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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
[/QUOte)Congrats Sandia - you are now dazzling ...IF Dazzler![/QUOTE] thanks Shanti dnt even realise i am a dazzler whatever that means.lol.

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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prishna_fan

Fizu, Sandia and Lisa, it's a very nice thread love itStar. i become a fan now. Can't wait for the next part !!!!Sandia, love your part, very beautiful.Lisa, What a awesome banner !!!!!!! Prishna looks dashing ,Keep it up
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Posted: 24 March 2013 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ragvir_Prishna

I love this SS, love the banner Lisa and love the first chapter Sandia, can't wait for the next 2 updates
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Thanks everyone for liking, commenting, Sandia what a wonderful part, I don't think I will be able to match that, next part is Lisa's will be up in a bit :D

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(^^Banner made by Lisa Big smile)
 
 

Hi everyone, thanks for the lovely comments and Sandia did a great a job with the first part didn't she Embarrassed now it's Lisa's Part, let me tell you she also did a great job, I don't think I can match them, here's the 2nd part Embarrassed:

 
 
 
 
Prishna SS: Tu Mohabbat Hai - Part 2
 

When Krishna woke up she immediately thought of the stranger in the park, she kept seeing these eyes in her dreams, she just could not stop thinking about him and about how much he must be hurting and how much he loves that girl, she wished she had spoken to him and just sat there thinking, she wondered if she'll ever be loved like that, just then her papa came by to tell her he'll ride with her to the office, as he needed her to work on this ad campaign for a new client. After breakfast, she chatted with Chanchal for a while before getting ready to leave, then she and Vidyapati left for the office, on their way she asked him about her marriage proposal and what she'd like to do, he told her about the proposal, the boy's name, what he does, and that he was a nice boy but only if she likes him and agrees to their marriage then and only then will it happen, and if she does not like him, he has another boy in mind, she said she did not want to disappoint ma again so she will agree, but maybe she'll let him choose, and they both smiled at each other.

When they arrived at the office everyone wanted to talk to her as she had just come back from Paris, and Krishna being her usual friendly self chatted with everyone, took a few pictures with some of the girls and then left to go discuss the project. Pinto was standing in the corridor when she came in, he pretended not to look her way but could not help himself, he found himself smiling when she smiled and thought she looked so beautiful with her black pants and red fitted shirt, her hair was open and she looked so perfect. As she was coming towards him he quickly turned around and waited for her to pass, but she accidentally bounced his arm, and as she turned around to say sorry she looked at his eyes, she felt a bit weird and thought haven't I seen you before. He said its okay and walked off, she found it so strange why do I feel as if I've seen these eyes before, but she knew to herself she'd never met him and did not even know who he was. Pinto tried as hard as he could all day not to run into Krishna, but could not help himself from stealing little glances of her as she walked in and out of offices; she was trying to put everything together for the new photo shoot. She asked one of the girls what his name was and how long he'd been working there, and if they knew anything about him.

When they got home Krishna went up to her room and headed straight for the pictures, she looked at them over and over, she kept thinking about the stranger, his pain, how he caressed the picture, yet she's sure she can see love, deep love in his eyes too, and wondered if he was ok, if he will be there tonight. After dinner she headed for the park again hoping the stranger might be there but she looked all around and he was not, she felt so disappointed and left for home. She could not sleep she kept thinking about this stranger and how much love he has, she kept looking at his pictures, then she suddenly thought of this new guy at the office, Pinto, and how similar his eyes seemed. She lay on her bed thinking about his eyes until she fell asleep. At Pinto's house after he helped Bhabi take care of Sonu and ma he headed to his room, he could not stop thinking about Krishna and how beautiful she looked and thought how lucky her husband is going to be, he took out one of her paintings, touched her face and held it close to him, he fell asleep with her painting on his chest.

The next day at the office when Krishna was heading off for the photo shoot Pinto peeped out of his office to catch a glimpse of her, she had on a blue jeans, white t-shirt and her hair up in a ponytail as she knew she would be working outdoors, he smiled to himself and went back to his room. He started to think of how happy he was before everything happened then suddenly there was a knock on the door, it was Krishna, and she came to ask him to come along as she needed him to help her. She said her papa said it was ok for him to go with her, so he said ok and followed her. Pinto felt uneasy around Krishna as he knew she could never be his, and being around her reminded him of the pain caused by his father yet deep down he was happy for this time together as soon she will be someone else's. At the photo shoot Krishna was so professional and Pinto admired her and wondered how someone could be so perfect, she was so petit but so strong and confident. Krishna kept calling Pinto to hand her stuff and help her with the models as if she had known him long time back, but that was just Krishna, she was friendly with everyone, their hands touched a couple of times and they both felt something strange, but did not make anything of it. Krishna also took pictures of everyone there, the scenery and even some of Pinto. When the shoot was over they headed back the office, it was late and Krishna wanted to stay back to work, she asked Pinto if he would stay back with her, he could not refuse her so he called Bhabi and told her he had to work, but would be home as soon as he can, he spoke to Sonu too and told him to be a good boy.

Krishna went to the dark room to develop her pictures; she was so proud of her work and knew her papa would be too, she came out to look for Pinto who had just come back from buying something for them to eat. They sat in Pinto's office to eat but Pinto kept to himself while Krishna kept looking at him and trying to figure him out, she asked him where he was from and who was Sonu, as she overheard him earlier, he told her Sonu was his nephew, it was getting late and as soon as they finished eating they need to leave. Krishna smiled in agreement, and they locked up the office and headed out, she headed to her car while Pinto followed her, she offered Pinto a lift but he told her it was ok he has a bike and pointed to it, she got into her car and drove off. Krishna decided to visit the park before going home, but the stranger was not there, she felt sad but then jumped into her car and headed for home. When she arrived her mother who was waiting asked her where she was and why she had to stay back knowing it was her first day back home and that too with a stranger. Krishna looked at Vidyapati (who indicated for her to go ahead) then her mother and said she was sorry, that she was tired and had already eaten, and she was going to bed. Krishna tried to fall asleep but she kept thinking about the stranger and his eyes, she could not understand what it was about him that was making her feel drawn to him. Krishna had taken home with her the photos of Pinto that she had taken earlier and kept looking at his photos and that of the stranger, she wondered why they seemed so similar and why Pinto never smiles, he looks so sad.

As the days went by Krishna and Pinto were spending more and more time together on this new project, it was unbelievable for Pinto, but he never showed it and kept to himself as much as he can, he was always serious when Krishna looked at him, but could not keep his eyes off her any chance he got. On the last day of shooting Krishna asked Pinto if he would stand in for one of the models who got injured and was unable to come, she knows he did not come for that reason but she really needs his help now as she could not waste time, he hesitated but finally gave in to her as knew it was for the ad. So Krishna showed him what to wear and told him to come out when he was done, she went over to him, touched his shoulder and told him to relax, she then started taking his pictures but had to stop. She went up to him and unbuttoned his shirt a bit, she then passed her hands through his hair, smiled and told him to please relax. She again had to stop and went over to show him how to pose, so she held his hands and showed him, then on his waist for a bit, then she came back in front of him and touched his face to tilt it to the light, they both stared at each other but neither budged, and he asked her if she touched all her models like that, she said no, but I just wanted to touch you and that made him smile for a bit, so Krishna said yes that's what I want to see. After a couple round of pictures, Krishna told Pinto he has to wear a mask for the final set and wait a bit for some darkness to set in, these shots had to be close up shots and as Krishna went in closer and closer to Pinto's face she could not help herself, she saw something in his eyes, the mask and darkness made her think he was the stranger in the park, she just kept clicking away and Pinto could not believe how close their faces were, they both looked at each other and felt as if no one else was around.

After the shoot Krishna and Pinto went back to the office where they were alone, she kept thinking about Pinto being the stranger in the park and she had to find out, she could not understand why she was feeling an attraction to him, it was strange. After they had something to eat Krishna tried to have a conversation, she only had one thing on her mind and that was Pinto's eyes and the stranger's, she needed to know, she could not help herself and asked him why he was always so bitter. Pinto got up angrily and walked away, he told her she did not need to know this, it was none of her business and what does it have to do with his work. Krishna saw he was upset and angry and decided they should finish for the day. Pinto grabbed his stuff and they both headed out the door, as Pinto took off the lights Krishna turned around to look at him and couldn't help but look straight into his eyes, she just stood there lost, she didn't know what to do, Pinto too just looked at her then softly said let's go. Krishna said she was sorry while they were walking out, but neither said another word, Krishna got into her car and Pinto on his bike. Krishna kept thinking about Pinto and the stranger on her way home and as soon as she arrived she told Vidyapati she had forgotten something and left. She headed straight for the park, as she walked to the spot she saw someone sitting there, she tried to get as close as she can, she saw him there sitting looking at a picture and wiping tears from his eyes, she tried to see who the picture was of but it was dark. He just sat there looking at the paper in his hand and Krishna felt this deep urge to go over to him but just then he got up to leave so she hid behind a tree, and as she watched him pass she was surprised to see the stranger whom she felt drawn to, who she could not stop thinking of, whose eyes had so much pain, who loves someone so deeply was none other than Pinto, she could not believe it was him but she knew deep down inside his eyes reminded her of the stranger and she felt a closeness to him which she has never felt for anyone.

When Krishna went home, she lay on her bed with all her pictures, she looked at each one and gently stroked them one by one, she looked at the pictures from the dark night and those of Pinto and she finally saw the connection - the pain-filled eyes - she saw Pinto's face before her and the pain she sees in his eyes everyday, she felt stupid for not realizing this before, she felt bad for asking him why he's always upset. She fell asleep thinking about him. The next morning Krishna left very early for work as she wanted to get there before Pinto and she had decided she would be quiet and not pry, she was not sure how she would face him, but to her surprise when Pinto came he sat next to her and said he was sorry about what happened and it was not her fault and he should not have spoken to her like that. Krishna stayed quiet for a while then looked at him smiling and said that he did not need to apologise to her and it was ok and if he was really sorry he could bring her a cup of coffee, they both smiled at each other and Pinto left to get the coffee, Krishna watched Pinto as he walked off and thought to herself that's the first time she saw him smile, and his eyes did not look so painful today. When Pinto came back he sat next to Krishna, handed her the coffee and they both sat there drinking coffee, then he told her he wanted to tell her what happened and if she was ready to listen, Krishna smiled and shook her head in approval, then Pinto spilled his heart out to her, with all his emotions attached, tears, anger, pain, resentment, joy, sorrow. They both looked at each then Pinto told her he does not want her to feel pity for him when he saw her wiping away tears, she smiled at him and said she does not pity him but admires him for his strength and courage, and his love for his family that she'd love to meet his family one day, but first she'd like to see his work, if he would please show her, maybe teach her when they were finished with their campaign. Pinto smiled at Krishna and told her of course, and they both went ahead with their work with much ease and happiness, and as the days went by they chatted more and more about work, about life and even his love for painting.

It was going into three weeks that they had been working on the new ad campaign, so at the office while they were wrapping up the last few bits, Krishna was planning to surprise Pinto with some new paints and other stuff and asked him if he would do her painting at some time. Pinto looked at Krishna and saw her smiling and asked her what's wrong, she smiled back and said it was nothing. It was late and they were both getting tired, so Krishna ran to her office to collect her stuff and as she was about to go into Pinto's office they bumped into each other and everything fell, including Pinto's bag with all Krishna's paintings. They held onto each other for a while, just looking into each others eyes, Krishna felt lost in his eyes and Pinto just wanted to bring her closer to him, they could both feel each other's heart racing but realized what was happening and let go. Pinto realising his paintings were on the floor tried as fast as he can to gather them up and Krishna as well tried to pick up her surprise stuff, but just then she saw a paper next to her and picked it up, it was facing downwards and as she was about to turn it over Pinto grabbed it out of her hands. Krishna looked at him surprised and asked if it was that bad, Pinto smiled and said it's incomplete. They both smiled at each other and walked off but Krishna knew it had to be his lover's picture. When they were outside Krishna handed Pinto the 'surprise gift' and told him he'd have to paint her one day and teach her as well. Pinto looked at Krishna as she waved goodbye to him, and wondered what will happen to him when she gets married. As Krishna was driving home she could not understand what was happening to her, has she fallen in love with this stranger-Pinto, why does she keep thinking of Pinto all the time, why does she feel the need to be around him, but how could it be, she would soon be married to someone else and Pinto is in love with someone. Krishna desperately wanted to tell this to someone but did not know what to do, she also wanted to find out about the girl in the picture, who it was and what happened between them.



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Firstly Fizu u going to so rock with your part i can just imagine how hot and romantic its going to be. And Lisa my word i have read your part countless of times already bt each time just love it more and more. I am going to comment to really appreciate your part coz a few parts just floored me and gave me goose bumps.

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Firstly Fizu u going to so rock with your part i can just imagine how hot and romantic its going to be. And Lisa my word i have read your part countless of times already bt each time just love it more and more. I am going to comment to really appreciate your part coz a few parts just floored me and gave me goose bumps.
 
Aww thanks Sandia, will try to make it romantic and hot for you Wink

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much Sandia and Fiza for including me in this SS,,I had lots of fun,,was a bit scared after Sandia's part,,,but tried my best and think I did ok,,,Now I can't wait for Fiza's part which I know will have us wanting more,,Heart
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