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PART 24

guy: sir!

Sahil: kya hai? meine kaha tha us nimmo pe nazar rakhne ke liye to tum yaha kyun aaye ho?

guy: sir woh bohot batameezi se pesh aa rahi hai! khana bhi nahin kha rahi!

Sahil: (shocked) chalo mere saath! (goes to nimmo)

Nimmo: (crying)

sahil: (angry) NIMMO! NIMMO!

Nimmo: (looks up) tum! tum yaha...

Sahil: (before nimmo could finish he slaps her)

Nimmo: tumhe kya lagta hai is thapar se mujhe kuch hota hai! NAHIN! aur waise bhi mujhe yeh nahin pata ki tumne mujhe yaha rakha hi kyun hai kyunki tum mujhse jitna mohobat karo mein tumse use zyada nufrat karoongi aur zindagi mein kabhi bhi tum mere nahin ho sakte!

Sahil: (gets frustrated) tum samajhti kya ho! huh? tumko to mein haasil karke hi rahoonga!

Nimmo: Mein sirf kunal se pyaar karti hoon aur tum uske saamne kuch nahin ho!

Sahil: (starts hitting her) manoj! tum mujhe pistol do!

guy: lekin sir apne to mana..woh... inko marna acha nahin hoga!

Sahil: tum mujhe samjaoge acha kya hai aur kya nahin! (takes the gun from manoj)

Nimmo: (gets shocked) sahil! tum gun...woh... I guess mujhe tumse yeh hi umeed rakhni chahiye thi!

Sahil: (laughs) Nimmo tum kab samjogi ki mein totally unpredictable hoon! (points the gun at nimmo)

WHAT'S NEXT?

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PART 25

Sahil: (pulls on the trigger)

Nimmo: (closes her eyes and for the last time sees kunal) kunal!

Sahil: (is about to shoot nimmo when suddenly someone pushes the gun away)

Kunal: (shocked to see sahil) tum sahil! itne ghatya insaan nikloge!

Sahil: tum! yaha..tum yaha kaise..

Kunal: (walks to nimmo)

Nimmo: (hugs him) kunal! i knew tum aoge!

Kunal: mein kabhi bhi yeh nahin soch pata ki tum kuch galat kar sakti ho! i love you nimmo aur pyaar hamesha vishwaas ke buniyaad pe chalta hai! (hugs her back) i will always believe in you!

Sahil: (angry to see kunal and nimmo together) yeh..kaise.. (trying to run away)

Police:(stops sahil) you're under arrest!

Sahil: (shocked)

police: chaliye! (pulls him and his men away)

Nimmo: (happy) i love you! lekin mujhe ek baath samajh nahin aai tumhe kaise pata ki mein yaha hoon!

Kunal: woh! mere dil ne kaha ki tum yaha ho!

Nimmo: kunal!! such such bolo!

Kunal: (laughs) acha! acha! woh kya hai sahil ke ek aadmi ka phone aaya tha aur usne mujhe sub such bola ki tum kaha ho! shayad woh sahil se khush nahin tha! anyways tum theek ho yeh acha hai!

Nimmo: (smiles) ha! ab chale mujhe ghar jaana hai tumhare saath kuch time beetana hai!

Kunal: chalo! mein bhi bohot thak gaya hoon! waise nimmo

Nimmo: ha!

Kunal: tum jaanti thi ki mein aoonga!

Nimmo: ha! mujhe tumpe pura bharosa hai aur use zyada mujhe humare rishte pe pura bharosa hai!

Kunal: (happy) love you! (higs her and spins her around) Nimmo! tumhe in logo ne kuch khilya pilaya tha!

Nimmo: kyun?

Kunal: woh..bohot hulki ho gayi ho!

Nimmo: Kunal!

Kunal: are mazak kar raha hoon! ab chale!

Nimmo: chalo!

HEY GUYS HOPE YOU LIKED IT! JUST TO TELL YOU THE FAN-FIC HAS ENDED

Edited by inukag4ever - 29 August 2006 at 3:25pm

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awesome.fic.if u start a new one do inform abt that

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 6:16am | IP Logged
great fanfic...awesome ending Clap

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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
coollllllllllllll ff da ending is gr8 plzzzzzzzzzzzzz con next 1 soon u really update parts soon and finish da ff soon well done itz really cool

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