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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 10:28am | IP Logged

Hi This is Natasha (i am not evil like natasha from khnk) So plz dont hate me I hope u guys like my Fan-Fic.

Part1

(Nimmo is sitting on her bed with a sad look on her face)

Kunal enters the room and sees her

Kunal: Nimmo are you ok

Nimmo: yeah! woh bus mama,papa ki yaad aa rahi thi.

Kunal: Oh! toh tum jake mill kyun nahi aati.

Nimmo:Smile really I can go

Kunal: yeah sure kyun nahi.

Nimmo: ok main tyaar ho jati hoon.

(nimmo gets ready and comes out wearing a light blue suit)

Kunal: U look great nimmo.

Nimmo:Embarrassed thanks.

kunal: maine driver ko car nikal ne ko bol diya hai.

Nimmo: ThanksUnhappy*thinks* i though he was gonna drive me there

Kunal: (snaps his fingers) Nimmo kahan kho gayi ho?

Nimmo: Kya!

KUnal: arent u getting late?

Nimmo: Oh yeah

(nimmo gets into the car and suddenly a car was speeding by when the driver lost control )

What Will happen next?

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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Thats really good.
Keep it up, cant wait 2 c wat happens next.
Hurry n post d next part Wink   Clap
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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Thats really good.
Keep it up, cant wait 2 c wat happens next.
Hurry n post d next part Wink   Clap
Hey i'm d 1st 1.
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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 10:50am | IP Logged
oohhhhh it's really awesome keep it up yaaar can't wait for the next part pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue asap Tongue

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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 10:51am | IP Logged
please please continue Clap

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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
Recap: Nimmo is going to meet her parents when the driver lost control of the car.

Part 2

The car hits the tree, and Nimmo falls out the car and hits her head on the rock


The driver sees her and takes her to the hospital ( the driver just had a scartch on his head).

The driver called the Segal house and informed them about the accident.

Segal family come rushing to the hospital. ( well the three kate baals have a smile on there face)(You know they are evil and are happy what happend to Nimmo)

Kunal looks at the driver with anger in his eyes

Kunal: How did this happen?

Driver: (scared) Woh sir ek car jor se chala rahi thi aur

Kunal: (interepts him) bus mujhe kuch nahi sunna u are fired.

Dada ji: Kunal beta uski baat to sunno

Kunal: lakin dada ji eskai karan nimmo hospital main hai.

Dada ji: Kunal beta sunlo.

Kunal: Theek hain bolo

( The driver tells him how the accident happen)

Kunal: Sorry main ne aisehi tum pe shak kiya

(They all waited for the docter to come out tell them if Nimmo was ok)

After 30 min the docter came out and kunal rushed to him.

Kunal: Docter how is Nimmo.




WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT? WHAT WILL THE DOCTER SAY?
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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
awesome part! Embarrassed Embarrassed

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