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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged
heya ppl... i am back with a new OS...payal wanted me to write something on arjun and roshni so here is how i think she might have died ConfusedCry  please tell me how is it...if its boring/sad/illogical then sorry Cry  and again i am reminding you that... i am error queen!Embarrassed so you know what to do...forgive me Embarrassed 
now b4 u all start getting annoyed at my bakwaas, lets begin.

Arjun opened his eyes to see the beautiful sun light caressing his face. He smiled. He stretched himself and pushed his hands to the other side of the bed to find the light of his life…..his roshni. He moved his hands only to find her not there. He got scared. he quickly got up and looked around. The whole room was decorated beautifully. He smiled again.Smile

Arjun- roshni…..?Smile

She came to him dressed in the saree he gifted her last night, with her hair flowing all over her face. She was having a tray with a cup of tea.

Roshni- kaise lag rahi hai meri saari???Big smile

Arjun- ahhh!! Tumse zyaada acchi nahi….Embarrassed

She chuckled and went to sit next to him. He had a dreamy look on his face.Big smile

Roshni- tum bhi na…aise matt dekho mujhe….jaldi se chai piyo…aaj chutti nahi hai tumhaari jo baith gaye smile karrte huye!LOL

She kept the cup there are got up to go when arjun pulled her back.Embarrassed

Arjun- mai kahi nahi jaa raha….Wink

Roshni- phir vahi baat…..jao!LOL

She smiled.Smile

Arjun- nahi…Smile

Roshni-...arjun……….SmileSmileSmile

Arjun- kyaa…….Embarrassed

Roshni- jaao….!SmileLOL

Arjun made a puppy face but roshni wasn't affected by it. She smiled again and pushed him away.LOL

Roshni- jaldi karo…late ho jaoge…..jaldi jaoge tabhi toh jaldi aaoge na?LOL

She got up and went to the kitchen.

After a while arjun went to the kitchen all dressed up.

Roshni- hmm…acche lag rahe ho…Embarrassed

Arjun- please…..mujhe nahi jaana…Ouch

He went to her and wrapped her in his arms….Smile

Roshni- paagal ho kya? Maine kaha na…… jaana padega…..LOL

He kissed her on her forehead.

Arjun- theek hai baba…..jaa raha hoon……mujhe pata hai ki mujhse bhi zyaada meri patni mere kaam se pyaar karti hain! Hai na?LOL

Roshni- arjun…… aisa nahi hai….lekin tumhaari duty koi normal duty nai hai! tum apna kaam karoge tabhi toh baaki log khush rahenge…! mujhse zyaada iss duniya ko tumhaari zaroorat hai!

Arjun- aur tum khush ho?Smile

Roshni- mai hamesha khush rahoongi….hamesha…. tum jaha bhi raho, hamesha mere paas rahoge….Embarrassed

Arjun- baap re….kuch zyaada hi films dekhne lagi ho na aaj kal!

They laughed.LOL

Roshni- abb chhoddo mujhe…..mai breakfast deti hoon….aaj tumhaara favourite hain sab kuch.Smile

Arjun- oh God! Muh me paani aagay…jaldi karo…mai wait karr raha hoon.Embarrassed

...

Finally arjun was all set to go and roshni went to the door to see him off.

Roshni- bye arjun.Embarrassed

Arjun came to her and hugged her. he kissed her forehead and caressed her cheek.

Arjun- I love you roshni….Embarrassed

Roshni- I love you too……Embarrassed

They looked at each other for few seconds and It felt as if these few seconds were years long…they could see so much in the eyes and could feel so many things at the same moment.

Roshni- jaao bhi….Embarrassed

She smiled and arjun left.Big smile

...

It was nearly evening.  Arjun was heading back to home. He called roshni.

Arjun- mai vaapas aa raha hoon dear….Big smile

Roshni- accha..mai bhi abhi ghar ke bahar hi pahuchi hoon…….

Arjun- tum kaha gayi thi?

Roshni- tumhaare liye gift lene….

Arjun- haye! ….abb toh mujhe jaldi-jaldi ghar aana hoga…

Roshni- tum car me ho? Drive karr rahe ho? Arjun…phone rakho!!!Confused

Arjun- accha-accha theek hai..theek hai……. ghar aake baat karoonga….gift tayyar rakhna…Wink

Roshni- haan-haan bilkul.Embarrassed

Roshni pulled her purse up to search for the house keys. She was so happy that day. She opened the door and went inside. She pressed the switches to switch on the lights, but in vain. She wondered what was wrong with the lights.

Roshni- lagta hai ligh chali gayi hai….

She kept the keys and gifts on the table and went inside to get a candle.

Roshni- pata nahi arjun iss baar mujhe kya gift dega….pichli baar ki tarah kahi phir kuch tattoo na banva le….paagal hai poora…..kitna dard hua hoga use…

She lighted the candle..

She again got a call from arjun.

Arjun- mai abhi traffic me phasa huya hoon…kya karoon???LOL

Roshni- ….bhagwaan tumhaari pareeksha le raha hai aaj…..LOL

Arjun- tum bhi na roshni…meri pareeksha toh tum le rahi ho….LOL

Roshni smiled Smileand turned around to find a man sitting on the sofa.Confused She couldn't see who he was, but she was scaredConfused. she looked around and found that the whole place was  surrounded by some people.

She gulped in and started sweating.ConfusedConfused

Roshni- aa-aarjun…please jaldi ghar aa jaoo….please….Confused

Arjun- ah! Abb aur bechain karo mujhe….yaar aise matt karo..mai phasa huya hoon….abb jaldi bulaane se kuch nahi hoga….

Roshni- arjun please…..jaldi karo…

Arjun- roshni?Confused

She was shocked.she saw the man who was on the sofa walk to her. He was tall man with black beard. He was looking like a terrorist or something. one of his eyes were artificial. He was a dreadful maniac.

She tried to scream but the man placed his hand on her mouth. The mobile and candle fell off.

Arjun- roshni????Shocked

He was furious. He got out of his car and ran…..he ran as fast as he could and finally reached his house… he opened the door and saw the dark room. He saw a small candle light on the table revealing the face of the man to him. He was surrounded by his fellow mates.

Arjun- sikandar?Shocked

Arjun moved in and he was caught by few of the men. Another man closed the door.

Sikandar- hello rawte sir….kaise hain aap? Mai abhi bhi yaad hoon aapko?Evil Smile

Arjun was angry , he was fuming.AngryAngry He was trying his best to release himself from the hold of the people who had held him.

Arjun- tujh jaise gaddaar ko kaise bhool sakta hoon mai….!!!Angry

Sikandar- (laughing)- haan…sahi kaha aapne…SIR! Mai bhi nai bhool sakta ki aapki vajah se maine apni ek aankh, apna parivaar, apni patni…sab kho diya…!Angry

Arjun- tera parivaar aur teri patni tujhe chhodd ke chale gaye kyuki vo bhi tujh jaise insaan ke saath nahi rehna chahte the……..

Sikandar- jo bhi vajah rahi ho…lekin abb mai tujhse apna badla leke rahoonga…Angry

Sikandar signaled his men to bring out roshni. he hands were tied and few of them brought her out.

Arjun felt as if he was half dead when he saw roshni….. the only part which felt alive was his hands, he wanted to save her and kill sikandar right there.

Arjun- sikandaaar!!!!!Angry

Roshni – arjun…..CryCry

Arjun- tumhe kuch nahi hoga roshni…mai hoon na…

Sikandar- haan bhaabhi ji…aapko kuch nahi hoga…..mujhe bass ek kaam hai arjun SIR se, mai karva loon, phir aap free hain!Evil Smile

Roshni- arjun tumhaara koi kaam nahi karega…..samjhe tum?Cry

Arjun- agar tune roshni ko nuksaan pahuchaya toh zindagi bhar pachtayega…!AngryAngryAngry

Sikandar- oho…mujhe phir se vo sholay vaala scene nahi chahiye arjun... iss baar tu mujhe nahi maar nahi sakta...tere haanth bandhe hain...…chup-chaap meri baat sun…..

A man brought papers to arjun with a pen.

Sikandar walked up to him.

Sikandar- inpe sign karr aur apni patni ko chhudda le… samjha? Tu toh sab kuch samajh hi jaata hai…hai na?Angry

Arjun- kya hai ye?AngryAngryAngry

Sikandar- ye? Kuch nahi..bass mujhe iss country se bahar jaane ke liye kuch document clear karvaane hain, tu sign karr de…phir mai azaad…!

Roshni- nahi arjun…..kabhi nahi!CryAngry

Arjun was in a dilemma, whether to chose his duty or his life?

Sikandar opened roshni's  tied arms. She ran to arjun and hugged him.

Arjun- tumhe kuch nahi hoga roshni.Cry

Just then someone separated them again. Arjun was feeling helpless..AngryAngryAngry

Sikandar- sign karoge ya nahi???Angry

Arjun- mai karr doonga sign……do mujhe paper…..

Roshni- nahi arjun, tum aisa karoge toh ye phir free ho jayega……tum jaante ho ye kitna khatarnaak hai, mujhe bachaane ke liye tum iske jaise jaanvar ko khula nahi chhodd sakte..please arjun..please…..mana karr do…!

Arjun-aur tumhe marr jaane doon?

Roshni was cryingCry…..but arjun was determined to save her life. He signed on the papers...

Sikandar- wah! Maan gaye aapko arjun sir……Evil Smile

He laughed.

Sikandar- maana ki aap vaade ke pakke hain, parr mai nahi hoon…Angry

He laughedEvil Smile again arjun was shocked. B4 arjun could make a move, som1 hit him hard from the back. He fell down.

Arjun-….sikandar...mai tujhe….

He tried hard to speak but he felt weak. He could only see roshni crying. She was trying to reach to him.

Sikandar- yaad hai arjun, tune mujhse kya kaha tha? "chahoon toh tujhe maar sakta hoon, leking mai chahta hoon ki saari zindagi tu apne kiye parr pachtaaye" abb mai tujhse kehta hoon….chahoon toh tujhe maar sakta hoon….

He went to him and looked at him in anger.

Sikandar- lekin mai chahta hoon ki tu zindagi bhar iss pachtave me jiye, ki tu apni patni ko nahi bacha paaya….kitna kamzor hai tu!AngryAngryAngry

Saything so he got up and stabbed roshni. she fell down.

Arjun- roshniii!!!Shocked

He was helpless, he couldn't do anything but cry.Cry

Sikandar- bohot pyaar karta hai na apni patni se……Angry

He made a cut mark on his arms where her name was written.

Sikandar- abb zindagi bhar ye sochna ki teri saari taakat, saari himmaat, saari training, teri patni ko kyu nahi bacha paayi…

Sikandar walked away. Arjun tried to hold roshni's hand, but he only heard her say her last word "arjun" and everything went black.

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that't it guyzz... ghatiya tha? sorry Cry accha tha? thnku Big smile and i had a confusion whether roshni died on the same anniversary night when arjun made the tattoo or not so i used my own imagination LOL plzz tell me how it was, and what all mistakes did this error queen do now!LOL

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 2:30am | IP Logged
itna bakwaas hai kya??? koi cmnt karke ye bhi nahi bata raha ki kitna bakwaas hai!! CryCry iss cmnt/like bhooki pyaasi ko itna matt tadpaao!!!Cry

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 2:44am | IP Logged
OMG...
Rimjhim,it was really beautiful.
Kisne kaha ki yeh bakwas hai.
I really loved it.
Starting mujhe bohut accha laga...
Ending ne mujhe sach me rula diya...
U r really an amazing writer.
Loved this story.
It was very emotional in the end...
Loved it again.
Main iss story ko bookmark karke rakkha hai,so that,i can read it many more times,because,this has become my favorite story.
Love u,dear.

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Aww thank u so much dear
title apt!!
start was superb
end was emotional
sik i want to kill him
its just awesum
thank so much again
love u
tc
hugs n congo
all d best dear!
lovely writen..!

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Very emotional and superb work Rj :-)

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zebbie

OMG...
Rimjhim,it was really beautiful.
Kisne kaha ki yeh bakwas hai.
I really loved it.
Starting mujhe bohut accha laga...
Ending ne mujhe sach me rula diya...
U r really an amazing writer.
Loved this story.
It was very emotional in the end...
Loved it again.
Main iss story ko bookmark karke rakkha hai,so that,i can read it many more times,because,this has become my favorite story.
Love u,dear.
thnku dear ...love u too Hug

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Payal_156

Aww thank u so much dear
title apt!!
start was superb
end was emotional
sik i want to kill him
its just awesum
thank so much again
love u
tc
hugs n congo
all d best dear!
lovely writen..!
thnks dear... sorry for making you wait so long...Big smile

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Posted: 03 April 2013 at 8:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aliya_begh

Very emotional and superb work Rj :-)
thnks aliya Embarrassed

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