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momo121 IF-Rockerz

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--MISHTEE-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Loved d update tat was awesomeSmile
I have read it over 5 times am still not able to describe how much I loved nd enjoyed reading it
but I know Arnav is wrong Angry but pls usko zyada mat rulana nd pls khushi don't be too rude jus be rude Tongue
kyunki Arnav ki har ek aasoon mujhe har bar chot pahunctha deti hai Cry Wink
so nxt writer pls update soon Smile
yay am first ClapDancing Party

Kuts if u r writing nxt I know u wont
make Arnav cry much Big smile bharosa hai tumpe aur tumhari writing pe LOL LOL LOL

D mangalsutra scene was amazing
yay nd Anyah I jus love her bcoz she is too adorable nd calling Arnav as her "papa" was d cherry on d top Big smile

so Kuts umeed hai zyada intezaar mat karvayegi humse pls Smile

Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 25 May 2013 at 9:33pm

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Dee_J IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged


Khushi has taken the 'jhansi ki rani's' modern avatar...i love this khushi!

Gud that she slapped him! He deserves much more than that :P
And  then arnav being tongue tied! Dude serves u right  :P

Sid is a true friend of hers! Chalo gud that arnav ko ni pta he already has someone in his life. So r u guys gonna use him for the 'jealousy track'?

Awww anayah! My sweetie pie <3 You didn't disappoint us :)
'Khoon he khoon ko pehchanta hai' Filmy :D

And the mangalsutra thing was kinda filmy one u know :D But it was nice Thumbs Up

Loved the update :)

Edited by dj_arshifan - 25 May 2013 at 2:25pm

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momo121 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged


Minnie, u started! WOOwWW.. :-*


Now, to start with, its BOLTi Bandh and not BAD.. ROFL..

But then u took speed ha baby.. Woah! ASR ko thappad pada.. Shit, very Bad!


And then, when KKG (SR) spoke ke she is just HER daughter HER blood and father of her Anayah is DEAD, shit, I felt too bad.. itna toh tabbhi bura nahi laga jab wo ASR ko thappad maar rahi thi!


And then she spoke.. IF U EVER LOVED ME! Dammit.. U had to make me lost na Minnie!


Argh I hate this sid.. Grr to him.. Angry


Whatever u jerk.. Run away and burn.. I know what ASR did was wrong, so what? He is the hero and eligible to do anything.. LOL.. And little sweet Anayah!


I loved the 'Mangalsutra' scene a ton sweety.. U did that so well.. Hug


WOOOAAHHH! Khushi was SOOO hyper finding her Mangalsutra which was safe with ASR na?! And OMGGG.. Pari called Arnav her DAD! LOVE U More Minnie.. AWEESSOOOMMEEE…


FREAK.. That's It? That idiot is filling KKG (SR)'s ears.. And Khushi.. Ja, kar le jo karna hai, mai baithi hu na ASR ko bachaane.. :p


NeXt PaRt On Me!!! I am doing next one and Its FINALLL!!  :D

Yaayyy!!! Am flying.. Am so happy.. :-*


Lovely update Minnie.. Its too great! :D

Edited by momo121 - 25 May 2013 at 1:01pm

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momo121 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged


Awww...why should we throw chappals and tomatoes on you

I loved it ke she called Arnav Papa and not Sid

It was really a superb chappy
Khushi blasted finally on him and again slapped hom
I guess you have your slapping period LOL

Bur whatever
What does Khushi mean with she will take revenge
What's going in their heads

Update soon please :D
Don't make us wait long

And thank you a lot for resing for me
Really sweet of you :-*

Edited by momo121 - 26 May 2013 at 3:11pm

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..ashiya.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Awesome update.
Loved it..
Khushi blasted on Arnav again and slapped him too?? With the number of slaps he is getting and will be getting I guess soon he's gonna get the five digits of Khushi's fingers imprinted on his cheeks.
The mangalsutra scene was really good and Pari calling Arnav as dad made it more better. Though i expected her to call sid as dad but loved it when she adressed Arnav as her papa..
What's wrong with Sid??and with Khushi too? One moment she is so hyper about her mangalsutra being misplaced thing and the other moment she is there all eady with the plan of taking revenge with the same guy who made her wear that mangalsutra? Moreover where did this revenge thing come from??
Wonder whats goin on in their heads.

Nxt chap on kuts na? You gotta update it soon dear.. And with you being the one to do it I believe k you wont make Arnav to suffer much..
Waiting for the nxt chap already.. Continue with the nxt chap soon.

Edited by me.ashiya - 27 May 2013 at 3:15am

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momo121 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:58am | IP Logged
RES FOR -saranya-



hey dear...Hug

ok its time...Big smile

tat was just fab...Star

fr me it was surprising to strt with...

a slap...

then anayah!!

then sid sayng her to get revenge...

kushi agreeing!! 

oh wht the! Shocked Shocked Shocked

and the way she carried the mangal sutra to arnav's feet...

it had two faces...

one...i thought..when she dropped it at his feet and went to sid...i thought she conveyd him to walk off from their life cutting of every string attachd with them...which is essentially the mangalsutra kushi had...

second ...i thought maybe she hintinmg her tie it once again to her maa...with love this time! 

and the way anyah called him papa...oh i got goosebumps seriously...ClapClap Clap 

kids...uh...they are blessings... Smile 

awesum chap...waiting fr next... Embarrassed

Edited by momo121 - 25 May 2013 at 12:55pm

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momo121 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:59am | IP Logged
RES FOR anamika90 

Awe...Anayah is so sweet...obeys her mother...Embarrassed

khushi ne Arnav ki bolti bandh kar di...LOL

why should she say that he is a father to her daughter huh...when he cheated her...Ouch

arghh...yeh sid ka baccha...isse maine uska bhai bana diya phir bhi taang adaa ne se baaz nahi aayega...AngryAngry are such a sweet heart...

*always listen to mumma...Embarrassed

*dropped mangalsutra at the correct place where it need to be...ask him indirectly to tie it to mumma...Smile

*awe...she pointed to Arnav and called him babyEmbarrassedHeart

*yeh sid ka baccha nahi khushi ke kaan bhar raha hai...ShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked

great work momo...Clap

waiting for next chappy...Day DreamingDay Dreaming


Edited by momo121 - 28 May 2013 at 11:43am

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