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Krani IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 March 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Arranged Marriage Thread 7


Finally thread 7 is here! Sorry for the delay, I have actually been drowning under books and assignments and it's just the 2nd week of Uni. 

I honestly cannot thank the readers enough. Thank you so, so so much! I really appreciate all the love and encouragement you've given me! :D

SIlent readers - Drop in a like/comment. I know I haven't shifted a private blog, however please do not use that as an excuse to remain silent, I would love to hear from you. 


I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for quick fame and creativity for your work, I can tell you that stealing mine won't give you either. But what I do have are a very particular set of skills; skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you decide to not plagiarise my work, that'll be the end of it. I will not look for you, I will not pursue you. But if you plagiarise, I will look for you, I will find you, and I will kill you. (Taken, 2008)

Thanks for reading my work!


Edited by Krani - 01 May 2013 at 10:47am

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Krani IF-Dazzler

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Krani IF-Dazzler

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Reserved for story so far and trailer.

Edited by Krani - 16 March 2013 at 2:03am

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Krani IF-Dazzler

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I owe all my readers an apology - and it's going to be a rushed one because I literally have to go in 2 minutes.

But, I am TERRIBLY sorry for the lateness and for not replying to any of the comments from the previous chapter. I haven't actually read through them, mostly because I want my response to each of them to be fresh and therefore when I read I will reply accordingly and since Uni has been pouring all kinds of work at me, I've hardly got the chance.

Please excuse this delay of mine! I am really sorry!

Anyway, here is the next part. Sorry for any spelling mistakes, I am in a really bad rush, and I have to leave now!

Part 36

"I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will
 never forget how you made them feel." ' Maya Angelou
Khushi sat stiffly on the sofa, her hands folded on her lap, her fingernails digging into her flesh as she pretended to listen to NK, dropping in a laugh or two at appropriate moments, but her mind whirring with the happenings of the day. She could recall the way he had come towards her, his eyes glinting in unleashed fury, and she had prepared herself, but his breath on her cheek as he had come closer had unnerved her and he had found herself at a loss of what to say and do.
Every time she replayed the events in her head she swore that she could feel something switch in him as he had come closer. She looked over her shoulder and saw that he was still outside, leaning back in his chair, his leg folded over the other, while it bounced in agitation, his hand covering his mouth and his eyes narrowed in deep thought.
She wondered if he was recalling the same thing, and she bit her lip as she looked back at NK to see that he was still talking, and she had paid no attention.
Blinking and forcing her attention back on the conversation, she heard the last few words of what he had said,
"...So let's confirm it then?" He asked, his eyes dancing in amusement, and she wondered whether he knew that she had not heard a word. She smiled and nodded, too embarrassed to ask what she had missed, and he grinned wide as he got up, slinging his bag over his shoulder, and bent down to hug her.
"Alright Khushiji, I am off now. I will see you tomorrow at the Christmas lunch. Remember to do all your shopping today, and buy my present" He winked, and walked towards the door, calling out a goodbye to Arnav, who responded with a small wave, still not turning around.
Khushi bit her lip, feeling the warmth coming to her face as she realised she was all alone in the apartment with him. Clutching handfuls of her suit, she walked slowly towards the balcony door to see him staring off into the distance and she closed her eyes in nervousness.
Khushi took another step back, seeing him take another closer to her, and his shirt brushed against her suit causing her to suck in a breath, the determination continuing to shine through.
As he stepped closer, she saw something shift in his eyes and she felt the atmosphere change around them. Looking at him in confusion as his eyes darkened, she looked over his shoulder at the door that was too far away and back into his eyes which had narrowed slightly, and were constantly dropping down to her lips.
Unknowingly, she licked her suddenly dry lips, and took in a few deep breaths to calm her racing heart as she saw him dip his head low, his hair brushing against her forehead, their breaths starting to mingle. She swallowed hard, just as her heart started to race, half in nervousness and half in confusion as she saw his lips part. Her own eyes fell down to his lips and she felt her throat clench tight at the proximity of their bodies. She wanted to close her eyes as the proximity got too much for her, and she wanted to keep a heart against her beating heart to clam herself and remind herself that everything was fine, but she forced her eyes to stay open taking in his chest that was too close to hers, the hairs on his stubble that were so prominent, and if she had looked up into his eyes she knew she could have counted every eyelash in those light-coloured eyes which were no longer flashing in anger or annoyance.
 His arms were next to her, caging her in, and she felt her petite body getting swallowed by his large frame as he shuffled his feet closer to her. Khushi was aware of even the slightest of movement, but she found herself getting more and more confused as to what he wanted to do.  
She trusted that he would not do anything against her will, but a fear settled in the pit of her stomach wondering if she had mistook him. She looked back up at the eyes in nervousness, silently asking him if he would, and she saw another shift in his eyes, before a flash of anger and guilt shined through. He closed his eyes as he stepped away, and Khushi quickly sucked in a deep breath, thankful that the proximity was gone, her hands still plastered by her side, as she looked up at him through her lashes to see his eyes still closed, the muscle in his cheek jumping from anger.
He opened his eyes and Khushi continued to stare at him, waiting to see what he would do, but as he took another step away his arm brushed her own, and Khushi felt a shiver run down her spine as her breath hitched, and her hands automatically rubbed her arms to get rid of the goosebumps.
He turned around and walked away, and Khushi stared after him confused whether to follow him or continue to stay in the room.
One thing that she had determined from this was that he would not force himself on her, and for that she was thankful to her Devi Maiya.
Khushi opened the balcony door and stepped outside. She wasn't sure what she was doing but she wanted to talk to him, to get answers, to know what had happened in the bedroom. Even if he wanted to scream at her, hide from her or not answer her, she would stubbornly stand her ground till she got a satisfactory answer.
"Arnavji?" She hesitantly asked, looking at his still form which jerked to life as her voice came through and he whipped his head around his surprised eyes finding hers, before the guard was back in place and she could see he was thinking something.
She opened her mouth to continue talking when he cut her off by standing up abruptly.
"Wh-what?" Khushi asked confused, automatically taking a step back away from him, wondering if a repeat was going to happen, but he looked down at the ground, ran a hand through his hair and looked back at her, his face still devoid of any emotion, but she saw the same vulnerability shining through which she had seen in the morning when he had asked her to have breakfast.
"Will you go shopping with me?" He asked, and Khushi was momentarily left speechless at the fact that Arnav Singh Raizada had actually asked her instead of demanding.
She opened her mouth in shock, her eyes widening in slight disbelief, and she saw his eyes boring into hers, gauging her reaction.
Too dumbfounded by the change in him all she could do was nod her response, and was again taken aback by the slow smirk that lifted from the corner of his lips as he exhaled and walked back inside to the apartment, leaving Khushi on the balcony still reeling from the changes she had just seen.

Please let me know what you thought of this part!


PS: I know the pace has been incredibly slow, and I am sorry but I've just tried really hard to concentrate on emotions of each character. Anyway, the pace should pick up from the next part, promise!

Edited by Krani - 19 March 2013 at 9:42am

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First again! Big smile

I love how you use te taken reference.

Edited by V323 - 16 March 2013 at 2:04am

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Congrats for the new threadSmile

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IronButterfly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 March 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Yayy you updated. It's my birthday tomorrow so this is a great start =D Love this story.
Yes i agree, even though the pace is slightly slow but since it brings out the emotions in detail, it's fine =)
Both are highly affected by each other but atleast she's sure about the fact that he won't force himself on her. Which is an important part of a relationship.
Looking forward to read about their shopping trip!!

Edited by IronButterfly - 16 March 2013 at 2:19am

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pearls09 Groupbie

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congrats for new thread !!

Woah!!!!Thud!!! after the little smirk by Arnav..LOL

Edited by pearls09 - 16 March 2013 at 2:37am

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