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~#*K@bhi Alvid@ N@ Kehna*#~ (RP FF) part 1 updated pg 9

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Posted: 26 March 2013 at 11:58am | IP Logged

Hello my dear RPians, Hug

Once again I am here with something special for all of you on this HOLI. Wink Wink Wink


It's great to see you all here still loving RP Fics and our efforts. Smile Smile Smile As being a FF writer I know how difficult it is to start and continue the FF. Ermm
Ermm Ermm

I also know that I have three more FF's which are going this time but I couldn't stop myself to write one more RP FF on a different and interesting plot. Wink Wink Wink

I know and I believe you guys will love it as you all gave love to all of my FF's. Big smile Big smile Big smile

So enjoy and do tell me with your views.
Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Day Dreaming

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 04 September 2014 at 12:41pm

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The venue was gleaming with electric lights and relaxing and soothing DJ sound which clearly states that something big is going on at that place. This was the choice of the man who want to make it big yet classic and his taste was really refined which was visible by the decoration of the three storied awesome bunglow. The Porsche locality of the city and the bunglow was covered like a newly wedded lady.  Guests were regularly coming and he was attending each of them just like the attitude he has in him. His lady was just standing besides him giving him the full company and completely complementing his personality and gesture. He knew this should be grand and more than him his only daughter wanted it to make grand after all this was the 20th wedding anniversary of his dad. Not only one reason behind this celebration was enough they also had one more reason to celebrate and to know the reason just enter in the party.

"Oye mubarakaan, mubarakaan'.". One man said to another while entering in the party.

"Thank you Bhalla. Chal aa gaya tu, mai kab se tera wait kar raha tha." That man said.

"Oye tu bulaaye aur mai na aaon aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya? Akhir sehar k sab se bade aur sab se acche lawyer ki party, vo bhi K D Pathak ki party kaun miss karna chahega bhala?"

Now we can see the full face of the man

K D Pathak

Smart and young age 48 years, the renowned criminal lawyer of the city.

"Haan mujhe pata hai ki tu yahan bus isiiye aata hai." He teased his childhood friend Mr. Bhalla.

"Oye nahi khoteya, mai to yahan bhabhi jee se milne aata hoon." He said and looked at her. "Namaste bhabhi jee, kya baat hai tussi to chaa rahe ho humesha ki tarah."

"Thank u bhai sahib,par aap kisi ko le kar nahi aaye saath me? " she asked genuinely.

Sheetal Pathak

Shweta Tiwari


Smart and a kind hearted, forty five years woman who is a social worker.

"ojee nahi bhabhi jee, meeta maa k ghar gayi hue hai kuch tabiyat theek nahi thi un ki un ko dekhne aur bacche to pata hai na apne boarding school me hain aur ab Diwali ki holidays me hi aa paayenge."

"Koi baat nahi chahliye party start hone waali hai." Sheetal jee bought him inside and till now rest of the guests have been arrived.

"Vo abhi tak nahi aaya."

"Relax KD aa jaayega vo, tumhe yaad hai na us ne Kria se promise kiya hai."

"Haan yaad to hai par mujhe pata hai vo dono ek doosre k saamne nahi aana chahte hain."

Sheetal jee thought for a while, "Haan shayad sahi keh rahe ho tum. Vo bhi abhi tak nahi aayi."

"Par Kria ne to us se bhi promise liya hai na?"

Tabhi someone took the mike in her hand and all lights in the hall got dimmed except a focus light on a 18 years old girl which seems as if she has just joined the college. The one and only daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pathak "Kria"


An eighteen year old girl which has taken admission in the famous St. Louis College of Mumbai.

 She started speaking, "To all lovely ladies standing here and to all handsome men present here. Today is the day when two soul mates on the earth got united for eternity. The day which has a very special place in my heart. The day when a great change came to two lives on earth which belong to me and which has the most special part in my heart. They were destined to be together and now after twenty beautiful years they passed in each others company still their love is as fresh as teenagers and they are integral part of each other. I just wish God let them be like this forever and inhe kisi ki najar na lage. Happy twentieth Anniversary mom and dad. One more reason to celebrate is that my dad the best lawyer of city has won 50th case this year without loosing any case till now. Love u dad."  And we can see his face when the spotlight fall on a girl which bought king size huge cake in a trolley.

She was the most deary and lovely girl on earth and has a very special place in this family. She just came back from Australia last night and was busy with all preparations of party with Kria. They could not believe at the eyes that finally she is here, after a long three year gap she was here. Dressed in a dress she looked lovely and beautiful just like always but something was missing from those eyes. The eyes which always speak volumes were now calm. Anyone who knows this girl well cannot see the change because she was very smart in hiding the emotions now. But K D and Sheetal could see this fake side of her which was just like a showcase for them.

"Nainaaa", Sheetal jee called her first.

Naina Singh

Age 32 years,

She is a lawyer by profession and has done practice under KD for three years.

"Kya hua yakeen nahi ho raha hai kya?" she asked smiling.

"Bilkul nahi." Sheetal jee said and hugged her tight as if she has missed her only daughter and kissed her forehead.

"Mujhe bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki mai vapas aa gayi hoon yahan aap dono k pass." She hugged her back tightly.

"Kab aayi tu? Tune hume batana bhi jaroori nahi samjha?" she scolded her lovingly.

"Kal aayi night me bus aaj subah se lagi thi preparations me." She told and looked at KD. "kaise hain sir? Congratulations to you for winning the 75th case and congratulations to both of you for 20th marriage anniversary."

He just gave a small smile and said, "Thank you, Shukr hai tumhe yaad to aayi meri? Mai yahan akele khada hoon itne der se tum log ko baatein karta hua dekh raha hoon."

"Aap ko kaise ignore kar sakta hai koi, still u r the most handsome person in whole Mumbai." She said giving a smile.

K D hugged her lightly but couldn't miss the sadness in her smile. He knew the reason but the situation demands something else, "Welcome back pretty girl."

"thank u sir."

Here Kria smiled seeing them together and she said on mike, "Hold on guys, this is not fair."They looked at her in confusion and she continued, "How can u guys forgot me?"and she rushed to them and they gave a cute and lovely happy family type feeling to everyone.

"Can any one dare to forgot u?"

"I know never." Kria said giving a smile. "So it's time to cut the cake now. Pls dad and mom do the honors , we are starving for such delicious cake."

"Abhi nahi, bus kuch der aur mai kisi ka intezaar kar raha hoon." He said looking at the door.

Naina understood what K D meant and the fact was she too wanted to see him. After a long gap of three years she too missed him but she didn't know why when things between them had been sour and at this time they should not face each other but she couldn't lie to her heart which missed him terribly. Did he also? She had this question in her mind. Suddenly she started feeling restless and things around her started giving her the hints as she used to get a few years back. 'Is he here?' she thought. 'But why? Doesn't he hate her anymore?' How am I going to face him?' these questions were striking her head. The same smell she used to sense always when he was around her. The aura around her was already telling her that he has reached her and with each passing second her heart was beating like a running tigress.  'It's not going to be easy', she thought. Finally he was here; when her eyes fell on his face she was shocked to see him like this. She never dreamt of seeing him in such a condition. Though he doesn't look a bit older or tired and lost but still the spark was missing which made Naina's heart pain.

K D saw that man and went to him, "to tum aa hi gaye."

That man smiled and said, "Bilkul, aap ne bulaya tha to aana hi tha. Well congratulations."

"Thank u Rajveer." K D replied.

Rajveer Singh Shekhawat

Age 34 years , the famous Criminal Lawyer of the City.

And at the end of the prologue






Edited by Mahak Sinha - 04 September 2014 at 1:11pm

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Posted: 26 March 2013 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
wowww awesome story...
rajeev and priyanka wowww one of my fav...
continue it yaarrr...
thnxx for the pm..:))

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Posted: 26 March 2013 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Heya, This is called my sweetheart's work. Clap
I am really happy and loved ur gift to the core.Smile Raj and Naina as lawyers under KD sounds interesting to me.Day Dreaming Hope you continue soon. Wink
Will be waiting for part one soon.


Wish you very joyous and superb festival of Colors Holi

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Posted: 26 March 2013 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Vertu...just love u my sweety for this beautiful Holi gift. Hug

I just loved the plot initially of this story that Raj n Naina are lawyers Day Dreaming and I think KD ka idea to Adalat se aaya hoga na? Wink He is celebrating the success of his 50th case and 20th anniversary as well.Smile I think Raj and Naina are going to meet soon na? Wink

Update soon dear

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Posted: 26 March 2013 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
Hey darls

PartyHugHappy Holi ClapDancing

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