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uniq cllb|#2 *COMPLETED STORY* (Page 99)

kuts IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -saranya-


im readng i cnt hold wait fr a lengthy comment... Wink 


ok so i go with harry in this...LOL 
well wen i saw the pm 'surprise' i knw its sumthing fr me and vaju...
and wen i opened it it went to unique colab...

i was like...ermm..did she gve me a wrng link or wht...
im so dumb..evn then it dint strike me tat its 13th today and u could hav wrote the chap...uff dumbo me... LOL LOL 

and ter i saw ur words...

IN BLUE...! Wink 

blue haan! ahem... were was i? Tongue 

oh ya ur note...

seriously..tats a bigg surprise fr me...i was near to faint ..LOL 

and dedication for me and vaju...Embarrassed 

u r so sweet u...  Embarrassed


oh yes...update...i just got carried away..ya let me read... Tongue 

oh gosh...thnk god...Big smile

hrideyy introducing sid ..i was like..uffo...wht fr he is here now... D'oh 
but now...wah..he is here fr a brother role... ROFL 
he is most welcum here...route clear... LOL 

what was tat??? 

kushi forgot to what???

cum again..cum again... LOL 

feeding huh!!? baby... ROFL she forgot... 

oh vaju missing u badly gonna make anu a strwberry in secs... out ...dont slip off frm where u sitting/lying...ROFL 

LOL... get up ...get comment just strted...its a long way to go...

the day she thought she got everything'but actually lost everything she possessed'the day she got married and submitted to her husband'gave her most precious asset'her dignity'her virginity'herself'to her love Arnav.

awesum lines anu..loved it... Clap 


what am i reading!!! 
arshi love making session in UR words...!!! 

someone pinch me...Shocked 

kiddo... are u sure ? is my angel drunk wen she wrote this!! Confused

i can see sum deep down desires surfacing as words...ahem...its common wen intoxicated... LOL 
or anu..were u watchng ur hubs pic when writing it... ROFL tat u got intoxicated.. LOL 

Khushi'will you give me the chance to pleasure you'to love you in all ways I can " ..hell noway commenting on this line... Blushing Blushing 
but wait...i cnt just stop u see... 

is ths u actually!!!! Shocked 
im officially gone nuts... Dead Dead Dead Dead 
dint expct ths frm u... Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked u could wrte ths so elegantly... !!! my goodness... Star 

moon was peeping inside from the sky through the window as the two souls become united to be one'sometimes shying and covering itself in the veil of clouds' 

lovely lines...maybe arnav hav betrayd her..but im sure wen he made her HIS completely...his mind must hav been overpowered with love...among the fluctuating LOVE  and  REVENGE  mode he had... Smile 

She never knew submission can be so peaceful'can be so ethereal'can be so blissful'she felt divine'divine to give herself to a rightful person'trusting a right man to give her virginity'who will take care of her dignity and always protect her from evil' 

i felt pain reading this... Cry Cry Cry poor kushi!! 

she heard his heartbeat'she placed her ear on his chest to hear his heartbeat which she knows only beat for her' 

wait a sec...wait wait... LOL LOL LOL LOL


i can read my angel's fantasies ....i swear its seriously not kushi...beware guys...plz dont beliv ths words to be kushi's ...anu cheated u all ROFL ROFL 

"Anayah'you are getting naughty day by day'is this a good manner to bite your mumma with you tooth'huh" said Khushi annoyingly then pouted.
my mouth comments... LOL 

Anayah knows how to convince her mumma'she said mum'mum'mum in her babyish tone'smiling and showing off her newly formed tooth and again started licking the milk innocently'awe'she can never be angry on her little Angel'she kissed her face and sang lullaby for her and made her sleep like always'and she too sleep with her'daughter calmly nestling in her mother's bosoms in her warmth'and the night went all lovingly'

mumma's love... divine... Cry hope god show mercy on me ...i want my mom... Cry Cry Cry 

"Yes'her eyes are just like her father's" replied Khushi with heavy heart 

ah sure she is gonna flatter many guys in her teenage... aftral she hass his eyes yaar... Day Dreaming 


ahem... Blushing getting back wait... Tongue 

Anayah made sounds like wooo'wooo'.and maa'maaa'and started pulling Khushi's dress. 

these are my sounds... Cry wich i use to make u bend fr my demands ... Tongue anayah used them fr her probs..anythng fr my baby Hug 

She saw him'they were gazing in each other's eyes. She could notice his eyes which grew dark with desire'then with in a split of second, his eyes mellowed seeing her but again turned to be stony and harsh.
ya rgt..ths is wht the true essence..ths is y EYES  are said to be the window of hrt... Smile 

so he is the trustee...yummm..intrsting ths is... Big smile

lovely encounter...blast blast blast... Clap Clap Clap

i hav no words to describe good...her mangalsutra..his anger..her mocking..a lot..alot...loved it... 

"khu'khu'khushi'she'she is my baby" said Arnav who was filled with joy' 

damn...damn..damn... why do i end up having soft corner on him all time inspite of his deeds..i just dnt knw...

uff...Confused Confused Confused Confused 

loved the entire chap dear...Clap

awesum ...lovely...

and kiddo...  


u dint tell me hah!! Smile 

oh my god... 


thats a awesome surprise...

love u kiddo... Hug

OMG! is this a comment or a Chapter?? LOL

And Freak! What's Rob doing at last? Confused am drolling there now.. Tongue

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kuts IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by momo121

Originally posted by JalebiGirl

Originally posted by momo121

Originally posted by JalebiGirl

Who is writing next?

Update soon please

me to also waiting for the next writer.
if we know we spam his/her inbox or scraps :D

kon hai bata be do..!?!

When is your turn?

Im busy in school projects so as of now I dont know when my turn is.

Ya right!!! Tongue

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summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 8:44am | IP Logged
awesome updt

luvd it

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Aims. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged
continue na!
i m waiting!

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momo121 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Waiting waiting.

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Aims. IF-Rockerz

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update soon!

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