MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 4

Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm ritvi ur answers would b coming in next update with a twist will let u no & will update soon dis tme
Posted: 10 years ago
nice update

both are going to sty together god knows what will gonna happen

when they will gonna know about each other being send by their parents for seeing each othar
Posted: 10 years ago
Nice ff dear..thoroughly enjoying our dreamy maaneet's karnama! :)
would like to b PMed.sending u buddy req.
Update soon!!!
Posted: 10 years ago
Part 9 coming up 2dy...der is a twist coming up
Posted: 10 years ago
PART 9
   Geet & maan reached at the place.geet was amazed seeing the house. the house was very beautiful.
It was beside a beach seeing the house only one word comes out 'LUXURY'
Geet's mouth was open wen maan came near her ear & said
maan:geet flies would like to build a small house in ur mouth so better close it..
geet looked at him angryly...
 
but den she said
geet:maan ur house is really beautiful...lovely place...specially beach u no wht i just love them...& i hvn't gone since long time now 1st thing i will lke to do is beach beach & beach...
maan:ohkk...geet relax don't worry u can go der ohkk
geet:thank you thank u so much...
she just hugged him & kissed his cheek...& left to explore beach..
maan touches his cheek & smile
maan:pagal hai...
suddenly 
geet:MAAN MAAN...MAAN
maan got afraid hearing this & ran after the voice
wen he reached over there geet was standing over there & had opened up her hand as if trying to catch air inside her arms..
maan:geet wht happen...
he asked in worried voice & was angry..
geet:maan how can i go inside water coz i don't hv cloths to change then how can i go inside water???
maan:oh like dat...he turns & smiles...
geet comes ahead & sees he is smiling...
she looks at him & he was smiling shamelessly
geet:maan y r u smiling?
 
maan:nothng geet were i m smiling?
he showed a smirk now..
geet:aacha chodo remove ur shirt
maan:what no y?
geet:aarey remove na...she keeps her hand near his shirt button & try to remove but maan catches it & say
maan:no geet r u out of ur mind...no ways aur yaha tua bilkul nahi chalo ham andar jate hai...
geet:uff maan wht nonsence...i m just asking ur shirt not ur body ohkk & u go inside i want to explore the beach...
maan:oh like dat...
maan removes his shirt & gives it to her...
geet ws also removing her shirt but her attention went to maan's eyes...
geet takes maan shirt & runs inside house to change...
maan:wht abut ur clothes i mean u hv sum clothes with u na den y my shirt?
geet:no maan dey r all formals...
geet thought:maan dey all r nt formals nor casuals dey all r lingerie & i think dey can't be wore in front of u...
maan:this gal is just another mad...
geet chances & run to beach & played with water...
maan just smile seeing her & dream about her to stay same every day just in front of him...
his thought was disturb by a phone call..
it was 4m daadi...
maan:hello daadi how r u?
 
daadi:maan aap tua mujse baat hi maat karo...aapko mane kaha tha na wo mail kiya hua pic dekhna par nahi aapne tua aabhi taak pic dekha nahi hoga...
maan:haan daadi wo...
he ws looking at geet...
 
daadi:wo wo kya maan...aapko 1 pic dekhne ka time nahi hai...
maan:haan
daadi:kya...aap haan bhi bool rahey hai aapko pata hai ki aapke wajese mujhe kitni problem hoti hai...mera BP baad gaya hai aabhi bhi time hai maan sudhar jaiye...
maan:haan daadi mey abhi wo pic dekh leta hu...
daadi:better...aur wo bhi newyork mey hai tua aapse milne aayegi...ok
haan she will meet u in natasha's cabin tomorrow in afternoon 4 lunch ohkk
she is natasha's best friends so plze address her nicely & plze speak to her in nice way..
maan:ohkk daadi...i hv a meeting to attend so bbye...
daadi:ohkk beta...
maan remove the phone from his ear
daadi:arey haan beta wo ladki ka naam geet hai...
maan didn't hear that & cut the call
maan came near geet were she was another kide...
geet sees maan & pull him with her...
 
geet lost her balance & even maan lost his balance & geet was on maan & maan catched geet by waist...maan could feel her raw skin & hands...
just den maan notice dat geet was just in his shirt maan gulped hard...
even geet gulped hard maan comes near geet & near & near..
 
his lips were just a inch away 4m geet he was about to kiss her but geet came back to her sence & got up in hurry..
geet:wo wo...maan hamey chal na chahiye
 
maan:haaan...
geet run to room to change her cloths
maan thought:kya kar raha tha tu maan r u out of ur mind...she is going to marry some1 else...u should b in ur limits don't cross them...ok i hv to stay away 4m geet
maan goes 4 shower & changes & comes down...
geet had already change & was ready to go...
geet:maan aap kahi ja rahe ho?
maan:haan geet we r going 4 shopping...otherwise it is hard 4 me to give u all my shirts u no...
geet:haan...i m nt asking also...ohk i will get my cell wait..
maan:hmmm
geet goes up & gets her cell phone & comes down..
geet:chaley?
maan:yup...chalo
maan & geet sat inside the car & turns towards shopping mall
they reach over shopping center & geet got excited she started roaming around & looked for nice clothes...
geet:maan howz dis?
maan:hmmm nce...
geet: & dis?
maan:hmmm nce...
maan was busy texting...
geet:maan...
maan:hmmm nce...
geet:maan...wht nce...
maan:hmmm very nce...
geet comes near maan & pitch him..
maan:ahaaa...geet...
geet:i asked u dat howz this dress whch i hv wore...& u r saying anything ha...
 
maan:oh..nahi..i mean dis is nce...ohkkk
 
geet smiled...
geet shopped half the mall & they were staying 4 billing...
geet:maan wait i forgot to take something u stand here i will come..
geet went & came with a pair of more tops
geet:arey maan wait..
she again goes & comes with shoes...
again geet:maan i forgot...
but b4 she completes maan catches her hand & says
maan:geet nt now baas u hv already taken half the mall now more...plze wait...
geet:bt i hv a thing to take...
 
maan:ohkk only 1 nw nt more f9...
geet:haan haan
geet came with a sunglasses billing was in progress 
lady:maam ur total amount is 1,65000$...
geet:her is my card...
maan was looking at geet...
maan:no geet wait i got u here for shopping u don't have to pay...
geet:no maan not like dat f9
maan:no geet no ways...
maan takes geets card & give his card to counter lady..
 
maan:bill it fast...
maan gives his body guards command to pick up shoping bag...

geet:maan i m hungry
maan:evn i m chalo we will hv somethng
geet & maan went inside a pizza house & enjoyed there pizza's & softy
geet:oh god maan i m done nt more...baas
maan:evn i m full now chaley fir ghar par...
geet:i think dat would be better & i hv some work to do also...
maan:hmmm
maan & geet were waiting for lift...
suddenly geet vision went to a red dot roaming on maan's chest she saw the source of light & den her eyes got wide seeing dat...
 
the gun fired a bullet & thuddd...

precap:how hv been got hurt geet or maan???











Posted: 10 years ago



hain somebody is there to kill Maan...

who is his enemy to do that...

I think Geet will get hurt...

waiting for next part...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


Posted: 10 years ago
amazing part dear
i think geet ko goli lagegi but maan ka enemy kon hai
thanks for the pm dear ðŸ˜Š
update soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm...4 answer u hv 2 wait 4 next update

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