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Even though it was a short update it was sooo great that I cant express myself Clap
Hope Virman will solve their problems soon Big smile
The song was also brilliant ClapClap
Continue soonTongue 
Thanks for the pmSmile


Was it a short update?????
let me edit it I ws writing it for something else sorry wait two minutes

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edited on page 46 sorry I posted the wrong message

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first of all...sorry for late reply svty:(
i read it long before but was wasnt able to comment... sorry again...
 
now coming to update...
what should i say... u really left me speechless... the way u write their feelings...their pain.. its just fantastic... hatt's off to u anji...
ur ff is just fab like u...
 
u really made me cry again... how do u manage to write such awesomely...
loooved its every bit yaar...
 

Jeevika: I want my answer virat..

Virat: aap mere liye meri dusri maa ho.. Mom k baad mene aap hi ko apni maa mana hai…

awww...that was one hell awesome line in this part... virat so much repects and love jeevi like his mother... hope viren and jeevi bring them close again...
i cant see them crying more...it makes me cry too...
 
omg!!!!!!!who's call was that? is virat leaving home... or that maya madam is back... u are scaring me now anji... dont do this yaar... i m really dying to know who was at call...
 
and that manvi's song... wow... that was so fab...i could imagine them both singing with that pain and tears...
 
and this last few lines... really stole my heart... fantastic lines anji...
 
 Another Love gone wrong…

Another heart to Shattar…

Welcome to Reality…

Where feelings doesn't matters…

thnx 4 pm dear:)
will be waiting for next part... :)

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sorry for late reply
it was awesome update
continue soon
thanx for pm

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This part is fully n wholy dedicated to the love of my life Artii159 n Niaksharma...SmileSmile

                   ...Part 7...


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Viren ran from there controlling on his tears... How can he see his brother being hurt.. The worst feeling which he felt that time was that he can't do any thing for his brother. Jeevika went behind her...

 

In Virika's room…

 

Jeevika stood at the door seeing his husband sitting on the bed.. His hands were covering his face,, n he was crying badly… N voice of continues sobbings were clearely heared…

Jeevika ran towards him…

 

Jeevika: Virenji…

 

Viren looked at her n imeedietly took her in his embrace…

 

Viren: Jeevika yeh sub kya ho raha hai.. mera bhai toot raha hai aur me kuch nahi kar pa raha… M e kese us ki takleef bardaasht kar skta hun..Yeh lawyer jo har  ek ki problems door karta hai,, aaj apne hi bhai ka pain door nahi kar sakta.. me haar gaya jeevika.. me haar gaya

 

Viren again started crying badly..  Jeevika's shirt became wet by his tears…. Her heart was crying seeing his love in so much pain…

 

Jeevika: Virenji plz…Aap chup ho jaeye me aap ko ese nahi dekh sakti.. Plz… (she also started to cry)…

 

Viren.. plz kuch karo… me nahi dekh sakta yeh sub.. nahi dekh sakta…

 

Jeevika broke the hug n looked at him.. she wipes his tears..

 

Jeevika: Virenji aap hi toot jaenge tou virat ko kon sambhalega.. Use aap ki zarurat hai..

 

Viren: me kya karun.. plz help me.. is se pehle me b toot jaaun.. kuck karo na…

 

Jeevika: Aap fikar mat kijie.. me aaj hi mannu se bat karti hun.. Plz aap ro-iye mat…

 

Viren stopped crying n looked at her lovingly.. She is so scared by all these stuffs but here she is the one who is concolling him…Who is being there for him strongly.. That's the women power.. she is really a person who can't do anything herself..but if the situation comes 4 being strong.. no-one is more stronger than her.. not even men…

 

Jeevika: Chaliye ab jaldi se mjhe mere naughty virenji wali smile dijie…

 

Viren: (smilling) R u sure Mr.s Vadhera.. (cuming close to her)…

 

Jeevika: (smilling) Kya virenji aap b…

 

Both smiled n hugged each other tightly…

 

Here virat n maanvi both were standing trying to absorb their own feelings.. Both were looking at each other keenly…

 

Maanvi: (unknowingly)  Buhat acha gaate ho tum…

 

Virat: Ooh… tou kam se kam yeh tou tumhe mere bare mein yad hai.. mjhe tou laga k tum meri har baat bhul gae hogi..

 

Maanvi: Virat me tumhe kese bhul sakti hun..  Me tou………………………….

 

She stopped when suddenlythe flashbacks of that meeting clicked in her mind…

 

Maanvi(she said rudely) Han tou mere paas itna fuzul waqt nahi jo fuzul cheezen yaad karti phirun

 

Virat; (he was not shocked this time)… I know it better now.. Tum kitini heartless ho yeh me ab achi tarha samjh gaya hun.. so dun justify it…

 

Maanvi ignored looking in his eyes…

 

Virat: Ab mere paas pura din nahi hai tum par waist karne k liye….. so just leave my way…

 

Manvi gave him the place to leave from there.. not only there but also from her heart

 

Maanvi: I dun know whats the worst feeling.. being the one with the broken heart or the person that breaks the heart.. Dono situations mein tarapna tou mjhe hi hai…

 

After few hours

 

Maanvi was working in her room when jeevika came..

 

Jeevika: maanu mjhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai..

 

Maanvi knew that what she wanted to talk…

 

Maanvi: di plz me abi kaam kar rahi hun.. baad mein…

 

Anger grew on jeevika's face…

 

Jeevika: (holding her from her shoulders n turned her towards herself)…. Mene kaha abhi bat karni hai mutlab abhi karni hai…

 

Maanvi looked at her.. she never saw her di this much angry..

 

Jeevika: Tu yeh sub kyun kar rahi hai???

 

Maanvi: kya kar rahi hun me di..

 

Jeevika": zyada nanhi mat ban maanu… tu buhat achi tarha jaanti hai k me kis bare mein baat kar rahi hun..

 

Maanvi: di plz mjhe abhi koi baat nahi karni..

 

Now it was enough 4 jeevika to hear…

 

Jeevika: (screaming) Tujhe kya lagta hai k har cheez teri marzi se hogi…

 

Maanvi was beyond shocked…

 

Maanvi: Di…

 

Maanvi: Chup bilkul chup.. aaj me bolungi aur tu sunegi… tujhe ho kya gaya hai..har cheez mein apni manmaani,, apni marzi… tune virat ko kya se kya kar diya… Us ne tujhe apni jaan se b barh kar chaha aur tune us ki chahat ka yeh sila diya.. yeh… Us ne tera har qadam par saath diya..  apna sub kuch tujhe maana.. har khushi,, har pal apna tujhe diya… teri khushi mein vo khush,, tere dukh mein vo dukhi….. U not only hurted him.. u destroyed him… Y did u do this?? Y??? Kyun kar rahi hai tu esa.. aaj ghar mein sub pareshan hain tou sirf teri waja se.. Tujhe pata hai.. aaj mene pehli baar virenji ko itna rote dekha.. Ab bolti kyun nahi.. chup kyun hai.. bolna…

 

Maanvi turned opposite to jeevika… jeevika was shocked yet hurt.. her maanu,, her own lil sister did this.. she was not in the state to react…

 

Jeevika: Mil gaya mjhe mera javaab.. bus itna yaad rakhna k tune virat ko jitni takleef puhanchai haina.. itna bura tou koi apne dushman k saath b nahi karta… mene kabhi socha b nahi tha k meri behan esi hogi… par ab yakeen agaya.. Duniya mein tou log taraste hain pyaar k liye aur tu… tera pyaar tere saamne hai aur tu use apnana  hi nahi chahti…..  me itni heartless larki ki behan kese ho sakti hun..

 

Maanvi looked at her.. not believing  her ears..

 

Maanvi: Di…

 

Jeevika: Di nahi Jeevika… Aur aaj se tu b mere liye maanvi hai.. mannu nahi.. Kya koi tujhe kabhi maaf kar paaega.. kitna dil dukhaya hai tu ne virat ka.. ab mjhse kabhi bat mat karna…

 

Jeevika went from there but stopped n looked at her mannu who was standing expressionless…

 

Jeevika: (to herself).. M sorry mannu par mjhe yeh karna parega.. shayad yeh karne se tu mjhe apni dil ki bat bata de.. mjhse apna dukh share kar le… Plz m really sorry

 

N she left fron there…

 

Maanvi: kya itna hi trust tha aap ko apni behan par.. aap ne mjhse yeh sub kaha mjhe yakeen nahi hota.. par koi baat nahi.. jahan itna kuch saha wahan ek aur takleef sahi… waise b sub se door hi jana hai… acahi baat hai koi yaad nahi karega mjhe.. Thank u di.. (smilling) sorry jeevika…

 

In virika's room…

 

Jeevika: Are virenji aap kahan ja rahe hain…

 

Viren: Vo jeevika me maanvi k paas……

 

She cut her in-between..

 

Jeevika: nahi virenji aap kahin nahi jaaenge..,,

 

Viren: par jeevika…

 

Jeevika: me gae thi us k paas usne kuch nahi kaha mjhse.. me jaanti hun k yeh sub karne k peeche us ki koi na koi majburi hai.. mene aaj us se vo sub keh diya jo me kehne k bare mein kabhi soch b nahi sakti thi.. Pr yeh sub karna zaruri tha.. ab shayd vo mjhse apne dil ki baat share kar sake..

 

Viren: aur agar ab b us se kuch nahi kaha tou..

 

Jeevika was now quite..

 

Viren: me ab us se apne tareeqe se baat karunga…

 

Jeevika: Thik hai..

 

Viren: me abhi aya…

 

In maanvi's room…

 

Viren: kya me andar aa sakta hun??

 

Maanvi: are yeh b koi puchne wali bat hai jiju.. aaye na…

 

Viren: kya kar rahi thi??

 

Maanvi: kuch nahi bus bethi hui tha.. ap ko kuch kaam tha…

 

Viren: han vo tumse kuch baat karni thi.. Betho..

 

Maanvi: G…

 

Both sat on the couch,,,

 

Silence filled in the room.. than after sumtime viren spoke n directly hit to the point…

 

Viren: yeh sub karne k peeche kya majburi hai tumhari…

 

Maanvi:(looked at him) aap kis bare mein baat kar rahe hain jiju..

 

She again acted as she is confused like the same way when jeevika came to talk to her…

 

Viren: virat aut tumhari…

 

Maanvi: mjhe koi bat nahi karni.. me us  se pyar nahi karti. That's it…

 

Viren: tou yeh sub meri aankhon mein dekh kar kyun nahi kehti…

 

Viren cupped her face…

 

Viren: maanvi meri taraf dekho..

 

She looked at him…

 

Viren: tumhari aankhon mein saaf nazar aa raha hai k tum virat se kitna pyaar karti ho..

 

Tears rolled down her cheecks,…

 

Viren: mere liye jese virat hai wese hi tum b ho… me virat ka dukh nahi dekh sakta tou tumhara kese dekh sakta hun… kya tum apna dard mjhse b share nahi karogi????

 

Maanvi: jiju plz..

 

Viren: tumhe jeevika ki qasam maanvi.. plz batao mjhe…

 

Maani was now trapped.. she had not a single way to escape now.. so she made up her mind to tell every thing to her loving jiju.. She started to cry n hugged viren tightly…

 

Maanvi: (crying badly) Jiju…

 

Viren: han maanvi batao mjhe kya hua hai.. batao na…

 

Maanvi: (still hugging),, Vo jiju us din ap ki aur di ki anniversary ki party k do din baad…..  (same party in which she confessed her love to virat,, which was decribed in 1st n 2nd chapter)

 

In virat's room…

 

Virat was sitting on his bed.. his head was resting on bed rest..

 

Virat: mjhe pata hai k me jo karne jar aha hun us se ghar mein koi khush nahi hoga… lekin me yeh karunga.. me tumhe bataunga k jab apna pyaar ruthta hai tou kesa feel hota hai…mjhe pata hai k tum mjhse pyaar nahi karti.. lekin me yeh karunga.. aur mera dil keh raha hai k is se tumhe dard b zarur hoga.. Par kya me tumhe takleef de paaunga???? Dekh paaunga tumhe takleef mein???

 

 A song was being played on the radio.. virat's mind automatically went there at the song.. he was feeling that this song was made 4 him… only 4 him…

 

                                   Faryaad kya Karen hum,, kise daastan sunaen…

                                  Hum dil se jise chahen,, use kese bhul jaeen..

                                                   Ohooo…

 

                                  Charon taraf andhera hain,, khushiyan na raas aaen…

                                 Hum dil se jise chahen,, use kese bul jaaen…

                                                     Ohooo…

 

He remembered the moment when she left him…

 

                            Do dil mein doori hogae,, khushiyan adhuri hogaen

 

Pleading in his mind to maanvi,, to come back…

 

                           Kaisi majburi hogae,, Sun le mere saathiya

                                 Sun le mere saathiya…

 

                            Dhaga ho tou me torun,, darya ho tou me morun…

                           Chahat na chori jae… Sun le mere saathiya…

                                      Sun le mere saathiya…

 

 

                         Waqt tham se gae,, Dur hum hogae…

                       Hooo,, kya khata hogae…

 

Tears were rolling down his cheecks…

 

                      Khamosh hain ab aankhon se aur ashk chalak jaen

                     Hum dil se jise chahen use kese bhul jaaen…

 

He was cursing his fate that y his fate not wrote his name in the lines of his palm…

 

   

                Qismat mein likhi judai,, melon melon tanhai…

               Chahat b,, raas na aai… Sun le mere saathiya…

              Ashkon ki dhara jhuley.. dard-o-gubaar sub bhule

             Dar hai k mout na chule…

                    Sun le mere saathiya…

                   Sun le mere saathiya…

 

          Tukre tukre hue,, khuwab-o-dil k mere…

         Manzilen kho gaen…

 

                At that time he was cursing just one thing n that was love who broke him n gave him only one thing.. pain,, pain n pain..

 

             Chahat bari ajeeb hai.. hanste hue rulaey…

            Hum dil se jise chahen,, use kese bhul jaaen…

             Ohooo….

 

 

  Y destiny always plays cruel games to the people who loves… Is love truly a curse??? Dun the lovers have the right to live happily with the person whom they  loves witout any separation n hurt…

 

KYA SACHA PYAAR PAANE K LIYE DARD SEHNA AUR JUDA HONA ZARURI HAI????

 

 

                Its really hard to forget sumone…

                Who gave u so much to remember…

 

 

M really sorry plz dun beat me.. I know I did a very bad thing to stop the conversation of viren n maanvi in-between… But there was not a proper part of virat so I made the part of him n stopped their conversation….     But I promise next part mein everything will b reveiled….

 

N B READY 4 THE BIGGEST SHOCK…

 

How was it guys.. I know it's a crap.. M also not at all satisfied with it.. Its just a filler part… Sorry about that..

 

But plz tell me how was it?? Hope u all will enjoyed it.. waiting 4 the response…


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Posted: 06 April 2013 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Heyyy yippeee i m 1st...
Thanx fr the updt anji...its damn awesome as always...n that true u r very bad bcs actually stopped at a wrong place...not fair...but never mind...jeeman convo was very well written...after bhabhi-devar now its time to jiju-saali adorable bond...viren was a brother figur to manvi...egerly waiting to know wat happened so big which forced to take such a exptream dicision...n wat virat is planning to do...i m scare...any ways cont soon

Edited by samu_khamkar - 06 April 2013 at 10:28am

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aww its was a dhassu update dude just loved it thanks fr the pm and update soon

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superb se upar wala update
continue soon
and thanx for pm

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