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Posted: 16 March 2013 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Congos updatosss sooonoosss

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Posted: 16 March 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
congrats on the new thread:)

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Posted: 16 March 2013 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Now let me really give it to you woman, you made me swoon with your story. It was something worth a treat to my senses [I swear]

I started with this story yesterday and would have completed in a go, if only my mind would have allowed it, but yes I did winded up in two days and 'm proud, I could Tongue

This is one of the rare fiction about Arnav & Khushi, I could almost feel butterflies fluttering in my heart, I was nothing but drooling over the fact- "Mohabbat Door Jaane Na De", for there's nothing like Nafrat in here, so I happily settled with the latter half of the Liner Smile

No matter I read it in a go, but I could totally take in the time you took to develop the story, you started it on June 21st after all. I must say you justified with every chapter so well, I'm in awe for your writing. Never once did the 'Need' of being physically close to each other felt overdone. 
[Believe me when I say that, I have read fictions, that were nothing, but complete disaster Dead]

I really loved the part where he tags her along to his own place of Solace and her being feisty for the White Koi Fish! It spoke volumes of 'Innocence'!
Again the conversation with her parents, who apparently are the stars was so moving, I was touched and smiled all through, as Arnav was all so engrossed, he never once thought it stupid to be explaining their action to something that would be believed only in theories!
 Day Dreaming

And of course where he tags her along to her own place, it was downright shocking. You would laugh at me, but can you believe I was actually imagining something of that sort happening to me one day, did I just say that out loud Shocked
I cannot explain, it was all so attaching and emotional in a go! 

It is so perfect and amazingly happening! You really did create an alternate universe for this story. Hats Off girl.

P.S- I would like to add, it is in long time that I'm typing in so much for a fiction on IF. And Let me tell you, Ritz wasn't wrong when she decided to be there forever with you and this FF.

Keep Posted Woman
Love & Hug
Radhika




Edited by fire_whisky - 16 March 2013 at 4:24pm

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ranogill

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
Please update soon ..it's nearly one month gone since last update...want to see nani's reaction ...congrats for the new thread 

Edited by ranogill - 17 March 2013 at 5:05pm

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Rhysenn

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
I just caught up with thread two, and brilliant job! Now it's Nani's entrance...can't wait!

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
Thx for this story...will read it soon!

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Posted: 17 March 2013 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
congo

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Posted: 18 March 2013 at 5:31am | IP Logged
Congrats.. :)

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