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really liked the update...amazingly portrayed...continue soon...

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
nice one
happy that jeevs is fine OMG she is selling her assets to arrange for money to send viren to Australia. indeed its a big sacrifice 

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Awww this was absolutely adorable!!!
Love your style of writing, so simple and descriptive Smile
I loved these lines you wrote: 


"but deep in her heart,she was not at peace.Day and night,she thought about Viren. And the more she thought about him,the more deeply she fell in love with him.She had grasped that Viren had loved her for sure,reasoning that otherwise he would not have made such a big sacrifice for her,but she also sensed that probably he would never propse to her directly."

It was really heart-touching, so fabulous job and I hope you get a better response now Wink
Your story is definitely very cute and deserves more appreciation Heart


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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kays94

<font size="2" color="#000099">Awww this was absolutely adorable!!!</font>
<font size="2" color="#000099">Love your style of writing, so simple and descriptiveSmile</font>
<font size="2" color="#000099">I loved these lines you wrote:</font>
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"but deep in her heart,she was not at peace.Day and night,she thought about Viren. And the more she thought about him,the more deeply she fell ilove with him.Shped that Viren had loved her for sure,reasoning that otherwise he would not have made such a big sacrifice for her,but she also sensed that probably he would never propse to her directly."

<font color="#000099">It was really heart-touching, so fabulous job and I hope you get a better response nowWink</font>
<font color="#000099">Your story is definitely very cute and deserves more appreciationHeart</font>


Thanku so very much yaar! When people like u coment i feel like yess!!! Dere is somethin good in my story ! N ya its bcz f u n mgera3042,shobrakappor n some odrs olso dat i am able to right so greatly ! Smile

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
beautiful want to read more

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
superb update...loved it so much
it was full of emotions...beautifully written n way u described hw virika can sacrifice anything for each other was brilliant
the last line was amazing..loved it
thanx for pm..continue soon

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
awww just one word for ur update and that is AWESOMEClapClap

it was simplyyy amazing...Embarrassed
our jeevs loves viren sooo much...ur story defines true love dearHeart

m really excited to read ur next part...Tongue
plzzz do continue ur story...!!
i Heart it...!

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
Awesome story dear...
its going too good...

Viren sacrificed his career for her...
aww...

Jeevs...doing everything possible to help him... like... omg... she's so so good...

how can a lovestory be better...

Loved the way you expressed everything...
really hats off to you dear...

Please continue soon.. n PM me...

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