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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged


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heytal IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged

Yipieee me firstDancing

Superb start 
very impactful intro
Big smile
But painfulCry
Superb songSmile
Posts quotaOuch


Meri maange poori honi hi chahiye
main waise bhi kam demand karti hoon

Will be waiting
Day Dreaming

Edited by heytal - 21 March 2013 at 12:04pm

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
The title itself makes me curious...
Will wait for the story to build up... I guess the girl in question isn't the lead...
Congrats on this new SS... hope soon the restrictions will cease to exist. Big smile
Waiting for more...

Edited by Onir - 21 March 2013 at 12:50pm

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.Maggie. Goldie

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged

Okay... so I have this habit of following saving the  best for the last quote, and I thought to read this prologue in a fresh mood hence and I have read it now and damn it to hell, I want to catch your shoulders and shake you violently until your teeth chatter. How can anyone make us feel for characters in such less lines. How? HAUU?

Needless to say I am hooked and I am going to stalk this thread big time. Hmph.

Edited by .Maggie. - 22 March 2013 at 8:02am

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
First of all, congratulations for the new story! I'm glad to have something from you to read. Smile

My stomach dropped like a pinball when I read the prologue. I already felt for him when he tried to act normal for the sake of his family and covered the anguish he was going through.

I'm curious about his case though. Was his love unrequited? Did he never confess or did she not accept him?

I'm not going to say either way if the girl in his twin brother's arms is the lead or not. But personally, I wouldn't want her to be the one he'll end up with. Creates a lot of family mess! Ouch

And, you didn't mention his name anywhere. Any special reason ya aise hi? I guess, aise hi since Dadi is happy to have 'both' her grandsons back, and one is Dev so the other one is Maan. Yes yes, ignore my blabber! LOL

Thanks Avi! Hug
(Maine kaha tha na 'thank you' ke baghair main nahin reh sakti! LOL)

Edited by mayyo13 - 21 March 2013 at 2:49pm

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
dgno1 aise naam dekhkar first thought comes to my mind what is it's meaning??

then i saw somewhere written Devil queen..

but then i thought how can it be???
i'm still solving this puzzle..

nice start..
pahle hi update me dhamaal kar diya ji...

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