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part 16

ekkskss thnx for the feedbacks guyzz...Smile

evryone was dam shoked what they listend n what virat said..manvi was standing numb..n looking at virat with shok...she dont no what to say..defiantly she love him...she love him...coz he always make her life complicated with his fume in angr shok his head...
m-virat mi is waqt majak k mood mi bilkul nhi plss.apni ye bkwas apne pas rkho..
virat with fake anggr-are maine kya bkwas ki..or ye bakwas nhi hai maine tumhe shadi k liy bola h ..
virat close his eyes n relax move towards her n hd her sholder...manvi look at his hand n then him
m-what???(question look)
v-manvi i no...tum mujhse pyar krti hoo..jitna mi krta hoo usse kai jyada...or mi tumhe ab pne apse door nhi jane dunga...or tum na jao...uska sbse achha solution ye hi hai manvi...
manvi can see lots of love in his eyes...fear of loosing her...
m-virat i hum log ek dosre se pyar krte h ..but iska mtlb ye nhi h shadi kr le..shadi ek bahut badi zimmedari h ...or pta nhi mi ye nibha paungi ki nhi...
v-q nhi nibha paogi..hum dono sath nibhanege...tumhare har kadam p mi tumhare sath hoo...
m-virat i no..ap mere sath h ..but...
v-no but manvi..isse pehle koi tumhe yaha se ake le jae...yaha se jane jane ki planning tumhe krni hogi...
m-virat ap..(to va)-anty ap h smjhaie na virt shadi se bht kuchh effect hoga..virat ka kuchh ...plss
va(put his plam on manvi's)-manvi beta..mi virat k sath ho.vo sahi kah ra h ..n i no tum nibha logi..jb hum sbne ummed chhod diti..tb tum ai thk krne...
sb-mgr bhabhi...
va-didi mi thk kah ri hoo
sb show angr n went from there...
virat come forward n make manvi turn towards him-manvi i no..tum ye kyu kah ri ho..mi pichhli kuch time se..jis cheej ki mujhe lat lagi hui ti..or...(stop) shayad usi reasn ki waja se
manvi cut him n nodded no-nhi virat ap glt smjh rhe hoo...maine vo bat to kabhi sochi hi nhi...
v-to fir q manvi..we both each other...
mnvi look down-mi ready hoo...
virat smile...n hugg her-thnk you manvi thnk you so much..ab hum kbhi alag nhi honge..kbhi nhi.
manvi too hugg him back but still confuse whether she did fare to virat's carrer or not...her decision may or may not effect something..
m(to herslef) manvi sb thk hoga...virat is with u ..
manvi too smile ...
va-ahm ahm...
virman brok the hugg..manvi look down n blush..virat rub his back neck
va hugg both of them shadi kaise hogi...
manvi ook at him...n then va
va-agr agr jldi krni h it can b court marriage only...
v-okk..mi date nikal wata hoo
manvi n va nodded virat went
va-manvi beta...thnk you much..virat k chehre p smile lane k liy...
m-anty...ab ye to mer haq h na...
va nooded -anty nhi maa bolo..
both hugg...
v-maa...aj ki hi date mili h ...fir vo free nhi h qki bht sare registred marrige que mi h...
va-thk h beta...hum b ready h ...
m-virat itni jldi...
va nodded n went from there to give privacy to them..
virat smerk n pull manvi towards himmanvi hand rest on his broad chest-q to b mrs. vadhera...jaldi hora h to koi prblm h ...
manvi blush look here n there-chodo virat kya kr rhe hoo..koi dekh lega...
v-are shadi hone wali h hmari..mi to nhi chodunga...
manvi look at him...move his face fowads both had a eye lock..virat pull manvi more forhead manvi heart strted racing words not cuming out from her mouth..virat move more forhead their lips r inches away manvi close her eyes tightly...brathing heavily..virat move more forward n about to kiss her..whn manvi tickle him n push hi..n run from there...manvi shoked
v-manvi this is not fare
m-evrything is fre in love n war..(manvi rush to her room)
virat shok his head suddely virens call came
v-ha viren...
vi-virat sb thk h na...
v-ha sb thk h (virat teold him eervything even about their wedding)
vi-waoo tu to supper fast nikla...
v-kya yr..achha tum sb ajana time se..
vi-haa pkaa...

its aroung 12 when all reach court...virat waiting for manvi as she is cuming with va in another car..virat keep looking at the door 
vi-bhai sbaar rkh vo jaaegi...
virat look down n blush rub his back neck
j-ajaegi nhi viren agai...
virat look at the door..n look at manvi in red embroided lehnga.simple jwelry not heavy one with little make up..looking top of this world..virat mesmeried manvi entr...looking down feeling shy...
virat still looking at her...
vi-shuru kre
virat come out of his trance n nodded yes..they signed the papers ..put warmala on each other...n they become one mr n mrs vadhera...

guyzz update can b late next time...sory for that..n sory for small..m very busy but still try to give update..hope u njoyed it...WinkWinkWink

precap-manvi parents arrivalLOL

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 9:41am | IP Logged
lovely update...
fab ...
viru thou gaya ...fully on manu...LOL..
and and plzzz let manu's parents come but after their first night...
please continue soonn




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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged mangani pat bihya...lovely..cont soon


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Wink kyaaa,,,,,,,, shaadi,,,,,,, Clapthat was awesome,,,, mr and mrs vadhera,,,,, Big smile lovely update,, LOLtiklinggg and bhaging,,, lol kiss miss hogaye,,  hmm waiting for nexttt eagerlyyy... Smile jaldi,,,,


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Yipee marriage overClap
 Virat s naughtyWink
nw precap...mannu parentsShockedShocked
cont soon
wait'g 4 d nxt partSmile

Edited by Kicha111 - 24 August 2013 at 10:33am


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superb update Smile




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Nice Update..!




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Nice update...
Great one
try to soon...

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