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virman ss:milna hi ta.. part 27 page 52(30 march) (Page 4)

Huma0301 Goldie

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
fab story really really nice
the way manvi loved sum1 n he broke her heart n sumthin similar with virat
bt nw they get together cnt wait for that hope they do
i luv kadambari chachis character - especially here wen she didnt hear virat n says that tu ek ladki ko bagha ke laya lolz
are yaar hav to wait until june for it to update bt plz try to do it quick Smile

itsfate IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
awesome update
luv virat
continue soon
plz do pm me
pink1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 11:27am | IP Logged
awesome story I really like it manvi get hurt in love and left everything and runway poor girl and virat help manvi but he still don't no about kaali that she not love him update soon
kusharberry IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 May 2013 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE please do continue soonSmile
pritivirman Senior Member

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parthnitiholics Senior Member

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 2:45am | IP Logged
***************part 7*************

Next morning
its was 9 virat wake up...he has his shift from 11-11...he look at watch n about to goto sleep again...when his mind stuck to manvi
he quicky frshn up n when to guest room
he knok the door but door was open...he open the door hesitatly..coz its a girl's room but he need to chek her out
he saw her sitting near window hugging her knees n sheding tears
he feel helpless he want to consol her but how evrytime he cant hugg her...n consol her..he is strngr to her...he can understnd her uneasiness
he look at room...ful of newspapers...he pick one newspaper...
he saw she has marked the aprtment on rent...
he understnd she was searchinf for apartment whole nyt where to stay
he shok his hed n fold the newspapers in her room..due to noice she came out of the terrnce clear r tears n look at virat
m-ap...sory..vo mi kuch dhnd riti...
she with himm strtd collecting the newspaper...
when suddenly her foot kept on a magazine n she slip virat imidaitely grab her but he too miss balance both fell on bed
manvi below n virat on the top...
manvi's eyes was tightly closed...she was clunching his shirt...virat was looking at her innocent face as if she ready herself from being hurt due to falll
manvi realise a w8 on her..she open her eyes...n saw virat looking at her
virat still lost in her...
m(little loud)virat sir
virat come out of terrance  both enable to contct eyes...virat get up too manvi
to chnge the embarissed atmosphere
v-tum apartment dhnd riti
v-koi mila
m-kya(still in trnce of what happen few mints ago)
m-ha..haaa number nikala h aj dekhne jaaogi...n ha thnx..mujhe ratko yaha rkhne k liy...mi aj hi wapas
v-koi jarort nhi h 
manvi confused with his words...
v-i mean jb tk tumhe..koi or jaga nhi mill jati...tum yahi  rah skti hoo..
m-nhi actually
v-maine kaha na...
virat n manvi had a eyes contact...
they brok the eye lock
v-waise tumne kaha ta tumhe yaha job mill gai h kaha mili
m-vo mr rajat h 
she showed him his card...
m-actualy mi ek fashion designer hoo..unhe dresses chaiy the aapne show k liy...
m-haa...ap unhe jante h 
v-ha actually
when virat's fon ring...he xcuse himself n took the call..after sometime...manvi was dress up to see her new apartment and new job...
virat came to her-tumhe mi drop kr doga kaha jana h ...
m-nhi mi chli jaogi...
v-are mi wahi jara hoo jaha tum jari hooo...
v-chlo sb pta chl jaega...
virat smile manvi confuse...virat is hapy for something..but he dont no

will virat n manvi fall in love? will manvi leav his house when she got her apartment?
is there a love triangle...??Tongue
stay tunes for next update..i am busy when i get time i will update

v to va-maa plss use rok lo maa..plsssCry

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Huma0301 Goldie

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 3:13am | IP Logged
aaawww ma use rok lo plzzz thats jus so sweet
i think he will wanna stop her
very nice update- hope things sort out for both of them n they be there for each other
waiting for next udpdate- continue wenever u can dear Wink
jia123sagar IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 June 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
awesome update
nice precap
plz cont soon

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