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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 4:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Marooshmalik

plzzz update soon waiting
i am nwupdating dnt hav anything to do so thats the plan hope u cn wait and read it be4 u go to sleep.n thanks for always being the first one to comment


Edited by Sia12345 - 20 March 2013 at 4:33pm
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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by JESMY

NICE
thanks
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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
update soon waiting...
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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sia12345

Originally posted by Huma0301

Nobody wud ever say anything bad to sumone as sweet as u
Sia especially nt after such a cute update
Poor virat cnt even kiss his wife in peace lol
Wonder wat is virats plan oohhh do update as soon as u can dear

lol u still online i was waiting for ur pm but no responce n nt given on email

Sorry jus a little busy busy bt yh here for a bit nw
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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
Woow...amazing story dear...
N the latest update wz just supercute...
Poor Vadhera broz stuck between Jeeman...excitd to knw watz cooking up in their head...plz cont soon..wud luv to recieve pm for ur future updates!!! Smile
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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Marooshmalik

update soon waiting...
im posting it nw plz read and comment
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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 5:09pm | IP Logged

Continue part 5

Viren – wat is it virat????( with not at all patient to wait)

Virat – lets treat the girlz with a dinner to their favourite restaurant , this way we might get time with them aswell

Viren – g8 idea  virat ( with a smile on his face)

But at the same time virat seemed like he wasn't happy as if something his bothering him.

Viren – kya hua Virat???

Virat- (in a tensed  tone) v hav planed it bt v will need permission from dadaji first .

Viren – so y u worried about that. This is something that could be handled by me very easily.

Both the brothers' convocation goes on until they go to sleep

Next morning

Manvi Jeevika r still sleeping Virat n Viren come in and admire their wife's peacefully sleeping till.

Viren and Virat -  AAAhhh!

Jeevika and Manvi wake up shocked seeing the beloved husband there laughing and their reactions.

Manvi Jeevika: u scared us

Viren and Virat together: sorry

Virat: bhabhi and Manvi me and bhai thought lets go out for dinner today and that to ur favourite restaurant

Manvi: wow really ( about to hug Virat wen she remembers the others are there.

Virat: yes

Jeevika: but have u asked for permission

Viren : i am going to ask when all of us get down stair

Virman and Jeevika: okay

Viren asks for permission and dadaji lets the go. at night all three are ready Virika and Virat and in the hall Manvi was up stair.

Virat shouts: Manvi come down v r going.

All three are waiting for Manvi wen swamini get the best chance to take revenge from Manvi, as he doesn't wnt her with the family anymore and has enough of her.  She knw if she does something clearly everyone would react so she jst decides to work up to her room without bothering anyone. On the other hand virat and virika are still waiting for manvi.

Virat calls Manvi again

Manvi: I am coming

She is coming down stairs and she isn't watch and then suddenly she falls and screams Virat di jiju

all three turn. Manvi is on the floor and she is badly injured her head is bleeding and she hurt her stomach very bad.

Virat Virika: Manvi (all three run to her)

Manvi: in pain voice di jiju vir (unable to complete Virat name and gets unconscious

Virat: Manvi plz open ur eyes

Jeevika: manu please open ur eyes

So that the end of part five hope u like it and if it seems like u hav read something alike u might knw why as I hav told u be4 I began the story.

And nw for the story wat do u think wat will happen will Manvi live will she be okay o will the rest of the family members suffer from a bad time.

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Posted: 20 March 2013 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Marooshmalik

update soon waiting...
i jst did bt u dint evn wait to read it CryCry

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