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Virman SS:Virat pampering Manvi (part2) (Page 4)

virumanu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
wrong time yaar plz cntinue soon

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hemameenu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
wow so cute awesome os waiting for ur update dear and pm me the link dear

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athniamanvi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Churri

Please do pm me when you update it..It was a good start
thanks dear..Smile

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 9:20am | IP Logged
eekhs..!! amazing OS :D plz cnte nd pm me :D
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nice update soon
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Edited by yaminnthida - 02 May 2013 at 9:31am
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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by alicemath

Cute n lovely os...
Poor viru...well...luvd it...
Plz do cum up wid more n...wud luv if u cont this...
Pm me weevr u pendwn.. Smile
Monkey Winks Cici

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athniamanvi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
hey this is athira again...and i am back with the 2nd part of this SS.
i love virman because of their cute nok jok, the openness , the friendliness and some thing that binds them ... really cannot be explained with words.

Let me tell u a rough idea. This story was of the time when virat came back from the outhouse just like as in the serial.

Virman SS : virat pampering manvi 




V: achha? Deekhta hoon tumhaare pange mein kitni dam hai'

(saying this he comes close to her..)

M: ye tum kya karne waale ho?

V: abhi pata chalega..

(coming more closer to her..he holds her by her waist..she feels a sudden shiver all over  body)

He then leans forward ..more closer..closer..


Virat comes even more closer. She understood his intentions  and pushes him. But her strength wasn't enough to move him .

M: (blushing) virat meri chaai..

V : bbhaad mein jaaye chaai. Ab tho main tumhe pamper karke hi chodunga.

M:acha? Tho kaise karthe hai pamper, virat?

V: abhi bataata hoon ki pampering kaise karte hai. Batau?

M: aur kaun bathaayeega?

V: soch lo ?

M: itna footage kyu kha rahe ho. Point pe aao na seedha- seedha..

V: teek hai.point pe aatha hoon.( saying this he holds her more tightly. 

This makes manvi close her eyes. She unknowingly places her palm on his chest. He leans closer to her, nuzzling her neck with his nose. He hid his face between her hair. He moves back and places a soft kiss on her right cheek. She clutches his shirt. he removes her hair from her left cheek and place her palm over there. Both of them were breathing heavily. He holds her face with his palm and moves her face towards him, their lips inches apart. Just then someone knocks on the door.)

V: arre yaar…. ho gaya mere pampering ka sathyanash.( manvi smiles blushingly)

(and who was at the door? None other than jeevika)


J: mannu… tu andher hai?

V: arre ,iss bhabhi ko abhi aana tha?

J:andher koi hai?..ye darwaaza kisne bandh kiya hai? Mannu… khol na..

V:bhabhi andher hum dono nahi haiii

(manvi covers his mouth with her palm)

M: kya keh rahe ho tum…pagal? (she slaps him on his shoulder)

V: ouch! Maara kyu? Apne pati ko koi marthe hai kya?

J: mannu!

M: haa dii, ayii.  Chodo virat..(still he doesn't leave her. She pushes him with all her strength )

V: arre ruko na yaar………( damn irritated)

(she opens the door.)

M: kya hua dii kyu current maar rahi ho?

J: kya mannu itni der kyu ki?  Chodo. Lunch ka time ho gaya hai. Chalo neeche.. Tum dono ko khana nahi khana kya?  

V: bhabhi… main  manvi se yehi bata raha tha. (manvi glares angrily at virat)

 J: aur vaise bhi aaj raath ko ghar mein pooja rakhi hai.

M: pooja? Kis liye dii?

J: tum dono ab iss ghar mein vaapas aa gaye ho , tho issi khushi mein maa ne ye pooja rakhi hai.

M: humare liye? (excited)

J: ha tumhaare liye. Aur ab chal, lunch ke liye. Aur usske baad tumhe mera help karna hai prasaad banana ke liye.

V: bhabhi aap MANVI se help maang rahe ho aur vo bhi PRASAD banaane ke liye.

M: kyu? Main kyu nahi bana sakthi. Shaayad tumhe yaad nahi ki outhouse mein ek mahee ne ke liye maine hi tumhaare liye khaana banaaya thaa.

V: ha ek maheene tho maine khaa li, par aur nahi….. bhabhi seriously..?

J: virat tum bhi na. mannu tu jaldi aa ja.

(jeevika leaves. Manvi is all fuming in anger.)

V: ye bhabhi bhi na. har baar galat time mein aa jaathi hai.(turning to manvi) ab hum apne pampering continue kare?

M: pampering gayi bhaad mein. ( she tries to leave.)

V: arre partner , main tho mazaak kar raha tha (holding her wrist). I am sorry…. (manvi still angry.)

Sorry (holding his ears… this melts manvi and she smiles at him.)

M: tum itne bheek maang rahe tho, cholo, maine tumhe maaf kar di.

V: thank u very much meri maa….

M: acha teek hai main kitchen jaathi hoon.

V: aur main baahar.

M: baahar?

V: vo raath ko ma ne hamaare liye pooja rakhi hai na, tho maine socha ki chalo sab ke liye gifts le letha hoon aur sabko surprise de detha hoon.


V: ha surprise vadhera bahu. Ab chalo jaake apna farz nibhaao…

m: haa vadhera bahu!.




At night, virman's room. Virman getting ready for the pooja. Virat was arranging the gifts.

M: ready kar dii apni surprise?

V: maine bola than na, ki apni pehli salary se sabke liye gifts khareedunga..?

M: wow virat dikhaao dikhaao…

(virat shows her all the gifts..) (manvi searches for her gift…..)

M: virat mera gift kaha hai? Dikhaao na jaldi. main bhi deekhu, ki tumhe mere choice ke bare mein kitni jaankaari hai. Virat main bol rahi hoon, agar mujhe gift pasand nahi aayi tho tum tho gaye kaam se.

V: ( he makes a SORRY face) manvi …. Vo main…

M: ye VOO VO  kya karke rakha hai virat? mera gift …..( she extends her hand asking for the gift)

V: vo kya hai na mavi. Maine saare gharvaalon ke liye itne saare gifts khareed li, tho itne mein meri  salary khattam ho gayi…. Tho main tumhaare liye gift… nahi le paaya….. ( he closes his eyes tight , expecting her to shout at him. )( her smile fades away)

M: koi baath nahi virat…. ( she gives an unexpected answer.) ghar vale bahut khush honge tumhe responsible hote dekh kar. Ab chale. Pooja shuru ho jaayega, nahi tho saara impression kharaab ho jaayega.




Vanshika: beta manvi ka gift kaha hai?

(virman looks at each other. Manvi's smile fades away)..

(next part is more like romantic)


. thats it for now... stay tuned for the next part..

Love Athira. Heart


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