premeer os : forever yours

Posted: 11 years ago
hello deshianz 🤗  I'm here with an os. this story is written on the background of premeer reunion on 27th march 2009 where prem confessed that he is heer's prem   and then prem comes back finally on 10th april. I've written my imagination on those episodes, how i expected the episodes would be 😳 please forgive spelling and grammar error.
                                                 
                                                    
                                                      

                 Forever yours

Heer couldn't sleep last night. She got her life 

back in herself after prem confessed that he is her prem not gaurav. He was acting as gaurav. Heer thought her days of utmost sorrow have come to an end but no! Destiny is still playing hide and seek with her. Prem wants to go. He wants to stay away from his family during his last days. He doesn't want his family to see him die one more time. Heer has strong belief that nothing will happen to prem.  He has returned from the door of death in such a terrible blast, god must has decided to keep prem and heer always together. But prem is adamant. He has decided to leave juneja house.

In the morning Heer is absent mindly working 

in the kitchen. Her mind is roaming around 

prem. Suddenly she cuts her finger with knife. 

It was large enough and blood was coming out 

terribly. Meher watches this and runs to get 

the first-aid box. In the way she meets prem 

and tells him that heer has cut her hand.

Heer is in her bedroom with bandaged finger

. The family members have told her not to work that day. Prem enters the room with breakfast for heer. He gives the food to heer. He wants to speak to her but gets a call. He goes out of the room. Heer doesn't feel like eating the breakfast. She feels bore so goes downstairs to see if she can find some work to do. She notices curtains of one of the windows in the living room are still not moved aside. She goes towards the window but suddenly feels dizzy. She nearly falls on the ground but prem holds her. Prem's face was full of anxiousness thinking about heer's health. He takes her to their bedroom. Then he finds that the foods are still untouched. Prem becomes angry.

 Prem "what is this heer? Why haven't you eaten the food? Now see you are feeling dizzy. You very well know doesn't having breakfast make you weak but still you are careless. In the kitchen you cut your finger. You never take care of yourself heer. I always tell you hundred times please heer take care of yourself but no!"  

If situation was not like this heer would be very scared hearing his voice. Prem is extremely angry. But heer softly says "then you take care of me" Heer looks directly into prem's eye. Prem becomes silent. He could no longer be angry on heer. Heer never had to request to prem for taking care of her. He was always there for her. Today she said this in a way like she was begging to him to be with her. Prem couldn't answer her. He tried to move away but heer holds his hand. Prem doesn't turn around.

Prem "I'm leaving tomorrow morning before

 anyone wakes up. As you know I've planned

 everything so that you can prove to them that

 I'm gaurav. They will be sad first but after

 sometimes they will be ok." Saying this prem

 leaves. Again tear fills up heer's eyes.


Today there is a small function with close 

relatives and friends in the evening. Prem is

 trying to ignore doing any kind of works. He is

 trying not to behave like prem, though no one

 is giving any attention to this as they are

 happy that finally the family is together. Prem

 came back, Maya-Harman are back, the

 business is getting developed gradually. So

 everyone wants to spend some happy moments

 together. In the afternoon one of the servants

 inform prem that someone is searching for

 heer. Prem goes at the door and finds a young

 gentleman.


Stranger "hello I'm rajveer"

prem " hello. Sorry but I don't know you."

rajveer " heer knows me. I'm her childhood 

friend."

Prem becomes confused that he doesn't know

 about him. He brings rajveer inside the house.

 Heer comes and then both heer and rajveer

 smiles. They hug each other. Prem is looking at

 them.

 Heer "prem. this is my friend rajveer. he

 used to live in ambala. We went to the same

 school. After finishing school he left ambala.

 Then we contacted through phone. But for last

 few years we lost our communication."

Rajveer " oh you are prem! Nice to meet you.

 Actually few days back I called heer and

 collected your home's address" rajveer moves

 his hand towards prem to shake hands. Prem

 shakes hand with him. 

Prem "Thank you for

 coming. Today we have a small party here. You

 have to stay till dinner."

rajveer " Family program? Then I'll be a

 stranger. Sorry I didn't know"

heer " Stop talking stupidly. What do you mean

 by stranger? You are my friend. Come with me.

 Meet my family."

Then prem notices heer introducing rajveer to

 everyone. Heer spends all the time with

 rajveer. Heer is in a painful situation. She only

 knows her prem wants to leave her alone. But

 she can't show it. She has to pretend to be

 happy. Moreover, her friend has come to meet 

her after long time. She has to talk to him and

 give company to him. In this situation she can 

only pray that god does something so that prem doesn't leave.

Prem becomes a little irritated to see the

 closeness of heer and rajveer. Already he is

taking a big step of his life, more on that the

 new scene in front of his eyes is making his 

condition worst.


Heer is glancing at prem now and then. Prem is 

also in same condition. The house is filled with 

guests. After lots of gossiping foods are 

served. Prem for some reason goes to the 

terrace and finds rajveer talking over phone. rajveer in phone " yeah! finally I met her. She 

has become more beautiful you know. Looks 

like nothing has changed. In all these year I 

couldn't forget her. Hope this time some 

decisions come out."

Hearing this prem gets shocked. " Rajveer 

loves heer!!! Does heer know this? If she knew 

she must have told me."


A very disturbed Prem returns to the party. 

Everyone is enjoying the party. A small dance 

session is arranged. Prem notices that rajveer 

is going towards heer. Prem suddenly feels  like running towards heer before him. He reaches to heer in a rush before rajveer. Heer looks at him confusedly that why was he coming so hurriedly! Before rajveer could say anything prem grabs heer's hand and takes her to the dance floor. Everyone applause for them. Prem is unable to look at her. He is trying to make it easy to leave the house but now he is keeping heer so closer to him. Heer is surprised to see that prem is holding her very possessively but he is not looking at her. Prem and heer has a conversation in a very low voice.

Heer " Prem is there any problem? do you want 

to tell me something?"

Prem "no...no problem. why are you asking like 

this? by the way why haven't you tell me about  rajveer?"

Heer " sorry prem that's really my fault. I've 

not tell you about all my friends. I'm feeling 

bad that I have not remember them in these 

days. He is really nice guy. He used to help me 

lot during school."

Prem "hmm. Is he going to stay here few days?"

Heer " yeah prem. Prem one of rajveer's friend 

is very good doctor. Let's go to him. May be you have got wrong reports. Or there must be cure of your problem. Prem you can't leave like this. We should try"

Prem " why are you living in a false hope heer? 

I've told you I don't have much times. I had to 

come back because of rishab. Now my job is 

finished here. I'm sorry." says prem coldly.

Heer " for me prem please. just for me please let's go to doctor."

Preet shouts out loudly " guys guys how long 

will you dance? We are also here. You have 

forgotten us. You can talk after party. Now 

give attention to us please."


Premeer become awkward hearing this and 

realizes that they were lost in their 

conversation and forgot that they are in a 

party.


That night after the party rajveer is still at 

juneja family. The whole family is having nice 

time with rajveer. There is no sign to go to 

bed. Rajveer with his baskets of stories is 

having nice time with lalit. Preet is there to 

make the time full of masti. Prem becomes 

angry seeing the condition. He becomes more 

angry seeing heer there. He can't even call 

heer because he doesn't have anything to say her. 

Saying good night he goes to bed. But he is 

unable to sleep. How can anyone sleep when he 

knows his wife's friend love her and she is very close to him.

"What is your problem prem? You are leaving this house tomorrow morning. Now you can't always look after everything. You have to leave heer in her condition. After you she will have to live with someone. She can't always live a life of widow. You want her to move on in her life after you. Then why are you behaving like this?" Prem's mind says. But he is unable to find any answer. Prem and heer both are unable to sleep. Prem has totally forgotten that he has to leave next day morning. He is engrossed in the thought of rajveer and heer. On the other hand heer is thinking how to stop prem from going. She is afraid if she sleeps, prem will leave without telling her. But  very early in the morning they fall asleep.

In the morning heer wakes up at 8.00 am. When she opens her eyes she finds prem missing in the couch. Heer runs out of the room and finds prem in the dining table with gayatri. She becomes happy that prem hasn't leave. She very well knows from the inner of heart prem wants some reason to stay at his home. But his feeling of responsibility and immense love towards his family is compelling him to take such decisions.

 

Prem comes back to his room to take his 

phone. Heer comes out of washroom wearing a red sari. Prem eyes become glued at her. For the first time heer has worn a sari after their marriage. Heer wipes her hair; adorn herself with lots of bangles which she always wears after getting married. After few minutes heer is looking like a perfect newlywed woman. Prem comes back to the reality from the dreamy session of his love towards his wife by a phone call. Prem cuts the call and tries to hurry for his office. Heer comes to him and adjusts his tie. Today heer's face is radiant with a smile which was missing last few days. Prem feels happy to see her all smiling as he can do anything to keep her smiling like this. But at the same time he is trying hard to divert his mind from heer to his works to stop himself from staring at her.

 Heer "Please prem don't say no. I've made an 

appointment with the doctor. It's on 12.30. We 

will go to doctor and then have launch 

together, ok?"

Prem "I have important meetings today but I'll try to manage the time." He says with an indifferent face.

At 12.00 Prem calls heer. Heer picks up the 

phone. Prem hears a male voice talking around 

heer. It's rajveer. He is talking about shopping 

and is in a very rush.


Heer " hello prem! Prem I'm very sorry prem we won't be able to go now. Rajveer has changed our appointment to doctor in the afternoon. I've to go with him in shopping and right now we are going inside the shopping mall. It's very urgent you know! I'll tell you in details later" 

Rajveer "hurry up heer. You have time to talk 

with him later. But I don't have time yaar!"

Heer "sorry prem bye"

Heer cuts the call before prem could say 

anything else.


Prem's face becomes red in anger. He couldn't 

believe heer is giving more importance to 

rajveer than him! Rajveer's shopping is more 

important than his health this thought makes 

him throw some files of his office table to the 

ground.

Heer has been calling prem for a long time. But 

prem is not picking up the phone. She has 

called in the office number but they told prem 

has left office after 12.00 and hasn't come 

back. Heer is tensed about prem. She has 

understood that prem has felt bad. She comes 

back home and waits for prem. The 

appointment time is finished. Heer makes tea 

for everyone in the evening. At that time prem 

returns home. He goes in his room without 

meeting anyone. Heer goes to her room 

preparing how to say sorry to prem. Prem is 

sitting on his bed in the dark room. His coat is 

lying on the couch.

Heer switches on the light and goes towards 

him. She puts her hand on prem's shoulder.

Heer "Prem where have you been? You were not picking up my phone. I was so worried. I'm really sorry prem rajveer..."

Prem " rajveer, rajveer, rajveer...I'm fed up 

of hearing his name. If you have any other 

excuses then tell me" he is not shouting but 

with a fully angry voice he looks at heer. Heer 

finds his eyes red. She tries to understand the situation but fails. She again tries to say 

something to prem but prem's voice overcomes 

her.

Prem "What's his problem? Why he is buying 

bracelet for you? Doesn't he have any time 

sense that anytime he takes you with him for 

shopping?"


Heer "he hasn't give me any bracelet" then she 

thinks how does prem know about bracelet.

Prem "I went to the mall but then I thought 

maybe I would be unwanted there"

Heer becomes surprised hearing this.

Heer "Prem what is happening to you? It's just 

he shifted our appointment another time. It 

was really important for him."

Prem "I can understand heer everyone has 

their own priority"

Heer becomes astonished hearing this. "Prem is thinking I'm giving priority someone else over him!" Heer's eyes become full of tears. She grabs his hand with her one hand and puts her other hand on his face. 

Heer "Prem you come first to me before anyone else. Please don't be so angry. Rajveer needed my help'"

This time prem becomes a bit loud and says 

"Stop calling that name. It's irritating me. 

Don't you think his behavior is weird?"

Heer "prem what are you talking about? He is 

my friend. In this time when he needs my help 

how can I ignore him? In this city I'm the only 

known person of him. After long time he has 

got chance to move on in his life I should help 

him."

Heer continues "Rajveer met naina in his 

college. In the middle of college naina dropped 

the college and went to another city with her 

parents. Rajveer likes her but couldn't tell her. 

After all these year he has found her again and now he wants to propose her. Today is naina's birthday. So he rushed to buy something for her. He wants to propose her today. He was very happy to find her. Now I couldn't say no to him. He needs his friend in this time."

Prem becomes shocked to hear this. Rajveer 

was talking about naina on phone the 

previous day. Prem feels strangely and immensely relaxed. He is unable to realize what is happening to him. The time he has seen heer with rajveer he has forgotten about his disease, his decision to prove prem dead once again. He has only known that he hates the thought of rajveer bein with heer, his heer. Then prem and heer hear rajveer's voice who is shouting at the top of his voice. They hear other people's voice downstairs.

In the living room rajveer is taking blessings 

of lalit and gayatri.

Meher, preet, Harman,maya, kulraaj are also 

present there.

Rajveer " uncle, aunty give me blessing. I'm 

going to get married!"


lalit and gayatri happily congratulate him. Preet " 

ohooo you are cool as me! so fast!!! just came 

here two days ago and convinced a girl for 

marriage." Then preet whispers in his ear " you 

could tell me. I wouldn't mind giving you some 

tips. You could manage 2-3 girls at a time." 

Preet then winks at him. Seeing this Meher 

tries to overhear what he was saying but fails. 

She glares at preet and preet gives her " I've 

done nothing" look.

Everyone congratulates rajveer. When prem 

and heer comes downstairs rajveer first hugs 

heer and then prem and smiles crazily. Rajveer 

" guys she agreed! you won't believe how much 

nervous I was. I was sweating heavily. She was 

so shocked to see me at first and more on that 

I proposed her. She couldn't say anything at 

first but later when I asked her again she said 

yes. I'm so happy now"

Prem " congrats! so very soon we are going to 

get wedding invitation, right?"

Heer " yeah prem. btw rajveer did she like the 

bracelet? "

Rajveer " yes she loved it. she thanked you. 

She will call you later."

Then everyone teases him about wedding and 

he tells them he is going back to his parent's 

place so that the two families can talk mutually 

and fix the wedding date.

In the night Prem goes in the outhouse. He 

smiles his cute encounter with heer when he 

first found her in his own home. Prem goes 

towards the window as he knows heer would 

always stand near it and look at the moon. 

Today prem is visiting all the places in his home where he and heer had their very own moments without notice of anyone. prem goes to the room where prem confessed his feeling towards heer. It's the place where heer saw prem's possessiveness towards her. He was ready to give heer's hand to any person who would be right for her.But today he prays that nobody can be with prem. He wants to claim that he is the one who is the only suitable person for heer. When he was dying he told heer to not only live only for his family but also for her. He told her to live her life with someone close. Now he wants that such day never come in their life that heer has to be with someone else rather than him. He wants every single moment of his life to be with heer and he can never give away a single moment of heer's life to someone. Now prem knows he can't see heer with anyone else.

In premeer's bedroom prem finds heer missing 

and stands near the window, favourite place of 

heer where she looks at moon and thinks about 

prem. After few minutes he feels two hands 

moving closer to his chest as heer hugs him from back.

Heer " prem are you still angry?"

Prem " no heer. I'm sorry I scolded you without knowing the truth. but thanks god rajveer got what he wanted"

Heer releases her hand and comes in front of 

prem.


heer " prem don't be scared. I'm with you. 

Nothing will happen to you. I believe in god 

prem that he will never separate us again..."

prem "ssshhh"

Prem puts his forhead on heer's, his nose 

touching heer's and check touching heer's (like 

the confession scene)

Prem "heer I don't care what doctors say! 

Whether I live 50 more years or 50 more 

minutes I just want to be with you. If I have 

few minutes still I'll take care of you. I just 

want you to be with me always" Tears roll 

down from prem's eye. Heer wipes away his tears and plants a kiss on his eyes. Heer "I'll always be there with you prem".  Prem " never let me go anywhere heer. keep me with you. even if I say in my dream that I'll leave you bind me with you tightly. I was so stupid heer! I was so stupid that I stayed away from you and was going to do the same" says prem with a little trembling voice. Heer says smilingly " I'll keep you bound with me with thick,strong rope. for your kind information we are going to doctor tomorrow" And they hug each other tightly.

 prem bhai, heer bhabi" shouts preet.

"di come and see what has happened" shouts 

meher with a worried face.

Premeer comes out of their room afraid. 

preet-meher are standing outside prem-heer's 

room.


Preet " see pb what is dad saying. I've tried a 

lot to stop him. but he is so stubborn. dad is not listening to anyone"

premeer and meet enters their parents room.

lalit " prem I've something to give you"

Prem " what's dad? what is preet saying?"

lalit " you and heer are going to honeymoon!"

prem and heer become silent. heer is unable to 

meet prem's eyes.

preet " pb tell him na you don't want to go. I 

know you and bhabi always want to stay with 

us. bhabi won't be able to stay away from us 

for even 2-3 days, right bhabi?"

meher " di I'll miss you. you will miss me too I 

know."

heer is in such an awkward situation that she is completely stunned. She doesn't know what to reply. Prem is stealing glances at her. His heart is dancing hearing about honeymoon. But preet is creating problem in his love life! He wants to grab his collar.

Gayatri " premeer will go to honeymoon that is 

final. heer take the tickets. your flight is next 

Saturday" gayatri hands over the tickets to 

heer.

Preet " but see they are not even interested. 

give us those tickets"

 preet tries to take the tickets from heer but 

prem stops him. After this act prem becomes 

all red. At that moment heer nearly runs to

leave the room. preet and meher go after heer 

with huge teasing. Prem also goes after them. 

Lalit and gayatri laughs watching their children.


Prem somehow manages to send preet and 

meher to their room as they left no stone 

unturned to make premeer blush. Prem tries to 

bend and carry heer in his arams but heer 

moves away from prem.

heer " prem what are you doing"

Prem "Practicing. We are going to honey moon. 

so what do you think what is going to happen 

there?" smirks prem.

heer "preeemmm!"

Prem " heeer!"

Heer runs away and prem runs behind her.

Thus premeer starts a new journey of their 

life. They don't know what is waiting for them 

in the future. But they are ready to walk the 

path together whatever comes in their way.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb OS ...loved it ...👍🏼
Please keep writing more ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its really very nice Muna. U are gr8 creator. Now even i m thinking to write smth...

but yeh.. complaint of mine on it.. which i felt...Rajveer and Jealousy track thoda lamba hota toh maaza aata... and Honeymoon scene complete karo... hehhehee 😉

WE  WANT HONEYMOON SCENE TO BE WRITTEN... :) and yeh.. how prem will stay there... sab kuch complete karo.. it should be SS nt OS.!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome os yaar
so cute...love the possessive prem 😳
Preet and meherare really very adorable..
I luv the way they were teasing their siblings hahaha
Aww i wish u could write honeymoon scene also 😳
But anyways..all over it was fantastic..
Keep writing...
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveHarshAddit

Superb OS ...loved it ...👍🏼

Please keep writing more ...


thanks for reading and appreciating 

Posted: 11 years ago


thanks for reading and appreciating 




Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

Its really very nice Muna. U are gr8 creator. Now even i m thinking to write smth...

but yeh.. complaint of mine on it.. which i felt...Rajveer and Jealousy track thoda lamba hota toh maaza aata... and Honeymoon scene complete karo... hehhehee 😉

WE  WANT HONEYMOON SCENE TO BE WRITTEN... :) and yeh.. how prem will stay there... sab kuch complete karo.. it should be SS nt OS.!!!




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Wow awesome os yaar
so cute...love the possessive prem 😳
Preet and meherare really very adorable..
I luv the way they were teasing their siblings hahaha
Aww i wish u could write honeymoon scene also 😳
But anyways..all over it was fantastic..
Keep writing...


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Posted: 11 years ago
muna  awasome os 🤗
so cute...love the possessive prem ...

so muna every one want  to continue honeymoon scene 😉 i told u at night 

keep writing muna 

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: additi11

muna  awasome os 🤗
so cute...love the possessive prem ...

so muna every one want  to continue honeymoon scene 😉 i told u at night 

keep writing muna 



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