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new SS -Hamara pyar ka Desh updated Chp 49/ pg 95

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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Hey aall,

So finally i tried something to write that i always till now imagine.. agar yesa hota toh kya hota in kis desh.. mere dil ke sare scene i have written to irritate u guys...

please tolerate ok. Wink and yeah feel free to complain as i know here there are many excellenet writers and creators. Tongue Tongue Smile

so here it goes...
  This starts from the point heer knows gaurav is her prem, and prem confess his identity infront of heer. Heer tries alot to convenience Prem but fails to stop him. prem forces heer to tell family that he is gaurav not Prem but when heer refuse to do so.. here comes the drama

                                              Chapter 1

Prem - heer.. pls baat ko samjh ne ki kosis karo? tum  kyun itna jidh kar rahi ho?

Heer- ( with tears ) mein samjh ne ki kosis karu? mein jidhi hu? tum khud ko kyun nai dekhte..??? agar tume jana hii tha ttoh aaye kyun? rishab ke sath meri sadhi rook ka so called  mahanta dekhane ki kya jarurat thi..??? if u wanted me to move on then u should have let me move on with rishab?

Prem - ( shouts ) HEEERRR..!!! bakwas band karo apna...

Heeer - Kyun..?/ chub raha hai? thik hi toh kaha na? aaj nai toh kal mujhe rishab se pyar ho hii jata sath rehene ke baad... adat ban jata woh meri.. uske sath meri family hoti... bache hote...


Prem- ( shouts in anger by holding her to the shoulder and cornering her in the wall between his hands in wall ) I said SHUT UP...!!!  nai aana chahata tha mein.. par woh aacha nai tha.. samjhi tum.. ??? woh tumko kavi khus nai rakhta.. torch er karta jindagi bhar... !! yeh sab jaane ke baad u expect me to leave u on ur haal...!!! HAhhh???? mein chaha ta hu tum kisi aache insan ke sath...


Heer- BAAASSS..!!! isseee aageee nai... ( in wide eyes with anger ) ( by crying )Accha hota agar yesa hii karte... kam se kaam aajj yeh dukh toh jel na padta.. ek baar bardast kar ke uuth chuki thi tumse hamesa ke liye duur hone ka Gham se.. samjha liya tha maine aapne aap ko? haar chuki thi.. maar chuki thii andar see... !!! paar aab.. mein tumse judai bardast nai kar sakti... nai rehe sakti tum se duur.. nai hoga phir se mujh se samjhota.. !!! NAi kar sakti... nai karsakti ( gets down to the floor in broken down state.. cries hard )


Prem - ( takes her from floor and hugs tight ) I love u heer.. i love u ( cries ) both hugs...

Aaageee.. kya hoga.. ?? if u guys are interested then.. do tell me... i will continue...



Edited by luv.Harshiti - 28 July 2014 at 12:18am

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Awesome start ...Clap
please continue ...
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FABULOUSE PLEASE CONTINUE...
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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 1:28am | IP Logged
wow great...u started new SSParty
chapter-1 was fabulous...Clap
want to read more...pls do cont soonThumbs Up
add pls add me in ur PM list also..if have oneEmbarrassed
keep writing Hug
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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiran_28

wow great...u started new SSParty
chapter-1 was fabulous...Clap
want to read more...pls do cont soonThumbs Up
add pls add me in ur PM list also..if have oneEmbarrassed
keep writing Hug


Thanks Kiran.. but sorry.. i i will update only.. i m nt familiar with Pm process much. so..

and i am waiting for ur update of two FF.. soon please and PREMEER MORE PLEASE
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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv.Harshiti

Originally posted by kiran_28

wow great...u started new SSParty
chapter-1 was fabulous...Clap
want to read more...pls do cont soonThumbs Up
add pls add me in ur PM list also..if have oneEmbarrassed
keep writing Hug


Thanks Kiran.. but sorry.. i i will update only.. i m nt familiar with Pm process much. so..

and i am waiting for ur update of two FF.. soon please and PREMEER MORE PLEASE
i'll try my best to update soon Embarrassed

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Posted: 02 April 2013 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by premeermania

ohooo...someone finally showing her talent Big smile you must continue. we'll be able to know how much same imagination we all have Embarrassed all the best




Thanks Muna.. and thanks for Inspiring me to write.. hahahh.. after u I started.. Big smile

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