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Pyaar ka Imthaan Pg.10 Prt.6 (Page 6)

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awesome surely go in depth describing each emotion which is just amazing. continue soon

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awesome surely go in depth describing each emotion which is just amazing. continue soon

Thanx, i try my best to do that


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Part. 4

Finally the door opened and Angad came in. A smile spread across Kripa's face but she hid it. Angad was shocked to see Prithvi and Misty there he knew that Kripa will leave today his face had a fake smile on but his eyes showed his pain; he greeted them and then went to his room. After a few minutes Kripa went to her to pack her stuff, while she was packing Angad came in.


"You are going?" he asked.


"Yes" answered Kripa.


"Ok, I bought something for you at Goa" said Angad taking something out of his pocket.

It was a birthstone necklace; the peach birthstone was hanging from a silver chain glowing.


"Thanks, its really pretty" Kripa said. She took the necklace and tried to put it on but she failed, so Angad takes it from her and puts it on her.


 Just then the lights go out and thunder strikes. Kripa gets scared hearing the noise and hugs Angad really tight, Angad hugs her back. They didn't care what was happening around them all what mattered was that they were together. The lights came back and they separated. Angad left the room not saying anything. He wanted to stop Kripa and hold her forever, while thinking he bumped in to Aaliyah.


"Are you ok bhai?" asked Aaliyah


"Yea" answered Angad.


Angad went downstairs while Aaliyah went to Kripa's room. As she was entering she heard Kripa say "I don't want to go. Only if angad would ask me to stop I will but he won't"


Aaliyah thought " No wonder Angad and Kripa are acing weird, they both are in love but I doubt they know each others feelings, I should do something to stop Kripa." She thought and finally got an idea, "Good idea" she said in her mind.  "I am sorry Kripa she said but I want you and Angad bhai to be together"


She quietly left, while she was going downstairs she sprinkled some oil on some stairs, so Kripa could twist her leg . She knew this was a wrong way but she didn't really have a choice. She went downstairs, waiting for Kripa. Aaliyah's plan worked while Kripa was coming down she slipped and twisted her ankle.


"Ahhhhhhh" yelled Kripa in pain.


Angad ran to Kripa, Prithvi behind him. Aaliyah felt sorry. Angad picked Kripa in his arms and put her on the sofa. Kartick called the doctor and told him to come soon. The doctor inspected Kripa's leg.


"She has twisted her leg, and needs complete bed rest for 2-3 days" said the doctor.


Prithvi was sad because he wanted Kripa to stay at his house but now she had to stay here for 2-3 days. Angad was happy that Kripa wasn't going but he wished he could take away the pain Kripa was going through. While Kripa she no longer cared about the pain she was really happy.


"Kripa you should go to your room and rest" said Misty.


Kripa tried getting up but her leg was hurting.


"Bhai why don't you pick up Kripa and take her to her room" said Aaliyah.


So Angad picked her up, and headed for Kripa's room, all the way both of them stared at each other. While Prithvi was burning in jealousy. Angad reached Kripa's room and put her on the bed.


"I'll send Aaliyah with your dinner" said Angad.




Angad went downstairs, and told Aaliyah to take soup for Kripa upstairs. Aaliyah took the soup upstairs and told Kripa to drink it. Aaliyah was happy that her plan was working. She went downstairs to have dinner. After dinner Misty and Prithvi left. Angad was going to his room when he peeked in Kripa's room; Kripa was reading a book and hadn't drink the soup yet. Angad got angry.


"Why haven't you drank the soup yet?" asked angad.


" I don't like soup its yuck" said Kripa childishly.


"Oh well you have to drink it, because you have to get well. And I am sure you really want to go to Misty's house"


"No I don't want to go but if you want me to go I will"


" I don't want you to go"




Angad got tensed.


"Why don't you want to go?"


Kripa got tensed.


"I asked first"


"Then answer first also"


"I'll drink the soup"


"Good, now answer my question"


"I don't want to answer"


"Then I won't answer either"






Angad left the room while Kripa drank the soup.

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