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Posted: 10 years ago
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***************part 7*************

Next morning
its was 9 virat wake up...he has his shift from 11-11...he look at watch n about to goto sleep again...when his mind stuck to manvi
he quicky frshn up n when to guest room
he knok the door but door was open...he open the door hesitatly..coz its a girl's room but he need to chek her out
he saw her sitting near window hugging her knees n sheding tears
he feel helpless he want to consol her but how evrytime he cant hugg her...n consol her..he is strngr to her...he can understnd her uneasiness
he look at room...ful of newspapers...he pick one newspaper...
he saw she has marked the aprtment on rent...
he understnd she was searchinf for apartment whole nyt where to stay
he shok his hed n fold the newspapers in her room..due to noice she came out of the terrnce clear r tears n look at virat
m-ap...sory..vo mi kuch dhnd riti...
she with himm strtd collecting the newspaper...
when suddenly her foot kept on a magazine n she slip virat imidaitely grab her but he too miss balance both fell on bed
manvi below n virat on the top...
manvi's eyes was tightly closed...she was clunching his shirt...virat was looking at her innocent face as if she ready herself from being hurt due to falll
manvi realise a w8 on her..she open her eyes...n saw virat looking at her
m-virat..sir...
virat still lost in her...
m(little loud)virat sir
virat come out of terrance  both enable to contct eyes...virat get up too manvi
to chnge the embarissed atmosphere
v-tum apartment dhnd riti
m-huh...haa..
v-koi mila
m-kya(still in trnce of what happen few mints ago)
v-apartment
m-ha..haaa number nikala h aj dekhne jaaogi...n ha thnx..mujhe ratko yaha rkhne k liy...mi aj hi wapas
v-koi jarort nhi h 
manvi confused with his words...
v-i mean jb tk tumhe..koi or jaga nhi mill jati...tum yahi  rah skti hoo..
m-nhi actually
v-maine kaha na...
virat n manvi had a eyes contact...
they brok the eye lock
v-waise tumne kaha ta tumhe yaha job mill gai h kaha mili
m-vo mr rajat h 
she showed him his card...
m-actualy mi ek fashion designer hoo..unhe dresses chaiy the aapne show k liy...
v-rajat...
m-haa...ap unhe jante h 
v-ha actually
when virat's fon ring...he xcuse himself n took the call..after sometime...manvi was dress up to see her new apartment and new job...
virat came to her-tumhe mi drop kr doga kaha jana h ...
m-nhi mi chli jaogi...
v-are mi wahi jara hoo jaha tum jari hooo...
m-mtlb(confuse)
v-chlo sb pta chl jaega...
virat smile manvi confuse...virat is hapy for something..but he dont no

will virat n manvi fall in love? will manvi leav his house when she got her apartment?
is there a love triangle...??😛
stay tunes for next update..i am busy when i get time i will update

precap
v to va-maa plss use rok lo maa..plsss😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aaawww ma use rok lo plzzz thats jus so sweet
i think he will wanna stop her
very nice update- hope things sort out for both of them n they be there for each other
waiting for next udpdate- continue wenever u can dear 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
awesome update
nice precap
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Its awesm do pm me whn u cont. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
nice update she searching apt
and he feel bad when she crying alone
he want to console her precap looking nice
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
maa plss use rok lo maa..plsss This is cho chweet ðŸ˜ƒ
Abh jaldi jaldi update karo nd do pm me ðŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome update..
Please continue soon..
And pleasee PM me alsoo..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
that was amazing chp
Liked it
Waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
*********************part 8**********************

its being half n hour complte silence in virat's car
virat looking at manvi with corner eyes...but she is luking out as finding some of her answers from the outside greenry n lonely road
by breaking the silence virat got an idea...he switch on the radio
rj-pyar...pyar kya h 
customer from rj-pyar  ..bht pyara ehsas h ..jo ek br sbko hota h ...
rj-pyar ka ehsas kaise hota h 
c-pyar ka ehsas koi din..ya time ka mohtaj nhi h 
manvi got irritated with this pyar word...but virat is lots in this love part talkings
m(shout on virat)-stop this nonsence n switch on this radio
virat come out of his trance..
v-mgr
manvi switch off the radio n then strted luking out
manvi feeling guiting shouting on a famous star n switching off the radio of this car...
m-kadi rokiye...
v(shoked n confuse)-what...hum abi nhi pahuhe...
m-mi apna rasta khud dhnd logi...
v-mgr manvi..ye mumbai. h ...
m(to virat)-janti hoo mumbai hoo..yaha ane se pehle ticket mi saf saf mumbai likha dekha ta maine padhi likhi hoo mi...
v-mera mtlb vo nhi ta..mera mtlb ta..ki hum dono ek hi jaga jare h ...to mi wahi jara hoo...
m-plsss.ap gadi rokenge..
virat stop the car
v-lo rok di gadi..mgr plss...mere sath hi chlo...
m-listen..mi nhi chahti ..ki meri waja se ap apni car mi vo na kr ske jo ap krna chahte..jaise abi...so plss.apne raste jaiye mi apna rasta khud dhnd logi
v-what rasta rasta..ek hi rasta h hmara...
virat n manvi silnce for sometime n had a eye lok...
when a truck horn loudly n ethey brok the eye..
manvi open the door
v-manvi plsss...
m-mi apko wahi milti hoo mere pass adress h kaha jana h ..
manvi come out of the car reach auto sit in it n left
virat feeling wired aftr her leaving..he drov as soon as he can...so that..when manvi reach there he should b there...

in half n hour  virat reach the set
he entred searching for manvi...but she was not founf..his cast members jeevika,viren and tanya  came all greated gud morning...
v-guyzz manvi ai h kya...
vi-manvi yaha...nhi too
v-haa(he told about rajat n her convo)..abi tk nhi ai...
its being an hour virat was getting restless...where is manvi..y didnt hshe reachd here still

virat didnt even took her number...
virat was shooting his scene but agin n again his eyes place on door to search manvi
its evening manvi is still not there..he atlast call home 
va-hello
v-maa virat..
va-ha bolo beta...
v-ma manvi waha ai h kya
va-nhi voto subh hi tumhare sath gaiti...
v-what/...ma mi bad mi bt krta hoo...

evryone seeing him restless for n reason the girl he meet 2 days ago for her ..huh
its being 6 in evening when virat thinking what do to..whether inform police or what..
when he heard her sound from door of the set asking for rajat's office

virat saw in the dorect an unkown smile kept on his face...he rush towards her n hug her tightly
v-where were u ..tumhe pta h mi tension hori ti
manvi feeling wired about him y he hugged her
m-sir mein vo
virat brok the hug...
v-whjat voo..mi kah rha ta na ki mere sath..tum thk ho na..kaha ti itni der se
m-sir pls..mere meeting mr rajat k stah 6.30 ki ti..mi apna kuch kam krne gai ti
v-kaun sa kam..ek br mujhe bta dto deti..or mujhe abi k abi apna no. do..u no how restless i was...
m confused-y
virat was silent he dont no y...
m-mi rajat sir se milek ati hoo...
she left virat still finding the answer of her ques y...
after meeting manvi came to no..she is asingned as the desginer virat,viren,jeevika and tanya..the mebers of the show...
she signed the papers..
rajat introduce her to others she greated..
rajat-manvi tum rahti kaha hoo...
m-sir maine aj hi ek apartment lia h ..sbi yaha ane se pehle mi vo hi dekhne gaiti
virat shoked apartment...-kaha
evryone look at her...n manvi too with confuse face
v-i mean
m-sir i think mujhe niklna chahiy...mujhe saman shift krna h ...
r-sure..kl se time se ajana
m-sure
v-mi ghr hi jara hooo..chlo

there was pin drop silnce in car till they reach home..virat dont no y he is not feeling good manvi leaving his house...y
m-hum agaye
virat park the car..both entr the house..virat straight awy goto vanshika
v-ma..manvi jari h
va(confused)-haa beta..use jana to ta hi...
v-maa plss use rok lo plss...
va-virat magr...
v-maa..mujhe nhi pta mi use q rokne ko kah rha hoo..mgr jaise hi mujhe pta chlega sbse pehle apko btaoga..mgr plss rok lo
va-beta vo nhi rukegi..jitna mi use jan paegi hoo ek din mi
v-to to...hmara room h na jo khali pda rahta h ..use kaho vo rent p h ...or vo hme rent dedegi...or yahi rahe plsss maa..plss use rok lo
va-mi try krti hooo

precap-manvi n virt stuck in rain..😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesum update! precap is too gooD