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IIdewaaneII

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Hey guys! I hope you guys are all doing well, and not to bored from the AsYa-less weekend 
I have a new FF here but it is nameless, so if you have a suggestion for a name please do share!
This ff is a bit different than my others. Usually my stories have to do with the current track, but this is somewhat different. I don't wanna say to much, but please do read it if you're interested Big smile
Part 1

                Zoya was almost late for her first day at work. She had to run inside into the office while her silky hair was flying like a symphony. She had just recently been hired as secretary for the Khan constructions. She quickly punched her card and sat down at the secretary office. She had been hired easily because she lived in New York for 15 years and had a lot of job experience there. Once she had set up her stuff she got started right away with some paper work. She was slightly nervous because she hadn't met her boss yet, but had heard from her co workers that he was really stubborn and strict. He was a neat person but  apparently looked like a Greek god.  Some of her co workers were jealous of her job position because it meant being around him a lot.

                Zoya had one friend at this job. It was because of her she had got this job. Her name was Shukria. Shukria was somewhat short with hair that went a bit past her shoulders. The tips of her hair were died blond. She always wore jeans and a top just like Zoya. The both were like best friends that couldn't live without each other. Although Zoya had moved to NY for a while, they had always contacted each other. During the summer, Shukria would come to NY for a month.  They would do everything together, whether it be, shopping or eating. The only difference was Zoya didn't live with her parents and Shukria had a big family. Shukria never made Zoya feel lonely, her family was Zoya's family. They all loved Zoya very much.

*******

Shukria: Hey Zoya, seems like you're on time.

Zoya: Oh my lord, it took a lot of work to be here on time. I was so close to being late. The driver was so slow.

Shukria: I know, when he used to drop me off to work, I would always be late.

Zoya: Yeah, but now your Fianc drops you off every day, and picks you up. So sweet

Shukria turned tomato red.

                Zoya was staying at a hotel instead of staying at Shukria's house because the whole house and family was busy with her wedding planning and ceremonies. She didn't want them being bothered so she stayed at a hotel nearby. One of Shukria's driver was sent to the hotel every morning for Zoya. Shukria would instead get a ride from her Fianc Hussain. They were really cute together. Everyday Hussain and Shukria would go out for lunch and he would always drive her around where every she wanted.

*******

Shukria: So have you seem the boss yet? Mr. Khan?

Zoya: No, not yet, it seems like every is all over him, I mean like the girls.

Shukria: Yeah, expecially Rona. She is known for being a stuck up for him. She'll do anything to get his attention.

Zoya: Oh, I see.

* office phone rings*

Zoya: Excuse me

Shukria: I should probably go back to work anyways.

Zoya smiled and picked up the phone.

Zoya: Hello, Khan construction secretary, Zoya speaking, how can I help you?

Zoya helped the customer on the phone while Asad, in a black suit walks in. Ever one gets up as if they are in fear. Zoya, doesn't notice as she is on the phone with the customer turned the other way looking at the files. Asad notices someone new at the secretary desk. Her hair was flying from the all the Air-conditioning and fans. Asad was completely mesmerized by just seeing her hair. He tries to get a glimpse of her face, but fails because of her hair.

Asad: Rona!

Rona ran behind him in all excitement

Rona: Yes sir.

Asad: Tell our new secretary to be in my office in 5 Min.

Rona: If you want sir, I can help yo-

Asad: Just do as much as I tell you

Rona: Yes sir.

Asad walked up to his office.

Rona: Shukria, go tell your friend to be in Asad's office in 5 minutes

Shukria: Yes ma'am Shukria walked up to Zoya really fast and told her to go to his office.

Zoya nervously went up to the office and knocked on the door

Zoya: Sir did you call me?

Asad spun his chair towards Zoya

Zoya and Asad: YOU?

 

Precap: Asad beating up a bunch of guys :P


Please do comment guys! :)  



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Part 22: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3511575&TPN=70&#81668567

Chapter 23: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3511575&TPN=74&#81868295

Part 24 :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3511575&TPN=80&#82816445

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Part 28: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3511575&TPN=92&#83600099

Part 29: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3511575&TPN=95&#84060850

Part 30: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3511575&TPN=100&#p91448726


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Edited by IIdewaaneII - 10 November 2013 at 8:13am

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wow!!
really awesome dear!! love it!!

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Aha!! Now I wanna read more yaar!!! You have got to continue this very soon!!
 And try to separate the chapter from the note you write before or after your upload/update, with a line or different font, or font colour. :D
And about the title..
You could choose one that suits the storyline you have mapped out in your mind.
Or you could use a word or a phrase you will be or have already used in your updates of this FF!
If you're still not able to come up with anything, wait for a few more uploads and then see. We'll always be there to help.

Hope this helps!

Yet I am wondering about that song "Jaane Kyun Log Pyaar Karte Hain" LOL
I like the movie and the song!! 
Or even "Woh Ajnabi"..
Hehehehe... the latter goes with the way you ended your first chappy... Or is it a prologue?

AnnieTongue


Edited by PhoenixRadar - 30 March 2013 at 10:11am

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Continue Soon! 

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Originally posted by PhoenixRadar

Aha!! Now I wanna read more yaar!!! You have got to continue this very soon!!
 And try to separate the chapter from the note you write before or after your upload/update, with a line or different font, or font colour. :D

AnnieTongue
Thanks Annie! I fixed it and will keep it in mind for my future parts Smile 

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Originally posted by IIdewaaneII

Originally posted by PhoenixRadar

Aha!! Now I wanna read more yaar!!! You have got to continue this very soon!!
 And try to separate the chapter from the note you write before or after your upload/update, with a line or different font, or font colour. :D

AnnieTongue
Thanks Annie! I fixed it and will keep it in mind for my future parts Smile 

Thanks for that!
Now do read my edited commented! :D

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Another ff from you, yipeee. :D continue asap yea :)

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