OS - The Meeting! - Part 3 / Pg 10 - Page 5

After making Khushi leave Delhi & live like an orphan again all he has to say is sorry??  Di is still his main concern. How dare he tell Khushi what his Di has gone through these past 2 years!!

damn damn and double damn
just like that she gives up all her fight
well what else could she do
man she sure told him didnt she
well she had
after what he did
wonder what happened in those 2 years she wasnt there
but no more should she be blamed for it all
and can you blame her for not feeling to good about your di after all her 2 years of life were wasted due to you making sure your di has her happily ever after
even though that was just the illusion

very nice

simply awesome.loved itc

Part 2 is well written. But this Arnav is not the one who loves Khushi. He is still his Di's chote. He is here to get Khushi back out of guilt and not because he loved her. I would want u to continue writing and make Arnav realize the importance of Khushi in his life. Khushi agreed to go back too easily and that too because he kind of emotionally blackmailed her. The story seems incomplete at this moment. Please continue the story if u can

nice one..really so intersting...please continue soon..will you send pm..sent u buddy request...

awesome :) really beautiful.

Loved both parts but I think you should continue. 👍🏼 There is so much more to write, which you have not, probably a flashback and his realisation that Khushi does matter in his life.  That is the sole reason, he is here today - for his Khushi.

Awww, Khushi shouldn't have given in so easily...

loved it...it was so emotional...i understand to arnav anjali was always his first priority...bt y d hell he forgets dat even others hav all d bloody emotions n just nt his only dearest di...😡