ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed] - Page 45

very much interesting turn of events... i like d pace of the story...
plus i had been waiting for khushi to mke the discovery...cnt wait for nxt..
n thnkyou for d quick updates...

Why do i hv a feeling that khushi is smlyk mystic personality...smtimes she is really unpredictable...the way she asked arnav 'hv they met before' or even wd the doctor...and hw come Arnav allows her to help him...that ws surprising
luvd the update

yaya!!!you updated!!

Very nice ... Thanks for the weekend treat :)

Brilliant story!!

This is freaky. I am hallucinating. I am writing this crime series with the almost the same mindset as Khushi does. With the psychology of crime weighing over the crime itself. I can't stop myself from asking, but have you been writing under a previous username before? Something about your style reminds me of some writer's I have read before. Correct me if I am wrong. You have quite an indulging roller coaster ride for us in here. I am super proud to be a part of that. I must admit this is beyond my comfort zone because I am the one who closes my eyes when the crimes is being done on Castle and NCIS. I only watch for the psych and the rush and of course the characters. But I have this insufferable urge to see this FF through the end so yeah dark or not, I am in. Thank you for the great writing and the speedy updates.  Edited by Aubade. - 11 years ago

Your attention to detail is fantastic! I'm amazed by the level of research you put into this. There is indeed nothing glamorous about investigation. It is a tedious, painstaking and more often than not-- an extremely frustrating job!

Just caught up with the last 2 chapters! This murderer is not some rookie pshyco, holy hell. So they have made some progress for sure. the interview Shukla got is really going to help them get somewhere, I can't imagine having that weird feeling the victim had. Being followed, seeing a shadow everywhere, the dropped calls

What a cliffhanger! Another attack?

i think khushi is having another attack after seeing the snap...it must be the same that she saw during her earlier attack of her being skinned alive..the photo surely must be identical to that..

2 belters of updates and all in a day, RB!! That was super.

Love the suspense you are building up.

I love the idea of looking for patterns- in fact I got so involved that I expected to see all the papers Arnav and Khushi were going through, almost disappointed that I couldn't go through them and find the patterns.

Another brillaint touch- signalling to to us what the focus of this story- uncovering the psychology/ the twisted mind behind the crimes- not so much a who done it or a how done it,  but a why done it. So much more scarier than the forensic aspect of crime!

Btw, love the Castle-Becket role reversal (though, I will accept, that is NOT what you set out to do!)


Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago