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Originally posted by: momo121
me to also waiting for the next writer.if we know we spam his/her inbox or scraps :Dkon hai bata be do..!?!
When is your turn?
Originally posted by: momo121
me to also waiting for the next writer.if we know we spam his/her inbox or scraps :Dkon hai bata be do..!?!
Originally posted by: momo121
Im busy in school projects so as of now I dont know when my turn is.
😳☺️Originally posted by: lilakumariacnwNice update anamika...
That was a good twist... I really want arnav to suffer a bit...
Plzzz... Next writter dear... Plzzz fulfill my wish...
Anamika... I loved the baby... & also their confrotation scene was so good... Cant beleive arnav said all those... Hw can he be sooo cheap...???
Love it anamika... Ur writting is very good...
Waiting for next writter...
Originally posted by: -saranya-res..
im readng i cnt hold anymore..lol wait fr a lengthy comment... 😉edited...ok so i go with harry in this...😆well wen i saw the pm 'surprise' i knw its sumthing fr me and vaju...and wen i opened it it went to unique colab...i was like...ermm..did she gve me a wrng link or wht...im so dumb..evn then it dint strike me tat its 13th today and u could hav wrote the chap...uff dumbo me... 😆 😆and ter i saw ur words...IN BLUE...! 😉blue haan! ahem... were was i? 😛oh ya ur note...seriously..tats a bigg surprise fr me...i was near to faint ..😆and dedication for me and vaju...😳OH YEAHHH...
u r so sweet yaar..love u... 😳
oh yes...update...i just got carried away..ya let me read... 😛oh gosh...thnk god...😃hrideyy introducing sid ..i was like..uffo...wht fr he is here now...but now...wah..he is here fr a brother role... 🤣he is most welcum here...route clear... LOLwhat was tat???kushi forgot to what???cum again..cum again... 😆feeding huh!!?means..baby...feeding baby... 🤣 she forgot...oh vaju missing u badly dear...im gonna make anu a strwberry in secs...anu..tadaaa...watch out ...dont slip off frm where u sitting/lying...🤣
LOL... get up ...get up...my comment just strted...its a long way to go...STOP DROOLING AND CONCENTRATE HERE 😎the day she thought she got everything'but actually lost everything she possessed'the day she got married and submitted to her husband'gave her most precious asset'her dignity'her virginity'herself'to her love Arnav.awesum lines anu..loved it... 👏OMFG...what am i reading!!!arshi love making session in UR words...!!!someone pinch me...😲kiddo... are u sure ? is my angel drunk wen she wrote this!! 😕i can see sum deep down desires surfacing as words...ahem...its common wen intoxicated... 😆or anu..were u watchng ur hubs pic when writing it... 🤣 tat u got intoxicated.. LOLKhushi'will you give me the chance to pleasure you'to love you in all ways I can "nope..nope...no ..hell no...im noway commenting on this line... ☺️ ☺️but wait...i cnt just stop u see...ermm...is ths u actually!!!! 😲im officially gone nuts... 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢dint expct ths frm u... 😲 😲 😲 😲 u could wrte ths so elegantly... !!! my goodness... ⭐️moon was peeping inside from the sky through the window as the two souls become united to be one'sometimes shying and covering itself in the veil of clouds'lovely lines...maybe arnav hav betrayd her..but im sure wen he made her HIS completely...his mind must hav been overpowered with love...among the fluctuating LOVE and REVENGE mode he had... 😊She never knew submission can be so peaceful'can be so ethereal'can be so blissful'she felt divine'divine to give herself to a rightful person'trusting a right man to give her virginity'who will take care of her dignity and always protect her from evil'i felt pain reading this... 😭 😭 😭 poor kushi!!she heard his heartbeat'she placed her ear on his chest to hear his heartbeat which she knows only beat for her'wait a sec...wait wait... 😆 😆 😆 😆
i can read my angel's fantasies ....i swear its seriously not kushi...beware guys...plz dont beliv ths words to be kushi's ...anu cheated u all 🤣 🤣"Anayah'you are getting naughty day by day'is this a good manner to bite your mumma with you tooth'huh" said Khushi annoyingly then pouted.my mouth zipped...no commments...no comments... 😆Anayah knows how to convince her mumma'she said mum'mum'mum in her babyish tone'smiling and showing off her newly formed tooth and again started licking the milk innocently'awe'she can never be angry on her little Angel'she kissed her face and sang lullaby for her and made her sleep like always'and she too sleep with her'daughter calmly nestling in her mother's bosoms in her warmth'and the night went all lovingly'mumma's love... divine... 😭 hope god show mercy on me ...i want my mom... 😭 😭 😭"Yes'her eyes are just like her father's" replied Khushi with heavy heartah ha...im sure she is gonna flatter many guys in her teenage... aftral she hass his eyes yaar...
ahem... ☺️ wink...oh...no...update..im getting back wait... 😛Anayah made sounds like wooo'wooo'.and maa'maaa'and started pulling Khushi's dress.these are my sounds... 😭 wich i use to make u bend fr my demands ... 😛 anayah used them fr her mom...chal..no probs..anythng fr my baby 🤗She saw him'they were gazing in each other's eyes. She could notice his eyes which grew dark with desire'then with in a split of second, his eyes mellowed seeing her but again turned to be stony and harsh.ya rgt..ths is wht the true essence..ths is y EYES are said to be the window of hrt... 😊so he is the trustee...yummm..intrsting ths is... 😃lovely encounter...blast blast blast... 👏 👏 👏i hav no words to describe it...so good...her mangalsutra..his anger..her mocking..a lot..alot...loved it..."khu'khu'khushi'she'she is my baby" said Arnav who was filled with joy'damn...damn..damn... why do i end up having soft corner on him all time inspite of his deeds..i just dnt knw...uff...😕 😕 😕 😕loved the entire chap dear...👏awesum ...lovely...and kiddo...
u dint tell me hah!! 😊oh my god...
thats a awesome surprise...love u kiddo... 🤗
Originally posted by: momo121
Im busy in school projects so as of now I dont know when my turn is.
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