Hola savitrians...so there was a suggestion a few days ago about an FF in this forum and finally ive decided to give it a go. Below are the character intros to the subject FF. I welcome your valuable opinions and criticisms!!!
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Savitri hated being woken up so early,especially on a Sunday morning by the most hideous sounds of all. She heard mishti giggling in the kitchen and scream," Mishti, u bleeding imbecile,im going to throttle you this time". Her room mate made it a habbit to irritate her,changing her ringtone whenever she found her mobile abandoned.
She fumbled for her phone on the night stand and her sleep deprived eyes perceived the name of her buddy satya flashing. She quickly answered,"Yes Mr. Satyavan, what mess did you get yourself into today?" He would always come running to her for help when he faced roadblocks in a case.
His innocent voice replied."Mess n me? Im the most intelligent lawyer in town remember, i get people outta mayhem not get into one myself"she heard him chuckle.
" Ok now on a serious note, i called to remind you about the charity ball in the evening my brother has organised. I want you to be there at any cost. Its high time i introduce you to him."
Savitri sat up in bed," I already told you im not attending any ball, nor am i interested meeting ur diabolical brother"
"Hey dont hate my brother, what has he ever done to you. Hes a gem of a person."
"Spare me, ive heard of his womanizing ways, although ive never met him, he sounds like a gigolo, you know how i feel about Casanovas"
"Please, for me, be there, i promise it wont be boring and its just a two minute introduction, hes rarely in town to start with" went on satya
Savitri frowned," Why is this so important to you?"
Satya replied, "Ill tell you later, theres no time to explain, please wake up and prepare for the evening. Dress well. The ball is at renaissance, be there by sharp 7pm ok, dont be late"
Savitri heard the line go dead and with a sigh called out to Mishti, "Lets go Shopping madam, i have a ball to attend."
Satya kissed his phone and smiled looking down at the ring in the case,"The reason this is so important to me is because i want you to meet the most important person in my life before i propose to you"
His brother always believed that love was overrated, although he begged to differ, Love was the most amazing and divine feeling.
Setting the ring beside the coffee table, he went downstairs to have breakfast with his brother,he rarely got this chance, coz his brother often traveled around the globe for business. Walking into the patio, he saw him have his coffee while conversing with dev," Get the work started on this one asap, i want it completed by new years eve"
"Good morning Bhai" satya joined in
Raqesh gave him a warm smile," Good Morning dear, your late as always"
Dai Maa entered the patio and began serving him breakfast,"So are you bringing your lady love to the ball tonight? Did u tell her u love her" she asked
That got his brothers attention,"Is this the same girl youve been in love with since years?"
With a Big smile he exclaimed,"Yes it is, Shes coming to the ball tonight, i want to introduce her to you before i ask her to marry me."
Raqeshs eyebrows shot up," Did you hit you head somewhere today? Are you still under depression for loosing that case last week, i get it now, rapid hysteria?"
Satya looked up at his brother,"im not depressed, i love this girl and wanna spend the rest of my life with her."
"Your too young to marry and recognize what love is, hell even i havent figured dat sentiment out yet"
"Im 26, and not a baby anymore, i know what im doing, its either her or no one"satya chipped in
RK looked at dev, and back at satya," Well if thats the case then i have to like whoever this girl is, or my brother would turn ascetic for life, i cant let that happen."
Satya smiled and replied," Believe me youll love her, shes an amazing women, Thanks for understanding bhai", he picked up a sandwich and rushed out," ill see you in the evening"
On RKs blasted look dev began," You need to stop treating him like a kid, trust his judgment sometimes."
Raqesh went on," i have nothing against love, but this is pure madness, that girl has drove him crazy"
"Love is crazy you egghead, just because you havent felt it, doesnt mean it doesnt exist"
Raqesh chortled, "Yeah right, ive still to meet a girl who would make my heart skip a beat, if thats even possible."
"The day you fall for a women, im gonna remind you of your words" dev picked up d laptop and walked away
Raqesh wished that his friends words came true. Who didnt want love, but he wanted a women of substance, who would put her foot down at his every stubborn suggestion and argue with him rather than take his orders and follow his every word like a puppet. He was tired of the women he normally dated, most were with him just because of his status and money, or just for fun, and he didnt want his brother falling in such a trap especially since he happened to love this women so much.
Savitri looked at the wall clock for the umpteenth time, she was gonna get late and her friend was going to strangle her, she just knew it.She adjusted the pallu of her saree, she had chosen to wear a red saree with black embroidery, picking up her purse she rushed outta her apartment.
She reached the convention centre just in time and rushed to the banquet hall. Satya was no where in sight, she reached for her phone and tried his number several times but to no avail. "Where is this idiot."
She moved past a group of gentleman and across the ballroom saw a man towering over everyone, greeting them, people swamped him, all trying to get a good look at him, women openly flirted with him while he smiled and conversed. Savitri stood there, rooted to her spot unable to move, drawn by his strong personality and alluring features,unable to take her eyes off him,handsome didnt even begin to describe him, he turned around and caught sight of her,he looked at her with the same riveted awe, as if he felt the same inability to look away, the same surging emotions. Who was this man?She stood there hypnotized struggling to get some part of her,or for that matter any part of her to function.
Raqesh couldnt move or breathe . The instant he set eyes on the women across the hall, his heart skipped a beat,he paused enthralled by her captive gaze. Every thought vanished from his head, replaced by a single word, Mine. He wanted to possess her, make her his, look at her beautiful eyes for the rest of his life,hold this glorious example of feminity and never let go.He knew his life was changed for ever, he would never be the same.
Without hesitation, he moved forward, ignoring the people around him, he had eyes just for her, she was like a siren commanding with her eyes, her hair sheeted down her back in heavy waves.The most stunning beauty he'd ever beheld.
A few feet away from her,someone placed their hand on his shoulder calling out, pulling him out of his reverence. He looked back"Hi RK, How are you darling" It was gullika his ex girlfriend. He didnt have time for this. She went on to hug him and began babbling, her words refused to register in his mind. He quickly turned back to see the mystery women gone.
That was Part 1, wud appreciate ur views