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updated chapter 1

plz give ur feedback guys..and tell me if i can increase the length of the chapters??

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Chapter 2: A mom gets back her son

- India has changed, there are too many shopping malls, more convenient bridges every where. When I left India, as far as I can remember, India was some kind a very dirty country with full of traffic jam.now this is India at 21st century , I surely have some good profits from here too.

Prithvi arrives at Singhania house and Laxi Devi is waiting at the door with the Aarti Thali.

- Mom. mom mom mom..I was missing you so very much..infact I was missing everything here..

- but still you never thought of coming back and meeting your mom. Laxmi Devi starts crying.

- Now, I am here, so please stop crying and what is this all about..you know I don't like all of these spirituals part..what I don't believe, irritates me mom..please stay these away from me

- but I do respect me and you love me, please keep quiet for a while

After that Laxmi Devi does welcome aarti of her son and embraces him with her open arms.

- Hi my doll..hows you?? and yea..you look pretty in this beautiful dress..are you going somewhere..date with boyfriend kya aha aha???

- arre no bhaiya..ye toh bass aapke aane ki khusi mein..i was missing you bhaiya..

- i was missing you too my sweetheart..mom, when will dad return finishing his UK business tour? Is it tomorrow or day after tom? I need to talk with him regarding my new project..

- he will come back day after tom, he has called me in the morning tough, abhi abhi aur you have started talking about your work..ufff...you take rest first..Khan Chacha will show you the room

Prthvi enters his room, this is beautiful, what exactly he wanted, how every mother can read all the secrets of their kids, so amazing, he opens the window to have a fresh air from the south and he sees the garden with beautiful flowers and swimming pool side..everything is so neat and clean..

-Thank You Khan Chacha for this beautiful arrangement

- Thank you too Saheb Baba, I am just one call away from you, if you need anything give me a ring, I will bring it to you..

- Waaoo..that's great..now I want to enjoy my personal space here..Thank You..

Khan Chacha goes and the room also goes into some meditation mode. Yes, Prithvi does not like to be disturbed when he is doing his personal work. He wants some calmness around him. After having a bath, he has lost in his bed to avoid the jet lag and he has to do that primary work too apart from the opening restaurant also, and for that he needs a clear mind to make some foolproof plans..

Pre Cap : Sanjana Roy comes into the scene



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oh wow..
prithvi returned to india
and is too serious about his work..
lets see what happens next..
sanjana's entry is on the way..

2 updates in a day
oh wow..
keep updating..

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Posted: 22 March 2013 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Loved the concept... Smile
First part is just awesome..
Prithvi returning to india after 12yrs...you described his
emotions well...i dnt know why...but it touched my heart
Cant wait to read more
Plzz update soon

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awesome writing debu :)

really nice work , loved it , continue soon

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