Posted: 10 years ago
amazing start
loved it
damn good
continue soon 
Posted: 10 years ago
dis was awesome
lucking frwd fr d update
update it..plzzz
dis vry dfrnt cncpt luving it
sry fr d late cmnt i was inactive...
but do pm me...
i will be waitinf fr ur update
👏
Posted: 10 years ago
It was a very nice start...
Do continue soon
And thanx for the PM..
Posted: 10 years ago
Hey, writing star! ⭐️
It's awesome!! Really, ssuperb!! Viren hot super model...yeah! that's best!! And Jeevika not even borthered about his personality.

This article gonna be amazing...please PM me when you update..!
I'll surely read!! 😊

❤️ Loved it!! ❤️ 

Posted: 10 years ago
Hey sweets!
I am really very happy i can't tell you...i didn't expect dis kinda response for this SS in the very first update! thank u people thanks a lot for supporting me...So,here is d second part to this SS hope you will Enjoy it..!!! leave likes n comments,it encourages me :) 
                                             CHAPTER-2
He kept looking at her from the corner of his eyes,her fingers were playing with the scarf and her eyes were transfixed on the lush green view of the roads.Her cell phone burst for the call,she received the call and spoke very slowly,sweetly and softly.
She talked in tamil.He could not hear her voice clearly but he managed to hear"Please leave me alone."well,his best friend
in school was tamil so he could somewhat understand the language.
        She looked at him and said 'Sir,we will go to the hotel first,so that you can get freshenup and after an hour,we will leave for lunch.Is it ok?' 
       He nodded and turned his eyes towards his cellphone.Something was wrong with her and being a stupid human being,naturally he was curious to know about her..."But why should i care?"he thought to himself.72 hours more and he would never see her again,so he controlled and diverted his curious mind.
     She escorted him to a five star hotel and as soon as he entered,a bunch of college girls came towards him and pleaded for one cheeessseee...they meant a photograph with the supermodel,the superstar,the dreamboy of all d girls...VIREN VADHERA.Jeevika stood at a distance and smiled innocently.First time in these three hours she smiled and this didn't remain unnoticed by Viren.'Oh! look she has teeth..!"he thought...
    She asked him to narrate his life's story because she needed to prepare a script on him for the event.He started narrating his story from the day he was born,in MUMBAI. She sincerely lisrtened to him and did not take down any notes,she was memorizing he guessed.
   She kept listening to his naughty childhood days,to his crushes during the days of his adolescence,to his entry into modelling and to his successfull days till present.
  It was evening by then and she directed him towards the event venue.The event began,and the speakers began to share their life stories.
  He climbed up the stage and a section of the audience and started hooting and screaming for him.He started his speech whhich was heard by a pin drop silence.Audience listened too him with lots of curiosity n a huge round of applause followed by the end of his speech.
  She dropped him at hotel and left saying good night.He climed up to his room and his mind could not rest in peace,something was cooking in there but he did not know what it was.He wanted to talk to her.He didn't knew why,he felt weird."Why the hell Viren vadhera behaving crazy"he questioned himself silently.
  "JEevika,my flush is not working.Can you please come and fix  it up?"he said by calling her.
  "Haan???? Ok i would inforn the hotel authorities,don't worry"she replied baffled.
   'Oh dumb me!!! What an excuse did i make.She was an event manager and not a plumber to fix the flush."he thought to himself.
  'No,i want you here now!"he ordered.
  'I will be there in 15 minutes.sir'she replied.
Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy!! am The First One To Comment!! 

I Love How Viren is SO Curious to talk to Jeevika!
They are so damn Adorable! 😳

Viren is So Cute 😆

Called Jeevika to come to repair the Flush? 🤣

Awesum Update! Please Post the Next part soon!

Well Written!👏
Edited by kanishkakaran - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
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Unres
Just love d pdate so much
It was amazing
Viren is attracted towards jeevika
He is so curious to talk to her
Lol flush

Update soon really soon
Lets see who is faster me or u
Edited by mgera3024 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
thanks for pm me
plz cont soon
Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for this cute update!
i loved how viren is unknowingly attracted to her!
and also how jeevika is completely unaffected by his popularity which makes viren more attracted to her!
AND the FLUSH!! LOOOL probably the worst excuse ive ever heard but then again love makes people crazy!
 
CONTINUE SOON!
Posted: 10 years ago
woww dis update was rocking
viren was gng crazy
but i m also eagerly waiting like him 2 no abt d person😲
woww such a lovely dovely update
but plzz want a big update next time🤗
keep writing mre n mre😉

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