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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
****WORK ON HOLD****
This SS is inspired by popular Malayalam movie "thattathin marayathu... a young hindu guy falling for a muslim girl...
i hope u all enjoy it...
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Here i present...
"BEHIND THAT VEIL"

HOPE U ALL ENJOY...


prologue...post 2
character sketch...post 3
index...post 4



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thank u all especially Jasminerahul for ur constant support...Smile

blessings please...with likes and lots of comments...Smile


Edited by pari_jyothika - 21 March 2013 at 3:10pm

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Prologue

2:30 am ... Bhopal police station...

 

Constable 1(c1): ramu'.chai layi kya???{ramu'.did u get the tea?}

Constable 2(c2):no yaar'abhi abhi ek lafange ko mla saab ke ghar pe ghuskar pakda hai..'.(just now one brat has been arrested'for barging into that mla's house.)


Inspector saab aa rahe hai'.

..inspector sir is coming in few minutes'

Constable 1:aajkal ke bache na'bilkul nalayal hai'.(college kids these days''are really good for nothing''.)

Constable walks into the cell'

C1:naam kya hai tera'.

A young lad in his twenties face him'

He:maan


C1:tujhe koi kaam nahi kya''aadhi raat ko hume pareshaan karta hai'.khotta(don't u have any other work'.troubling us'.r*****l)

Maan clutches his fists in anger'.

C2 just looks at them


C1:waise'..uss ghar pe 2 choriyaan hai na'.kaunsi waali hai teri'..pehla ya doosa'.ya phir dono'..kaafi mast hai''(btw'that house has 2 girls rite'which one is yours'1st or second'..or then both???Both r superb)

Maan then punches his face in anger'.

Maan:aggar tune mere "geet" ke baare main kaha to tumhe zinda jala dunga'..he screamed in anger'..

C1 starts bleeding'.both walk out'..deciding to deal later'.

Just then inspector dev chaudhary walks into the station'..

***yawning****


Dev:kya be'..aadhi raat ko kisko itni bechaini thi mujhse milne kii'.sone bhi nahi deta kya'.(who the hell is here at midnight)..

C2:ek college student hai sir'.mla "taya abbu" ke ghar pe ghussa tha''.kaafi violent lagta hai'.c1 ko maara///

Dev: wo chodo'.zarroor isne kuch ulat kaha hoga'.(c1 looks down)kaha hai wo'.??

Dev walks into the cell

Dev:kaun hai abeyy''..

Maan lifts his head'..devs eyes widen

Dev:maan'.tum???

C2:sir'.ye st.peters ke arts student hai'..waise tho koi background  problem nahi hai'.

Dev:arts student'maan ye sab kya hai''.

Maan:dev tum yaha'

C1 and c2 are shocked'

Dev:yeh maan singh khurana hai'..india ke best business man ke pote aur pichle saal ke best business man award winner''khuranas ke iqlauta waaris'..double mba aur rank holder'..aur mera sabe puraana dost'

Aur yaha pe '..arts student???


Maan now sits in a chair infront of dev'.

Dev:ye sab kya hai maan''tum bhopal main kaise'..???Aur yaha police station mein'.

Maan:i fell in love!!!!!

Dev:the maan singh khurana'''the on,e and only fel in love''.phir to kahani sunni hi padegi''kaun hai who''hamari bhabhi'.(both smile)

Maan:geet ahmed khan''..meri geet'..meri parde ke piche chuppe pari!!!! (she is geet ahmed khan...my geet...my angel behind that veil)










Edited by pari_jyothika - 20 March 2013 at 6:50am

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Characters(details will be posted later)
maan singh khurana

geet ahmed khan

asad ahmed khan(geet brother)

amina ahmed khan(geet sister)

adi khana

anjali rai khurana(maan elder sister)

taya abbu "maamujaan"...geet,asad and aamna uncle




Edited by pari_jyothika - 21 March 2013 at 5:06am

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Index::::
part one wil be posted tommorrow...
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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Awesome start...con. 1&2 are billu & gopi he he so funnyLOL. please continue soon.

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 7:28am | IP Logged
Superb prologue.I think Maan pretended 2 b an ordinary guy...lets c.Beautiful banner.Surprised 2 c Azad as Geet's bro.Who is playing maan's n geet's sister?waiting 4 pt1

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 11:45am | IP Logged
update soon

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Posted: 21 March 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
hi
the progolue seems interesting
plz cont soon with the part and pm me

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