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virman ss:milna hi ta.. part 27 page 52(30 march) (Page 6)

parthnitiholics Senior Member

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Posted: 14 June 2013 at 10:26am | IP Logged
*********************part 8**********************

its being half n hour complte silence in virat's car
virat looking at manvi with corner eyes...but she is luking out as finding some of her answers from the outside greenry n lonely road
by breaking the silence virat got an idea...he switch on the radio
rj-pyar...pyar kya h 
customer from rj-pyar  ..bht pyara ehsas h ek br sbko hota h ...
rj-pyar ka ehsas kaise hota h 
c-pyar ka ehsas koi din..ya time ka mohtaj nhi h 
manvi got irritated with this pyar word...but virat is lots in this love part talkings
m(shout on virat)-stop this nonsence n switch on this radio
virat come out of his trance..
manvi switch off the radio n then strted luking out
manvi feeling guiting shouting on a famous star n switching off the radio of this car...
m-kadi rokiye...
v(shoked n confuse)-what...hum abi nhi pahuhe...
m-mi apna rasta khud dhnd logi...
v-mgr mumbai. h ...
m(to virat)-janti hoo mumbai hoo..yaha ane se pehle ticket mi saf saf mumbai likha dekha ta maine padhi likhi hoo mi...
v-mera mtlb vo nhi ta..mera mtlb hum dono ek hi jaga jare h mi wahi jara hoo...
m-plsss.ap gadi rokenge..
virat stop the car
v-lo rok di gadi..mgr plss...mere sath hi chlo...
m-listen..mi nhi chahti meri waja se ap apni car mi vo na kr ske jo ap krna chahte..jaise plss.apne raste jaiye mi apna rasta khud dhnd logi
v-what rasta rasta..ek hi rasta h hmara...
virat n manvi silnce for sometime n had a eye lok...
when a truck horn loudly n ethey brok the eye..
manvi open the door
v-manvi plsss...
m-mi apko wahi milti hoo mere pass adress h kaha jana h ..
manvi come out of the car reach auto sit in it n left
virat feeling wired aftr her leaving..he drov as soon as he that..when manvi reach there he should b there...

in half n hour  virat reach the set
he entred searching for manvi...but she was not founf..his cast members jeevika,viren and tanya  came all greated gud morning...
v-guyzz manvi ai h kya...
vi-manvi yaha...nhi too
v-haa(he told about rajat n her convo)..abi tk nhi ai...
its being an hour virat was getting restless...where is manvi..y didnt hshe reachd here still

virat didnt even took her number...
virat was shooting his scene but agin n again his eyes place on door to search manvi
its evening manvi is still not there..he atlast call home 
v-maa virat..
va-ha bolo beta...
v-ma manvi waha ai h kya
va-nhi voto subh hi tumhare sath gaiti...
v-what/ mi bad mi bt krta hoo...

evryone seeing him restless for n reason the girl he meet 2 days ago for her ..huh
its being 6 in evening when virat thinking what do to..whether inform police or what..
when he heard her sound from door of the set asking for rajat's office

virat saw in the dorect an unkown smile kept on his face...he rush towards her n hug her tightly
v-where were u ..tumhe pta h mi tension hori ti
manvi feeling wired about him y he hugged her
m-sir mein vo
virat brok the hug...
v-whjat voo..mi kah rha ta na ki mere sath..tum thk ho na..kaha ti itni der se
m-sir pls..mere meeting mr rajat k stah 6.30 ki ti..mi apna kuch kam krne gai ti
v-kaun sa kam..ek br mujhe bta dto deti..or mujhe abi k abi apna no. do..u no how restless i was...
m confused-y
virat was silent he dont no y...
m-mi rajat sir se milek ati hoo...
she left virat still finding the answer of her ques y...
after meeting manvi came to no..she is asingned as the desginer virat,viren,jeevika and tanya..the mebers of the show...
she signed the papers..
rajat introduce her to others she greated..
rajat-manvi tum rahti kaha hoo...
m-sir maine aj hi ek apartment lia h yaha ane se pehle mi vo hi dekhne gaiti
virat shoked apartment...-kaha
evryone look at her...n manvi too with confuse face
v-i mean
m-sir i think mujhe niklna chahiy...mujhe saman shift krna h ...
r-sure..kl se time se ajana
v-mi ghr hi jara hooo..chlo

there was pin drop silnce in car till they reach home..virat dont no y he is not feeling good manvi leaving his house...y
m-hum agaye
virat park the car..both entr the house..virat straight awy goto vanshika
v-ma..manvi jari h
va(confused)-haa beta..use jana to ta hi...
v-maa plss use rok lo plss...
va-virat magr...
v-maa..mujhe nhi pta mi use q rokne ko kah rha hoo..mgr jaise hi mujhe pta chlega sbse pehle apko btaoga..mgr plss rok lo
va-beta vo nhi rukegi..jitna mi use jan paegi hoo ek din mi
v-to to...hmara room h na jo khali pda rahta h ..use kaho vo rent p h ...or vo hme rent dedegi...or yahi rahe plsss maa..plss use rok lo
va-mi try krti hooo

precap-manvi n virt stuck in rain..Wink

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Viratmanvifan31 Goldie

Joined: 16 March 2013
Posts: 1669

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
awesum update! precap is too gooD
chandiniebinda IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 July 2012
Posts: 2518

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Yesss i am the 1st...

Awesome update yaar..
Love Virat confusion..
Love how Virat tells everyting to his mom...
Pleasee update soon..

chandiniebinda IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 July 2012
Posts: 2518

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Ooopppsss sorry i mean the 2nd...
kulsum_virman IF-Rockerz

Joined: 24 February 2012
Posts: 6451

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
awesome update ...getting really interesting...ClapClap
virat already falling for manvi but is still confused...virat so concerned about manvi and all...
precap sounds really interesting..
update soon and do pm meSmile
sanjana24 Senior Member

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Posts: 693

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
update soon
and do pm me when u do
interesting concept.
jia123sagar IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3316

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
awesome update
nice precap
plz cont soon
Angelic_Tazeen Groupbie

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Posts: 144

Posted: 14 June 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged

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