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Posted: 11 years ago
guys this is the os i wrote for the os contest... i dont know how many of you read and how many of u even noticed it or not... so here it goes...
 
VIRMAN OS
PYAR TOH HAMESHA SE THA...
 
 
 
Virat entered his room and looked at his small world... His world which he never thought of having an year back...
Virat : manvi...
Manvi : shh... She just slept  (looking at their 2.5 months old daughter, nirvi)
Virat : we need to talk...
Manvi : ok... Wait for me outside the room...
After 5 minutes manvi came out of the room and looked at virat who was lost in his thoughts.
Manvi : what was that important...??
Virat : us...
Manvi : meaning...??
Virat : meaning u, me and nirvi..
Manvi : do u mind coming straight to the point...??
Virat : we need to start everything a fresh...
Manvi : but why...??
Virat : are you dumb or u purposely do this...??
Manvi : i am not getting it...
Virat : manvi... For how long will we live like this...?? Lets just accept the truth of our life and live with it... We are married... Married for long 10 months... But still we live like two strangers who are brought together by destiny...
Manvi : it was a mistake...
Virat : yeah... It was a mistake but my daughter isnt... U just cannot address her like the mere result of that mistake...
Manvi : i never said that... She is my daughter as well... She was and will always be a part of me n my heart... I can never think like that...
Virat : but this is what u meant mrs. Vadera...
Manvi : you are taking me wrong... And you are going on a wrong tangent...
Virat : exactly... Always i am the one who has been wrong... Its always me who lands u up in misery... I am the only reason because of which you are struck with me in this marriage thing and icing on the cake is our baby who is born out of a mistake.
Manvi : stop it right now virat... I have had enough now... Goodnight...
Virat : coming in terms with the reality always scare people...
Manvi  went back to the room'..
Virat stood their thinking of how their lives got intertwined... How they became one...
Flashback
In a valentines' day party, virat n manvi again met each other after 2 years... They were college buddies and meeting again was a beautiful feeling'.
Manvi : virat...
Virat : manvi... How are u shorty...??
Manvi : dont call me that you mr. Arrogant...
Next moment they hugged each other shouting " I missed you..."
They broke the hug and looked at each other...
Manvi : you havent changed a bit... Just a little more charming than before...
Virat : but u look different... U are looking beautiful...
Manvi : thanks...
Virat : come lets have some drinks...
Manvi : rum...
Virat : sure...
Virat n manvi were now drunk n were endlessly chatting about their college days'
Manvi : virat drop me home...
Virat : sure...
Virat and manvi helped each other stand properly and laughed thinking that they are unable to even stand by themselves then how in the world will they go back to their place...
Manvi : lets take a room...
Virat : ur right bandariya...
Manvi : u chep... Stop calling me that'.
Virat : okkk'.
Virat and manvi took a room in a hotel and when they entered, they saw that it was beautifully decorated...
Manvi : its  so beautiful  vilu...
Virat : its virat mani...
Manvi : i loved you... (titling her head)
Virat : i too loved you... (virat hugged manvi thinking about how they once dated each other and after a month settled on being bffs... )
Virat : I really loved you that time... I still do...
Manvi : but u never told me this before... Not even when we were together...
Virat : i didnt realise that time.. But now i should leave...
Virat broke the hug and turned around to leave when manvi hugged him from back... Her head resting against his back and her hands clinging to his jacket...
Manvi : dont go... Love me virat...
Virat turned around and captured her lips in a kiss. He kissed her harder, letting his tongue trail against her lips, begging for entrance. Manvi happily opened her mouth and let it in. He parted from the kiss and threw her roughly on the mattress. He quickly went on top of her to claim her. They both looked at each other with their eyes filled with desire and lust. Virat again brushed his lips against her and then moving his head from her head to her chest placing wet kisses and his tongue trailing along her collarbones making his way down. Manvi pulled him even more closer with her hand making way inside his shirt and feeling him. Both of them made love to each other reaching the peak and moaning each other's name in pleasure.
Next morning both of them were embarrased and parted without saying anything...
6 weeks later, manvi found that she was pregnant. She tried hiding this  but beeji got to know about it. And  virman  got married in a week. Virat accepted manvi but manvi was never able to accept their marriage.
Flashback ends'.
Virat was standing near the window  when manvi came outside and  saw him broken and shattered with a pain in his eyes.
Manvi : virat'. I am sorry'.
Virat : its ok' (without looking at her)
Manvi : happy valentines' day chep'.
Virat immediately turned around and looked at her'  she was wearing the same dress she wore an year back'.
Manvi : I love you'. I realized that I was punishing you for something that was not totally yours fault'
Virat : shh' I love you too'. Never leave me now'
Manvi : no never'. Will u be my valentine virat'.???
Virat : I am already yours'.
Manvi : so it's a date tomorrow' right'??
Virat : hmmm'. Yes'
Virman : I love you'.!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
me 1st!!!!!

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Now this was a small cute and emotional gift!!!!!! Kind of u say a Holi gift"!!!!! Lolzzz!!!!!!! was really a sweet piece!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a cute little story <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
super awesome naina...
flashback convo was soo sweet...
but i was finding naina here...😉
keep writing...
thanks for the pm..
n no waiting for the nxt part but for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: fatima06

super awesome naina...

flashback convo was soo sweet...
but i was finding naina here...😉
keep writing...
thanks for the pm..
n no waiting for the nxt part but for next

 
thanks fatima...
but u found me in this piece of writing...??? where...??? let me know this... 😉
yes next os will be soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Naina...awesome os...it is different n very nice...😃...it was really cute...the ending was superb...it was cute...😳...virat is such a sweetheart...virman become one...❤️...thank u so much for the sweet os Naina n also for the pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome os
Loved the flashback
Waiting for the nextEdited by afreenkansal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: naina927

 
thanks fatima...
but u found me in this piece of writing...??? where...??? let me know this... 😉
yes next os will be soon... 😊

hahaha...nahi mera matlab hai k me tou dhund rahi the  k yahan per naina kahan hai 😆
but mili he nahi 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just finished ur os now...
This saw again awesome one...
The girl's name was superb...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome once again...👍🏼!!!