New Asya SS:Journey To The Heart

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guyz! How r u all? I am Ayesha and new to this forum.A story just popped up in my mind and i thought to give it a chance though i am very bad at writing...its my first time guyz plz bear with my mistakes. Please hit a like and comment if u like this if not criticism is always wecome with open arms😉.So here it goes...


                                             JOURNEY TO THE HEART
  
Sunday a perfectly awful day,a day to be awaited with dread,endured with courage and forgotten with haste.Every floor must be spotless,every chair dustless,everything in an apple-pie order. Zoya thinking while munching a piece of pizza.Asad thought the same too that sunday was awful as he has no office and full day with Ms Farooqi.

On the breakfast table:
Zoya, Najma and Tanveer were chattering about how they were going to spend the day as usual annoying Asad.As Asad was having his black bitter coffee tanveer detached herself from others and brought him his favorite  bread and jam.

Tanveer :Ye lijiye jammy..apko pasand hai na bread and jam humne apke liye banaya hai.

Asad:Shukriya Tannu
Tanveer kept the plate beside him and started eating. Zoya  noticing all this just wanted to throw all the stuff which was on the table on tanveer.She hated it when Asad and tanveer were all lovely dovely.Zoya just stared at her Mr.Khan and said 

Zoya:Arz kiya hai:
Koi kharahe hai bread and jam bina share kiye
koi kharahe hai bread and jam bina share kiye
Allah kare yeh dono bhi girjaye
aur koi akhri me sirf pani piye...
Shukriya shukriya shukriya

Zoya Najma and Dilshaad started laughing while Asad was fuming with anger in his eyes.

P.S: A small update guyzz...if u like ill continue it.Please dont throw tomatoes ans chappals on me u can start doing it if i write a next chapter😆😆.please give me your views.



















































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Posted: 11 years ago
Its nice, please continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shayari ws lyk 🤣 M rolling. Cont it ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: enrique

Plz continue soon


Thank u dear ill post it soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: jeenia123

Its nice, please continue soon...


Ohhmy God im so happy to see ur comment jeenia di thank u...ill post soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
[QUOTE=Soumya02]Shayari ws lyk 🤣 M rolling. Cont it ASAP[/QUOTE

😉😆 hahai know im a bit mad...and making people laugh like insane n think im mad is my fav work...just kidding thank u sooo much ill update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: HoneySweety

Short and sweet.


Thank u sooo muchfor liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: --Kriti--

continue soon

Thank u yes ill update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

i just loved it 

plz do continue soon as it was a soooper duper one

and do pm me...

P.S: I AM WAITING SOOO EAGERLY

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
Great start :)