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uniq cllb|#2 *COMPLETED STORY* (Page 114)

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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged
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Minnie, u started! WOOwWW.. :-*

 

Now, to start with, its BOLTi Bandh and not BAD.. ROFL..

But then u took speed ha baby.. Woah! ASR ko thappad pada.. Shit, very Bad!

 

And then, when KKG (SR) spoke ke she is just HER daughter HER blood and father of her Anayah is DEAD, shit, I felt too bad.. itna toh tabbhi bura nahi laga jab wo ASR ko thappad maar rahi thi!

 

And then she spoke.. IF U EVER LOVED ME! Dammit.. U had to make me lost na Minnie!

 

Argh I hate this sid.. Grr to him.. Angry

 

Whatever u jerk.. Run away and burn.. I know what ASR did was wrong, so what? He is the hero and eligible to do anything.. LOL.. And little sweet Anayah!

 

I loved the 'Mangalsutra' scene a ton sweety.. U did that so well.. Hug

 

WOOOAAHHH! Khushi was SOOO hyper finding her Mangalsutra which was safe with ASR na?! And OMGGG.. Pari called Arnav her DAD! LOVE U More Minnie.. AWEESSOOOMMEEE…

 

FREAK.. That's It? That idiot is filling KKG (SR)'s ears.. And Khushi.. Ja, kar le jo karna hai, mai baithi hu na ASR ko bachaane.. :p

 

NeXt PaRt On Me!!! I am doing next one and Its FINALLL!!  :D

Yaayyy!!! Am flying.. Am so happy.. :-*

 

Lovely update Minnie.. Its too great! :D



Edited by momo121 - 25 May 2013 at 1:01pm

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Awww...why should we throw chappals and tomatoes on you


I loved it ke she called Arnav Papa and not Sid

It was really a superb chappy
Khushi blasted finally on him and again slapped hom
I guess you have your slapping period LOL

Bur whatever
What does Khushi mean with she will take revenge
What's going in their heads

Update soon please :D
Don't make us wait long

And thank you a lot for resing for me
Really sweet of you :-*


Edited by momo121 - 26 May 2013 at 3:11pm

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Awesome update.
Loved it..
Khushi blasted on Arnav again and slapped him too?? With the number of slaps he is getting and will be getting I guess soon he's gonna get the five digits of Khushi's fingers imprinted on his cheeks.
The mangalsutra scene was really good and Pari calling Arnav as dad made it more better. Though i expected her to call sid as dad but loved it when she adressed Arnav as her papa..
What's wrong with Sid??and with Khushi too? One moment she is so hyper about her mangalsutra being misplaced thing and the other moment she is there all eady with the plan of taking revenge with the same guy who made her wear that mangalsutra? Moreover where did this revenge thing come from??
Wonder whats goin on in their heads.

Nxt chap on kuts na? You gotta update it soon dear.. And with you being the one to do it I believe k you wont make Arnav to suffer much..
Waiting for the nxt chap already.. Continue with the nxt chap soon.

Edited by me.ashiya - 27 May 2013 at 3:15am

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hey dear...Hug


ok its time...Big smile

tat was just fab...Star

fr me it was surprising to strt with...

a slap...

then anayah!!

then sid sayng her to get revenge...

kushi agreeing!! 

oh wht the! Shocked Shocked Shocked

and the way she carried the mangal sutra to arnav's feet...

it had two faces...

one...i thought..when she dropped it at his feet and went to sid...i thought she conveyd him to walk off from their life cutting of every string attachd with them...which is essentially the mangalsutra kushi had...

second ...i thought maybe she hintinmg her dad...to tie it once again to her maa...with love this time! 

and the way anyah called him papa...oh i got goosebumps seriously...ClapClap Clap 

kids...uh...they are blessings... Smile 

awesum chap...waiting fr next... Embarrassed



Edited by momo121 - 25 May 2013 at 12:55pm

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Awe...Anayah is so sweet...obeys her mother...Embarrassed

khushi ne Arnav ki bolti bandh kar di...LOL

why should she say that he is a father to her daughter huh...when he cheated her...Ouch

arghh...yeh sid ka baccha...isse maine uska bhai bana diya phir bhi taang adaa ne se baaz nahi aayega...AngryAngry

haaye...Anayah...you are such a sweet heart...

*always listen to mumma...Embarrassed

*dropped mangalsutra at the correct place where it need to be...ask him indirectly to tie it to mumma...Smile

*awe...she pointed to Arnav and called him papa...lovely...my babyEmbarrassedHeart

*yeh sid ka baccha nahi sudhrega...now khushi ke kaan bhar raha hai...ShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked

great work momo...Clap

waiting for next chappy...Day DreamingDay Dreaming

 


Edited by momo121 - 28 May 2013 at 11:43am

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And wow my 4999th postSmile

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*unres*
What??Anayah called Arnav 'PAPA'Angry
But as Sid said"khoon khoon ko pahchanta hai"

what will khushi do now??
What would be Arnav's next step??

*Cliffhanger*





Edited by JalebiGirl - 25 May 2013 at 12:02pm

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