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Interesting concept n story..~!

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***************part 5*************
all smile at manvi...n control their laughtr...
v-nhi tax to nhi lgta mgr aha is time akele baithne mi..tum jaisi ladkio ko problm ho skti h ...
m-mtlb kya h apka
manvi not facing anyone
j-virat..plsss...mi bt krti hoo
m-virat...
manvi found it strnge...n look at him...n her mouth n eyes was wide open...
m-a aa..ap...
v(worried)- r u ok
m-aa...(words not comign of from her motuh she ws scolding virat singh vadera...from past mints..)..ap...virat singh v ..vv vadera...hai na
v-haa q*smile little
m-m ..m really sory../mi m sory..mi jaise apse bt kr riti..m really sory...actually..i didnt saw..when she said..ur name..i was complety shoked n look at u..m really sory..actully...i dont hv words...virzat vadera is standing in front of me..oh my god..m rally virat sir...m really sory
v-its its okk..its relly..agr mi jaga hota to shayad ..shayad kya definatly aise krta jaise apne kia...
m-huh(amzed see him not moving graze from him)
v- r u god...
m-c.can u just pinch me...
v-wht(confusd
m-pinch me
v-as  say
virat pinch...
m-out...itni jor se nhi kaha ta
v-m sory...pinch to jor hi hota h 
m-omg ..omg omg...virat singh vd3era in front of me..eee
maanvi strted juping here n there..dancing..jumping jhapak jahmpk jhampk gili..gili..:P
all saw her...was shoked somethime before she was crying hrd n now she is jumping...
j(wisper to virat)-ise kya ho gya...pinch kia h ..kya pglpan ka injection lagay h 
v-maine to bs pinch kia..
manvi totally forget about what happen to her..few hours ago...
m-can i hv ur autograf plss...
v-ya sure..
manvi took evryone's autograf...ll sit on bench
v-so what ur name can i ask now...
m-manvi
virat lost in her name...but come out of the trance when viren put his arm on his sholder
vi-or manvi ap yaha kya kr ri h 
manvi again lost in her past look here n there-vo mi yaha mumbai aj hi ai hooo...thoda late ho gya ..rat ho gai ti...to flat kaise dhndti
tanya-dont tell me...tum yaha.aise hi muh utha k agai...
m-har koi muh uth k hi ata...jhukana kisko psand h 
tanya made face ...
m-m sory ap logo ka time meri waja se waste hua m f9 ap log plss jaiye...
v-noo first u telll tum kaha jaogi,,,
m-virat sir...abhi to m here only kl mi flaat
virat cut her-okk f9 u r coming with me to my house..jb tk tumhara koi arrmgemnt nhi ho jata rahna 
m-nhi virat sir i cant
v-u calling me sir ryt...m ur boss n u r coming with me this is an order
m-but
j-haa virat..if u want i can taqke her to my house
v-no she is going with me...
m-nhi sir ni
virat ditn listen to her pick her bag hold her hand n drag her to cr
viren n jeevika was the most happiest people to see virat caring for a strnger...tat he never did for kali...
tanya was the one who is fuming in anger
t-what the helll...is ladki virat janta kitna h jo ise apne ghr le gya
vi-chill tanya...lets goo
tanya patted her feet...tanya called her driver n ay back to her home..she dont want to see manvi's face...
here in virt car..there is manvi n virika...
virika sitting at the back,...n manvi on passngr seat..sh is not feeling confortable...to chnge the atmosphere vira strted talking
v-so manvi..
m-ji...
v-tum kaha se ai hoo(virat noo silly ques he knows this...but still he asked)
m-i think maine btaya ta...
v-nhi btaya jbhi to pochh ra ho
m-okk. m from delhi
v-n y r u here
m-man kia agai...
v-is it the valid reason to come here(raising his eyebrows)
m-apka ghr yaha se kitni door h (chnge the topic)
v(understand) 5 mints more
m-virat sir..i really want to go to ur house...dekha subh hone wali h waise b ..to i can find my flat now...
v-maine ek br dia so we r going
manvi made face(kitna khdos h ...acting to bht achhi krta h mgr...norml life mi bilkul pakao)
they reach virat's home...



******** part 6*************
v-mera ghr agya chle...
m-virat sir abhi b mi kah ri hoo...plsss...mi chli jaogi
both still sitting in car manvi fold his hands-okk jao...mgr ye btao jaogi kaha mi tumhe nhi rokunga...
manvi look down tears strted falling...
virat shook his head n was geetin gui8ty for his rude behavior-look m sory for being rude...mi bs ye kah rha tum yaha ruk jao jb tk tumhe koi ghr nhi mill jata thats it...or agr tum chaho to apn parents cl kr skti hooo..mi fon deta hoo if u dont hv
m(imiditaly)-no...mi chlogi apke ghr...
virat smile both get down manvi pic her laggage...v-mi help kr do
m-nhi kr logi...
virat shok his hnd ..pic her bag even after she said no m ring the door bell
virat live with his -vanshika(mom).sb(bua),dadaji,kc,ic n their sun shlok...
vanshika open the door n saw her sun with smile n her smile faded when she saw a girl with her luggage
kc-haye ni virat..aj bht der kr di...
v-haa chachi bs
kc saw manvi-haye nhi virat...tu ek ladki ko uske ghr se bhaga k laya h ...ye tune kya kia..agr tu usse pyar krta h to bta deta putta..
v-nhi chachi mi to...
sb-virat..kjya h ye sb...
m-ap log bt sunegenge to bolenge na ye...
evryone look at her even virat too...
virat smile n tell-ye manvi h ...ye aj hi delhi ai h ...meri dost...
manvi look at him*dost*
m-mgr
v-ramukaka..inhe guest room mi le jao or ye inka saman...
rk-ji baba...
manvi give him question mark look virat tell her to go
manvi move towards guest room...
v-maa...itne yah ise ghr nhi mil jata ye yaha rah skti h na...
va-haa beta..bht pyari bchi h...or tumhari dost b to hme kya problm hogi...
virat move towards guest room n knok...but the door was open..manvi was sitting on bed..shedding tears hugging a pillow...virat got worried...goto her
v-kya hua manvi ..tum ro q rahi hoo...
manvi nodded nothing..but still tears falling from her eyes...
v-manvi plsss mt ro...mi pani leke ata hoo..
viorat get up but manvi hold his hand..virat look at their hand...manvi imisitely free her hand
m-sory...
v-kis liy...
m-ap mujhe jante b nhi hoo..meri waja se apko apni parivar se jhoot bolna padh ra h ...virat sir...plsss...mi yaha nhi ruk skti plss mujhe jane dijiye...
v-manvi listen to me..i noo ye place ladkio k liy ratko safe nhi h ..isliy tumhe laya hoo...plss apne apko blam e mt kro..
m-ap bht achhe virat sir...mgr mi bht buri hooo...mujhe pke sath nhi hona chhaiy
manvi strted crying-mein yaha sbko dhuk deke ai hoo..meri b mom h,dad h ,puri family h ,,,,
v-kya tum wapas jana chhti hoo
m-apni family k pass wapas jana kaun nhi chahta..mgr mi nhi ja skti 
manvi cry hard..manvi cnt tolrate her tears he dint no how..he pull her in hug-bs manvi ..or mt ro plss...mi nhi dekhta tumhe aise...
manvi too hughim back..-mi bht buri hooo...
aftr sometime they brok the hug n akwardness surrounded them
m-mi kl hi yaha chli jaogi...
v-okk chli jana mi nhi rokunga..lekin abhi aram kro but time ho gya...
manvi nodded okk...virat switch off her light..n move saw her before leaving tat she is thinking something...
he move out of her room n saw..vanshika standing thervirat  bcome3 shoked
v-maa
va-maine sb suna..kaun h ye ladki..
virat take vanshika to his room n tel her evrything...vanshika was very happen..tat her son who is caring for some stranger...she kiss his hair 
va-good nyt beta u trust u...
both smile...viraat to drift in sleep


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AWESOME UPDATE
HATE THAT TANIA
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 03 May 2013 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
wow its so sweet yar 
love manvi's nature aik min ma roote ha aur doosre he min itne funny aur bindassTongue
love jeevs dialogue *pinch kia tha k pagalpaan ka injection lagaya tha*ROFL
manvi is defo one piece *one of her kind*
awww n virat is caring so much for a strangerWink
he was so adamnt in taking manvi in his house awwwBig smile
oh no nxt update k lye jne tak w8Cry
but we will w8 okSmile

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