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ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed] (Page 59)

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Brilliant story!!
 I m loving the current track. I m really excited about the upcoming track...
I think khushi has recognised Selena the vic as the girl in her hallucinations. I m a bit worried about the shadow by the window...I think the killer is zoning on khushi as his next vic. If this is so...then it's gonna be a hell lot interesting...

I have a feeling that the psychiatrist is deeply involved in this...he may be d murderer or may have a loony patient

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
This is freaky. I am hallucinating. I am writing this crime series with the almost the same mindset as Khushi does. With the psychology of crime weighing over the crime itself. I can't stop myself from asking, but have you been writing under a previous username before? Something about your style reminds me of some writer's I have read before. Correct me if I am wrong. You have quite an indulging roller coaster ride for us in here. I am super proud to be a part of that. I must admit this is beyond my comfort zone because I am the one who closes my eyes when the crimes is being done on Castle and NCIS. I only watch for the psych and the rush and of course the characters. But I have this insufferable urge to see this FF through the end so yeah dark or not, I am in. Thank you for the great writing and the speedy updates. 

-Amal


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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Your attention to detail is fantastic! I'm amazed by the level of research you put into this. There is indeed nothing glamorous about investigation. It is a tedious, painstaking and more often than not-- an extremely frustrating job!
Uh-oh! Selina's the girl Khushi saw in her vision, isn't she?
NOW things are going to get awkward. Khushi's going to have some serious coming-to-terms to do.

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Just caught up with the last 2 chapters! This murderer is not some rookie pshyco, holy hell. So they have made some progress for sure. the interview Shukla got is really going to help them get somewhere, I can't imagine having that weird feeling the victim had. Being followed, seeing a shadow everywhere, the dropped calls

What a cliffhanger! Another attack?

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
i think khushi is having another attack after seeing the snap...it must be the same that she saw during her earlier attack of her being skinned alive..the photo surely must be identical to that..
 
lovely update indeed...cant wait the suspense though...

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
2 belters of updates and all in a day, RB!! That was super.

Love the suspense you are building up.

I love the idea of looking for patterns- in fact I got so involved that I expected to see all the papers Arnav and Khushi were going through, almost disappointed that I couldn't go through them and find the patterns.

Another brillaint touch- signalling to to us what the focus of this story- uncovering the psychology/ the twisted mind behind the crimes- not so much a who done it or a how done it,  but a why done it. So much more scarier than the forensic aspect of crime!

Btw, love the Castle-Becket role reversal (though, I will accept, that is NOT what you set out to do!)




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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Oh crap, she saw that girl in her hallucination, didn't she? Now the question is will she tell Arnav about it or not? And she can actually show him her book(s), which are based on all the cases that they're solving right now. Wow I had chills while reading this.

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Posted: 05 April 2013 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Rb i feel like watching a thriller...scary yaar... that too i'm reading at midnight...too scary..whether Khushi saw the same girl in her hallucination...

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