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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --MISHTEE--
Waiting

Update will come in 2 hours. Just adding final touch's.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hariyamalik
so 2 hours...😃

yes 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved d update tat was awesome😊

I have read it over 5 times am still not able to describe how much I loved nd enjoyed reading it

but I know Arnav is wrong 😡 but pls usko zyada mat rulana nd pls khushi don't be too rude jus be rude 😛

kyunki Arnav ki har ek aasoon mujhe har bar chot pahunctha deti hai 😭 😉

so nxt writer pls update soon 😊

yay am first 👏 🥳

Kuts if u r writing nxt I know u wont

make Arnav cry much 😃 bharosa hai tumpe aur tumhari writing pe 😆 😆 😆

D mangalsutra scene was amazing

yay nd Anyah I jus love her bcoz she is too adorable nd calling Arnav as her "papa" was d cherry on d top 😃

so Kuts umeed hai zyada intezaar mat karvayegi humse pls 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Khushi has taken the 'jhansi ki rani's' modern avatar...i love this khushi!

Gud that she slapped him! He deserves much more than that :P

And then arnav being tongue tied! Dude serves u right :P

Sid is a true friend of hers! Chalo gud that arnav ko ni pta he already has someone in his life. So r u guys gonna use him for the 'jealousy track'?

Awww anayah! My sweetie pie <3 You didn't disappoint us :)

'Khoon he khoon ko pehchanta hai' Filmy :D

And the mangalsutra thing was kinda filmy one u know :D But it was nice 👍🏼

Loved the update :)

Edited by dj_arshifan - 10 years ago

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@momo121

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Posted: 10 years ago

RES FOR KUTS

~UNRES FOR COMMENT~~

Minnie, u started! WOOwWW.. :-*

Now, to start with, its BOLTi Bandh and not BAD.. ROFL..

But then u took speed ha baby.. Woah! ASR ko thappad pada.. Shit, very Bad!

And then, when KKG (SR) spoke ke she is just HER daughter HER blood and father of her Anayah is DEAD, shit, I felt too bad.. itna toh tabbhi bura nahi laga jab wo ASR ko thappad maar rahi thi!

And then she spoke.. IF U EVER LOVED ME! Dammit.. U had to make me lost na Minnie!

Argh I hate this sid.. Grr to him.. 😡

Whatever u jerk.. Run away and burn.. I know what ASR did was wrong, so what? He is the hero and eligible to do anything.. LOL.. And little sweet Anayah!

I loved the 'Mangalsutra' scene a ton sweety.. U did that so well.. 🤗

WOOOAAHHH! Khushi was SOOO hyper finding her Mangalsutra which was safe with ASR na?! And OMGGG.. Pari called Arnav her DAD! LOVE U More Minnie.. AWEESSOOOMMEEE…

FREAK.. That's It? That idiot is filling KKG (SR)'s ears.. And Khushi.. Ja, kar le jo karna hai, mai baithi hu na ASR ko bachaane.. :p

NeXt PaRt On Me!!! I am doing next one and Its FINALLL!! :D

Yaayyy!!! Am flying.. Am so happy.. :-*

Lovely update Minnie.. Its too great! :D

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Posted: 10 years ago

RES FOR PARI

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Awww...why should we throw chappals and tomatoes on you

I loved it ke she called Arnav Papa and not Sid

It was really a superb chappy

Khushi blasted finally on him and again slapped hom

I guess you have your slapping period 😆

Bur whatever

What does Khushi mean with she will take revenge

What's going in their heads

Update soon please :D

Don't make us wait long

And thank you a lot for resing for me

Really sweet of you :-*

Edited by momo121 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update.
Loved it..
Khushi blasted on Arnav again and slapped him too?? With the number of slaps he is getting and will be getting I guess soon he's gonna get the five digits of Khushi's fingers imprinted on his cheeks.
The mangalsutra scene was really good and Pari calling Arnav as dad made it more better. Though i expected her to call sid as dad but loved it when she adressed Arnav as her papa..
What's wrong with Sid??and with Khushi too? One moment she is so hyper about her mangalsutra being misplaced thing and the other moment she is there all eady with the plan of taking revenge with the same guy who made her wear that mangalsutra? Moreover where did this revenge thing come from??
Wonder whats goin on in their heads.

Nxt chap on kuts na? You gotta update it soon dear.. And with you being the one to do it I believe k you wont make Arnav to suffer much..
Waiting for the nxt chap already.. Continue with the nxt chap soon.Edited by me.ashiya - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

RES FOR -saranya-

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SARANYA COMMENT

hey dear...🤗

ok its time...😃

tat was just fab...⭐️

fr me it was surprising to strt with...

a slap...

then anayah!!

then sid sayng her to get revenge...

kushi agreeing!!

oh wht the! 😲 😲 😲

and the way she carried the mangal sutra to arnav's feet...

it had two faces...

one...i thought..when she dropped it at his feet and went to sid...i thought she conveyd him to walk off from their life cutting of every string attachd with them...which is essentially the mangalsutra kushi had...

second ...i thought maybe she hintinmg her dad...to tie it once again to her maa...with love this time!

and the way anyah called him papa...oh i got goosebumps seriously...👏👏 👏

kids...uh...they are blessings... 😊

awesum chap...waiting fr next... 😳

Edited by momo121 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

RES FOR anamika90

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Awe...Anayah is so sweet...obeys her mother...😳

khushi ne Arnav ki bolti bandh kar di...😆

why should she say that he is a father to her daughter huh...when he cheated her...

arghh...yeh sid ka baccha...isse maine uska bhai bana diya phir bhi taang adaa ne se baaz nahi aayega...😡😡

haaye...Anayah...you are such a sweet heart...

*always listen to mumma...😳

*dropped mangalsutra at the correct place where it need to be...ask him indirectly to tie it to mumma...😊

*awe...she pointed to Arnav and called him papa...lovely...my baby😳❤️

*yeh sid ka baccha nahi sudhrega...now khushi ke kaan bhar raha hai...😲😲😲😲😲

great work momo...👏

waiting for next chappy...

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