeling something strange here , even

you feeling the same ?)

no reply...

suddenly a lightning is seen from the main window

then priya sees a very scary ghost

n she screams

priya : bachao !! yaha bhoot hai dad, vicky , vela koi toh

bachao AAAhhh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(save me here is a

ghost , dad , vicky , vela anyone come and save me AAAh!)

ghost : are yeh to main ho vela

then he takes of the mask

priya (v angry) : yeh kaisa majaak tha vela ? tumne meri jaan

le li thi ! (what kind of joke it was vela ? you took my life for a

second)

vela : muhje maaf karna 😆😆😆 maine toh aaise hi masti ki

muhje nahi maalum tha ki tum itni darpok hoh (forgive me i

was just having fun with u , i don t know that u r so timid)

priya : shut up vela aur kuch kaha to acha nahi hoga 😡😡😡

(shut up vela if u say anything it will not be good)

precap part 11 : juju s doubt gets stronger

part 11
Edited by .nightqueen - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

aww nice part!

erm.. should read whole story! gonna read 2morro :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

thank u priya but u r the special expect in this

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Posted: 10 years ago

loved the scene when vella scared priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks a lot shamma n plzz continue urs wen u r free

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .nightqueen
thanks a lot shamma n plzz continue urs wen u r free

ok tommorow will sure update when i will be free

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Posted: 10 years ago

ok thanks eagerly waiting

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .nightqueen
ok thanks eagerly waiting

ntnsim

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saurabh

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Posted: 10 years ago

superb update ,egerly wtg for nxt upd

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